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Question 3 What have you learned from your audience
feedback?
Rough Cut Feedback -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GMC99kJ43w
The feedback from our rough cut was mainly positive. They liked
the whole concept of the film and the way that our villain stalked
the female both online and in real life, as some films tend to
focus on one or the other. They liked the way that we had used a
green tint to represent the jealousy our male character has towards
his former lover. When we added this in although we knew that the
green represented jealously we were not sure whether other audience
members would make this link. We therefore asked this as one of our
feedback questions and thankfully that particular audience made the
connection. This taught me that when you are watching back your
movie you have to try and watch it from an audiences point of view
and not that of someone who has made it. Audience feedback is
curtail because they are the people that are going to go and see
our film, we may like it because we have filmed and edited it but
that does not mean it will necessarily appeal to the target
audience that we are aiming for. Our classmates also suggested that
we increase the length of our trailer as they felt it was a bit
short. Although I was aware that it needed to be made longer the
fact that the audience picked up on that was important to me as it
showed that even seeing it for the first time, they were aware it
was too short. We as a group therefore made making our trailer
longer our next big priority. The main things that I learned from
the rough cut
feedback were that the concept was good but maybe a few of the
transitions between shots could have been a bit cleaner.
Storyboard Feedback -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qe5DM_xsSfA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDYdo1YO_0Q
- Storyboard Feedback- Storyboard
The audience feedback we received on the shot in the caf where
the girl seems disinterested was very positive, so we decided to
keep this shot.
The feedback we received was that it might be difficult to film
this scene in the station. We listened to the feedback and decided
to film the scene at the train barriers, also altering what
happened in the scene. He no longer comes up behind her but stares
across.
Our feedback was that this was one of the strongest scenes in
our trailer. Although not mentioned in the feedback we decided to
use a point of view shot from the eyes of the male character. This
turned out to be very effective as it makes the audience feel like
its them who are stalking the girl, this point of view shot is my
favourite shot within the trailer.
We originally were going to film the man walking behind the
women in the high street. But I had the idea whilst we were filming
that it might be more effective if I looked down on our female
character as she walked into the tunnel. In the end I think it
looked effective.
Survey Monkey Feedback
The feedback that we received from the Survey Monkey was on the
whole mainly positive. The main points were that they liked the way
that our poster and magazine cover linked back to our trailer, and
this promoted our brand well they felt. They liked our use of music
and how we had linked a number of tracks together and the way that
we had made it fit in with our shots. One point that I thought was
important was that 100% of people whom took part in our survey
understood the green tint. I believe this was important as I was
slightly concerned whether audiences had made this link. They felt
our poster was stronger than our magazine cover. From this
particular part of the feedback I learnt audiences liked the
concept of our movie and understood the deeper message behind the
storyline. I found the survey monkey feedback very helpful as
people were likely to be more honest as they werent giving the
feedback to our face. By looking into the results of the survey I
can clearly see patterns in what the audiences liked about our
finished product and what we could possibly do to improve it,
whether that be our trailer, magazine cover or poster.
Soundtrack Feedback
The feedback that we received for the music within our trailer
was mainly positive. When we received the feedback on our rough cut
we had not included much music at that point we had barely added
any music and
that was one of the main points raised in our rough cut that
music needed to be added. After the same people had seen the final
cut with all the music included they said that it really made a big
difference and enhanced the trailer, especially at the end when the
choice of music increased the tension within the scene where the
kidnapping actually occurred. They liked how we had not just used
one track but picked music from all the tracks we liked and edited
them together until we were happy with the finished product. When
we asked them what they would possibly change about the music they
said in the scene in the shop when the transition between the 2
tracks takes place, when the stalking starts, they suggested making
this transition all as one as we had a little gap when one track
had finished but the other hadnt started. We took on board the
audience feedback and almost merged the end of the two tracks
together so that one finished and the other began simultaneously. I
believe without this audience feedback we may not have spotted
this. But now when I watch that sequence back I can see how much of
an improvement it has made to our trailer. One bit of sound that
they particularly liked was at the end of our trailer when we had a
rewind before a few big beats to which the credits appeared and
disappeared too. They felt this looked very professional and liked
the way that we had matched our music to the titles appearing.
Before our end sequence only featured the villain coming from
behind, but after audience feedback we decided to add the rewind
and although this is something I had not originally thought of I
now think it to be one of the strongest parts of our trailer.
Ident Feedback -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YK6HWU3zrAk
All though we did no form of formal feedback for our ident, when
it was completed I went around the class asking people what they
thought of it. They liked the Jupiter idea and having it in outer
space with the camera panning over to Jupiter to then reveal the
text appearing on top of the planet. They liked the way that the
background faded first, leaving just Jupiter Productions against a
black background as they felt this sent out a clear message about
our production company. They also liked the music we had chosen to
use and how the pace of this increased as the camera panned towards
Jupiter.
Class Response to Final Cut Screening -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ytLxUJ_XIK8
Once we had completed the final cut of our obsession we showed
it too everyone in a class screening. As a class they really liked
the whole concept and the way in which we almost told a story
within our trailer. From them first meeting to there relationship
breaking up, they felt we had clearly demonstrated a real change in
the character of our male from the beginning to the end of our
trailer. One thing they said that we could possibly do to improve
would be to have included a montage of quick fast paced action
shots, perhaps of the girl running before fading to black. Although
this was something we as a group originally wanted to do after
assessing all the other shots that we would need in order to have
enough footage we found there was not enough time to film all of
the shots required for a montage. Although if we had a greater time
period in which to film our trailer this would be something that I
would consider doing.
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