Peer Feedback

Peer Review

In this session of the peer review we had each groups final trailer played on the

projector and shown to the class. This enabled the class to view and give

feedback on the production work that they have viewed. This task gave use

feedback on what we needed to accomplish in order to move our trailer up in

grade boundaries and make it look more appealing for our audience. This also

gave us feedback on what our target audience which are teens and above

think of our trailer.

Sheets were handed out to the class to watch and rate the film trailer.

On this sheet this feedback sheet from the

class was presented to the class in order for

the class to give us feedback. In the top

section of shooting material the comments we

got from our peers was very positive. This

ranged from our working being proficient and

excellent.

In the second section editing our group trailer

in this case was seen as excellent.

Finally in the sound section our trailer was

seen as proficient and excellent.

These positive comments gave me and my

group members motivation and courage that

our trailer was good and satisfying for our

audience.

In the other section that plot, narrative and

themes comes under.

In the first question unfortunately the plot

wasn’t so clear to understand in their opinion.

A way in which we as a group could improve

our trailer and make everyone understand

what is going on, is to go through the scenes

we’ve decided to include in our trailer, step by

step and improve where seems to be unclear.

Or perhaps move the scenes around so it

could be made clearer. However the genre of

the film was very clear to understand in the

trailer. Also the target audience as well as

people wanting to see the film in cinema was

very positive.

The shooting material section the special

effects was seen as basic which was the

lowest tick box we as a group got. However

mise-en-scene and make-up and lighting was

seen as proficient. Finally using the

tripod, attention to framing and variety was

seen as excellent. The second part of editing

the selection and appropriate use of shot was

seen as excellent. Where as the selection and

appropriate use of captions was seen as

proficient. The last part of sound, the recording

and editing sound appropriately was seen as

proficient and appropriate sound of the forms

and convention was seen as excellent.

The plot, narrative and themes are relatively

positive apart from the part that says the genre

is not clear. In my opinion I disagree because

we showed forms and conventions of slasher

horrors for instance blood coming from the

throat and the killer.

This person was very kind and thought our

trailer was excellent and could be understood

very clearly. This makes us proud of our work.