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CCOT Overview

• CCOT = Comparison of time periods

= Continuities & Changes

= Major Theme of Historical Analysis

= Cause & Effect essay

• Read the ? Carefully

• Determine: theme, areas, and time periods to

compare

• Be flexible in your organization:

geographic region

PERSIA categories,

changes & continuities

chronologically

3 Parts:

• Introduction

• Body

• Conclusion

Write a thesis statement that answers the following

prompt:

Analyze the major social and cultural changes and

continuities that have occurred in your life over the

last ten years.

1. Answer the prompt ; don’t just re-state it

2. Be specific – state the specific changes and continuities

that occurred over the time period

3. Give the specific dates that they are asking you to discuss

4. Support your thesis with accurate historical evidence;

5. Show CCOT using relevant historical facts; contrast this with

the starting date and what stayed the same

6. Answer All parts of the question

7. Analyze the process of CCOT and explain how and why it

occurs

•Analyze at least 1 reason for a change or continuity for each

country or time period the prompt specifies

•Don’t just describe the change, spend some time explaining

why the change/continuity occurred

Most effective if you use a cause & effect chain

“________ occurred because. ____ is significant

because….”

• Support the thesis with relevant historical facts

• Contrast change against either the starting point or something

that didn’t change

•If you have questions with multiple themes or

geographic areas, you will also need to complete a

chart for each area

• Actually doing a compare/contrast & CCOT essay

Use the time periods as your organizing

principle

2007 CCOT: “Analyze major changes and continuities in the

formation of national identities in ONE of the regions listed

below from 1914 to the present. Be sure to include evidence

from specific countries in the region selected.

Middle East

Southeast Asia

Sub-Saharan Africa

Use the time periods as your

organizing principle

2007 CCOT: “Analyze major changes and continuities in the

formation of national identities in ONE of the regions listed

below from 1914 to the present. Be sure to include evidence

from specific countries in the region selected.

Middle East

Southeast Asia

Sub-Saharan Africa

Use the time periods as your

organizing principle

Use the time periods as your organizing principle

Changes

1914Present

Continuities

1914 Present

NAME: _____________________________________________________ PERIOD: _______ DATE: ________________

CHART: CHANGE OVER TIME

COMPARISON THEMES (SCRIPTED):________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________

TIME PERIODS: _____________________ _______________________ ________________________

THESIS

BEGINNING TIME

PERIOD

Describe First

Theme

Describe Second

Theme

Describe Third

Theme

Comparison to Wider

World

INTERIM TIME

PERIOD

Key Changes and/or Continuities in each theme from

previous period

Analyze the reasons for

change or continuity

Comparison to Wider

World

END

TIME PERIOD

Key Changes and/or Continuities in each theme from

previous periods

Analyze the reasons for

change or continuity

Comparison to Wider

World

CONCLUSION

+ + +

assert

compliment

demonstrate

embrace

exemplify

illustrate

indicate

portray

reflect

reveal

signify

strengthen

symbolize

undermine

change

continue

eventually

Immediately

at once

at this point

next

afterward soon

then ironically

impressive

despicable

contemplative

authoritative

humble

creative

subtle

ironic

rude

“Power Words” for Analytical Writing

Verbs Adverbs/Time Qualifiers Adjectives

traditional

proud

very

lots

big

small

transform

evolved

emerge

revolutionize

Connect

many

now

gradually

later

haughty

dutiful

2007 CCOT: “Analyze major changes and continuities in the

formation of national identities in ONE of the regions listed

below from 1914 to the present. Be sure to include evidence

from specific countries in the region selected.

Middle East

Southeast Asia

Sub-Saharan Africa

Use the time periods as your

organizing principle

Thesis:

“There were many changes and continuities in the formation of

national identities in the Middle East from 1914 to the present.”

“From 1914 to present day, the borders of Middle East nations

have stayed the same while the ideals with have changed until

national identities were formed.”

“From 1914 to the present, there was a growth in national

identities in the region of Sub-Saharan Africa. Ghana is a key

example of the growth of Negritude in the region. A continuity

for discussion is that most of the region remained in a state of

poverty.”

Just repeats ?; be more specific

Has a chg & a cont but it is wrong; borders have changed.

All true– cont is related to national identity = AP!

Thesis:

“From 1914 to the present, Sub-Saharan Africa has become

independent nations with growing political democracy while still

having to work through social unrest between people of different

groups within the same nation.”

“There are many changes and continuities in SEA after 1914. The

world war fueled independence movements. Regardless of political

changes, Buddhism remained a constant reminder of traditional

values in the new nations.”

