Topic: What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of television?

Nowadays, in the modern life, TV is considered a widely-used device in most of families {household}. It is really becoming {or “It has become} a close friend not only to [many] adults, but also to [lots of] children. However, there are both pros and cons relating to this problem {mình chưa thấy bạn chỉ ra nó là problem nên ở đây nên dùng “phenomena” hiện tượng}. In this essay, I will discuss some of [the] reasons why the parents should allow their children to use it [television] and some of drawbacks.Let’s begin by looking at the positives of the fact that the [many] children are [so] keen on spending a lot of time in front of [a] TV. It is true that watching TV is one of the most interesting way[s] {đã one of thì phải dùng ways} to relax after a strenuous course or a long day in {at cũng ok} school. There are a plenty [number] of channels to name a few: {such as/namely cũng ok} Cartoon Network, Disney Channel[,] [and so on]… Secondly, by watching TV, the children can get a lot of information. What I mean by this is that they can get some skills such as [singing, dancing, and speaking a foreign language] learning to sing, learning to dance or studying foreign languages and so on. Beside[s], instead {instead là một từ liền} of going out or playing useless games, they can sit quietly in front of TV, and [allowing] their parents can [to] cook or do anything they want [without worrying about their beloved children are being spoiled by some violent-provoking games] {viết loại câu reason-result và thêm ý mình add đằng sau để làm rõ nghĩa và câu văn hay và cố kết hơn}.Turning [to] the other side of this situation. [Spending an excessive period of time watching TV without their parents’ control and guidance] Lacking of adult’s control, the children tend to become a “Couch – Potato[couch potato]” who won’t [are not interested in] do[ing] anything else, except [but] watching TV hour by hour . [This] that might cause [them] to neglect to pay attention to their [studies] study.Moreover, Watching the screen for a long time could be not only harmful [not only] {chú ý cấu trúc câu parallel ở đây} to their eyes but also to the develop[ment] of their personalities {personalities đếm được}. In other words, they may be eager to be reserved or [increase the likelihood to develop] autism. This [by no mean is the expectation of] won’t be expected by their parents. In addition, there is a handful of [a variety of] programs which contains some matters that will [are] be inappropriate [to] their age.In summary, the parents need to weigh up between two side[s] of watching TV [before allowing their children to spend time in front of the screen]. Personally, I believe that [by] having of [a] good control, they won’t [will not need to] worry about [TV imposing many negative effects on] the negatives with their children.