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This presentation is an adaptation by me of information from The DK Handbook, Pearson Ed., 2009 regarding run-on sentences and their subsequent revision. It presents five different ways to correct run-ons.

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What is a run-on sentence?

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A run-on sentence is… a sentence that consists of

two independent clauses that are connected

with punctuation that is unconventional or with no punctuation between them.

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What is an independent clause?

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An independent clause is one that…

stands by itself as a simple, complete sentence.

contains a subjectcontains a predicate (verb)

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EXAMPLES OF INDEPENDENT CLAUSES

John walks.

Cats and dogs sleep a lot.

The room was huge and airy.

The presidential elections caused much consternation for voters this year.

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Types of run-on sentences

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FUSED

There is NO punctuation between the two independent clauses

Obama was one of the candidates for U. S. president he won the election.

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COMMA SPLICESThere is a COMMA placed between the two

independent clauses

Obama held his acceptance speech at Grant Park in Chicago, there were thousands ofadmirers in attendance at the event.

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Is this a run-on sentence? Obama used the Internet to reach out to

many people, consequently many people voted for him.

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YES! The word consequently is a conjunctive

(connecting) adverb which cannot be used to connect two independent clauses.

Sometimes comma splices are created in this way.

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CORRECTING RUN-ONS USING CONVENTIONAL

PUNCTUATION

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ONE

SEPARATE THE INDEPENDENT CLAUSES INTO TWO SENTENCES

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TWO

JOIN THE INDEPENDENT CLAUSES WITH A SEMICOLON OR COLON

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THREE

CONNECT THE INDEPENDENT CLAUSES WITH A COMMA AND A COORDINATING CONJUNCTION.

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Coordinating conjunctions

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FOUR

MAKE ONE OF THE INDEPENDENT CLAUSES INTO A DEPENDENT

CLAUSE A dependent clause cannot stand on its own.

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DEPENDENT CLAUSES

Adjective clauses

Adverb clauses

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Adjective clauses consist of RELATIVE PRONOUNS + PREDICATE

who used the Internet

which was on the Internet

that caused much consternation

whose use of the Internet

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Adverb clauses consist ofSUBORDINATING CONJUNCTION +

SUBJECT + PREDICATE after Obama won the election

although the election caused much consternation

before people votedwhen Obama won

while the elections were going on

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FIVE

RESTRUCTURE THE TWO INDEPENDENT CLAUSES INTO ONE

INDEPENDENT CLAUSE

Turn one of the independent clauses into a phrase thatmodifies the subject in the other independent clause.

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SUMMARYSeparate the two independent clauses into two

separate sentences by adding a period.

Use a colon or semicolon to connect one independent clause to the other.

Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to connect the two independent clauses.

Make one independent clause into a dependent clause by using relative pronouns or

subordinating conjunctions.

Restructure the independent clauses into one independent clause.

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Adapted by K. Wykes from:

Wysocki, Anne Francis. The DK Handbook.

New York: Pearson Education, 2009.