“After WWI, nationalism was an important factor in the growing

independence movements of Sub-Saharan Africa. Changes include

the desire for independence and self-reliance while a continuity was

artificial borders which often cut across tribal ties, creating fractured

communities.”

Good! Social cont & political chg

Good! Relig cont & political chg

Good! Geographic/social cont & political chg

Evidence:

“Change continued to happen…” “There was continuous change…”

“In 1914, China was still under British influence and in truth had lost

much of the influence it once had over SEA.”

“European influence remained constant throughout the time period in

Sub-Saharan Africa.”

Vague; change is change; cont is lack of change, not

perpetual change

China is in E. Asia; off topic

True statement but it isn’t linked to national identity = AP!

Evidence:

“Many Sub-Saharan countries gained independence after WWII;

however, European influence remained constant throughout the time

pd

“Many Sub-Saharan countries gained independence after WWII.

However, European influence remained throughout the time period

and complicated efforts at nation building.”

“Social unrest and tensions remained a problem throughout Sub-

Saharan Africa. Tensions between European and Africans which had

been a problem since the Europeans’ arrival didn’t change.”

Minimally acceptable; still a little vague

Concise, relevant, and solid. Addresses the issue of

national identity = good writing!

Excellent = analyzes all of the question’s issues: global

context, causation, change, continuity, effects, content

Industrialization CCOT

Directions: You are to answer the following question: You should spend five

minutes organizing or outlining your essay. Write an essay that:

• Has a relevant thesis and supports that thesis with appropriate

historical evidence

• Addresses all parts of the question

• Uses historical context to show change over time and/or continuities

• Analyzes the process of change over time and/or continuity

Describe and analyze the impact of industrialization from 1750 to

1914 on ONE of the following countries. Be sure to discuss

continuities as well as changes.

United Kingdom

China

Japan

Russia

Ottoman Empire

Thesis

3 Body Paragraphs

1 for each tm pd

topic sentences for each paragraph

connectors to explain change/continuity

Conclusion

Sample Continuity-Change-Over-Time Essay:

Directions: You are to answer the following question. In writing your essay, you

should use the first 5 minutes planning your essay. Your essay should:

• Have a relevant thesis supported by appropriate historical evidence.

• Answer all parts of the question.

• Use historical context to show change and/or continuity over time

Explain how the globalization of commerce brought about major

continuities and changes over time among the peoples of two of the

regions listed below between 1450 and 1750. Note major

developments, exchanges, shifts of power, and demographic

changes.

• Eurasia

• Africa

• The Americas

Major Developments: You might include the following topics in your

discussion about the globalization of commerce between 1450-1750

• Scientific Revolution

• Acceleration of change, cultural diffusion

• Columbian Exchange

• Transoceanic linking of major regions

• Shift in trade routes from the Mediterranean to Atlantic

• Globalization of trade

• Spanish conquer/colonize Central/South America

• British in North America

• Dutch & Portuguese in Africa, Asia, and island nations

• Global demand for Asian goods

• Global demand for African slaves

• Capitalism emerges as dominant system for

Organizing labor

Production

Trade

• Urbanization

Exchanges

• Europe to Americas:

slavery, plantation system

Disease

Genocide

Plants: wheat, melons, grapes

Animals: cattle, pigs, goats, chickens, donkeys, horses

Western clothing

Carpentry, locksmithing

Wheeled vehicles

Organized education

Christianity, specifically Roman Catholicism

Spanish, Portuguese, & English language and culture predominated

Africa to Americas

• Plants: bananas, coconut palms, coffee, sugar cane, okra

• Farming methods

• Cooking styles

• Ironworking

• African languages and culture

Americas to Europe

• Gold

• Silver

• Other jewels

• Plants: corn, beans, squash, tomato, chocolate

Europe to Asia

• Cartography

• Astronomy

• Mathematics

• Plants: corn, potatoes from Andes Mts.

• Christianity, specifically Roman Catholicism

Asia to Europe

• Guns

• Gunpowder

• Silk

• Porcelain

• Metalwork

• Block printing

• Paper

Shifts of Power

• Spain = most powerful European country

Conquered/colonized Americas

Seized Philippines (link to Asia)

Gold and silver from the Americas disrupted the economy,

price revolution

• Portuguese power declined globally

• Chinese

Ming Dynasty’s power declined

Qing Dynasty’s power rose

• French power declines in

India

Africa

North America

• African power declined = negative effects of the slave trade

• British power rose in

India

Africa

• European competition in the Caribbean, North America, & Africa

Dutch

French

Spanish

English

Demographics

• Slave trade ravages African populations

• Enslaved Africans transported to Americas

• Catastrophic decline of Native Americans

Genocide

Enslaved

Disease

• Migration of Europeans to Americas

• Global population increases

Agricultural Revolution, higher food production

Better crops

More known about disease

Other Points to Consider

Mercantilism

• Mother country must export more than it imports

• Colonies provide

Resources

Raw materials

Markets for goods exported from the mother country

• European effort to control & manage

Regulation of trade

Selling of trade monopolies

Establishment of protective tariffs

Economic Changes in Europe

• Upsurge in prices (price revolution)

