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The Poetry in PitchingIt is difficult to get the news from poems yet men die miserably every day for lack of what is found there. -William Carlos William from “Asphodel, That Greeny Flower”
Clarity
Jackson Spalding University Elective on media relations by Ivy LeDecember 16, 2011
Relevance
Beauty
4 Audiences for every pitch
1.Journalist2.Journalist’s boss3.The outlet’s audience4.Your client
People, not targets.
News Values• Change, Conflict, Counter-intuition = 3 C’s
shortcut• From Grady College of Journalism at UGA:
• Timeliness• Proximity• Controversy • Impact aka consequence• Unusual Nature• Helpfulness• Celebrities• Human Interest• Community issues• Trends
Finding the Story
• Interviewing humans
• Analyzing raw data• Spotting trends, 3
incidents• Inductive
arguments and finding evidence
• Deductive argument and syllogisms
Normal Distribution Graph
If something’s not “normal” and
you know why, you’ve got a
story.
Do you have a story?
• Is it narrative or descriptive? Common plots:o Coming of ageo Odyssey o Underdog
• Does it have a beginning, middle, and an end?
• Are you moved?• Is something at
stake?
Telling the StoryPitch Package
• Pitch Email• Voicemail Script
(write your own)• FAQs and Talking
Points (or key messages)
• Vetted media list• Bios Preparation
• Study like you’ll be tested• Anticipate objections• Rehearse OUT LOUD until
you don’t sound scripted.• Google all mentioned. No
surprises!
GOOD VS. BAD PITCHES
The BEST pitch…
Good pitches… Bad pitches…
Fit on an Outlook screen Look like college essays
Offer cool access Offer no thing
Might be plagiarized Put you on the blocked senders list
Help win a Pulitzer Are mistaken for telemarketing calls
Have many potentials angles and uses
Overpromise, exaggerate and don’t stand up to scrutiny
Clearly have news value Sound like ad copy
Are loaded with facts Are loaded with superlatives
Are in English Reek of shamelessness
Aim high, even if they fall short Aim low, get nothing
Show language some love.idioglossia (ɪdɪəʊ ɡlɒsɪə) — n • 1. a private language, as invented by a child or
between two children, esp twins • 2. a pathological condition in which a person's
speech is so severely distorted that it is unintelligible
• from Greek idios private separate + glossa tongue
World English Dictionary
PR Ninjavs.
Journalist
“What did English ever do to you?”
Selling the Story• Conversations Shoe Salesmen should have• Switching Gears. • Style and Voice: Avoid the stereotype• Rejection and voicemails• Sales Closes for publicists:
o New Decision Closeo Ask for Actiono 3 step closeo Alternate of Choice closeo Character closeo Extra Close
• Call anxiety
Pitch Troubleshooting• Do you know the headline for your desired
story?• Is your subject line coy?• Are the words precise? Could this be
about anybody else but your client?• Is there any body in this pitch? Is it person-
less?• Does the pitch contain any logic fallacies?*• Is the hook/angle a buzz word or sentence
fragment?• Was the media list researched according
to the news values in the pitch?
“Trying to add style is like adding a toupee. …The problem is not that he doesn’t look well- groomed; he does,
and we can only admire the wigmaker’s skill. The point is that he doesn’t look like
himself. …Readers want a person who is talking to them to sound genuine. Therefore, a fundamental rule is: be
yourself.” – William Zinsser’s On Writing Well