• Population increase

Greater demand for goods

More need for services

Urbanization

• Rise of modern capitalism

Directions: You are to answer the following

question. You should spend 5 minutes

organizing or outlining each essay. Write an

essay that:

•Has a relevant thesis and supports that

thesis with appropriate historical evidence

• addresses all parts of the question

• makes direct, relevant comparisons

Change Over Time Essay

Change Over Time Essay

Cities were an important part of the expanding

world trade in the period 600 to 1450. Discuss the

major similarities and differences between two of the

following cities, involving their economic as well as

non-economic characteristics:

• Guangzhou

• Timbuktu

• Venice

• Baghdad

The Thesis

• tells the reader your argument

• previews the direction your essay is heading in

• sets up the body paragraphs

Both Constantinople and Timbuktu were both important

trade centers between 600-1450 C.E; however, they were

two very dissimilar cities. Constantinople was a major

crossroads for Eurasian trade routes. Several diverse

cultures interacted in Constantinople. Timbuktu had

less cultural diversity because it was located on the

outskirts of the world trade system. Their different

geographic locations reflected their distinct commercial

diversity.

The thesis

• tells the reader your argument

• addresses all parts of the question

• each of the 3 pts. will be one of the body

paragraphs

The two cities are far more different than they are

alike, particularly in regard to their roles in world

trade, their diversity, and their goods.

Comparison Paragraphs:

• Make a comparison

• Similarities & Differences

• Focuses on the time period

• Discusses economic & non-economic factors

A major difference between the two cities was in the goods

that each city traded. Constantinople’s wealth was based on

goods that arrived mainly from Asia, or from the North and

occasionally Europe, as well. On the other hand, Timbuktu,

largely traded with the North African coast. Goods from the

Middle East and beyond were available also.

Relevant, direct comparison

Each example of the comparison should take up a

paragraph

Can group smaller examples together

Argue in favor of one similarity or difference

Spend a little time acknowledging the option not

selected = recognizing the “opposite” of the thesis

No 2 things are totally alike or totally different

Keep the alternative discussion brief – don’t want to

detract from your overall argument & thesis

Historical substantiation

• Prove the difference/similarity

• Offer specific evidence

As a result of their respective geographies, the two cities were

quite different in their levels of diversity. Constantinople was

mostly a Greek city, but as a former capital of the Roman

Empire, it had many Latin influences. It was also close

enough to the Middle East to have a distinctive Persian

element to its culture, such as the custom of separating men

and women in church. Hellenized peoples from Egypt and

Syria, along with Europeans, Russians, and Muslims (like

Ibn Batuta) could all be found in the city’s streets. As all of

these people came to trade, they could all be found in the

varying “quarters” of the city. Timbuktu, however, was much

harder to get to. Its population was mostly African – i.e.,

peoples from the empires of Ghana, Mali, and surrounding

areas. Muslims came in greater numbers from North Africa

and the Middle East, especially after Mansa Musa’s hajj to

Mecca between 1324-1325.

Yet, despite its ever-growing influence as an economic,

cultural, and even religious center (it had several

universities and many mosques by 1450) its level of cultural

diversity was much less than that of Constantinople. There

were, however, some similarities between the two cities.

Obviously, both relied heavily on the Islamic world for

trade goods during most of this period. Both were capitals

of their respective empires, economically and culturally, as

well as politically. Finally, Islamic forces captured both

cities: Constantinople in 1453 (by the Ottoman Turks) and

Timbuktu in 1590 (by Muslims from Morocco).

Conclusion

• Restate the thesis and main points

• Reminds the reader of what you were saying

• Do not include any new information in your

concluding paragraph

• All supporting ideas should be included in your

body paragraphs

In conclusion, the differences between

Constantinople and Timbuktu outweighed their

similarities, particularly in regard to their roles in

world trade, their diversity, and their goods.

Constantinople was central to the Eurasian trade

routes of the era, whereas Timbuktu was on the

fringe of the world trading system. As a result,

although there were many peoples and cultures

represented in Constantinople, Timbuktu had fewer

influences. Finally, the products for trade in these

cities were as different as their geographies suggest.

Both cities, however, were important centers of trade

in the period between 600-1450 C.E.