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eBook changes I tried to make them in page order as much as possible! 1. Can I add somewhere in the beginning "Copyright © 2013 Cassie Mendoza-Jones, Elevate Vitality. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form without the prior written consent of the author (with the exception of quotations used with acknowledgement of the author and source).” Perhaps we could overlay it on the same design as page 55, in a lighter colour, with the leaf lightly watermarked behind or somewhere on the page? I LOVE page 55!!!! :) this page can go right after cover page, before dedication 2. On page 7 where it says “My gentle suggestion would be to start with chapter 4...” can I add “My gentle suggestion would be to at least start with chapter 4...” 3. Is it possible to add some large whole-page images from my shoots between some chapters? I think it would be nice to add some more images from the shoots (either website or ebook shoot). Even if you again used page 55 as a template with only an image, and keep some colour as a background, e.g. examples below, but obviously reversed (image would be colour block, and text space would be an image). Or (probably easier) use page 55 as a template, change the colour depending on the chapter, and add an image into the circle where the leaf was (maybe slightly bigger) at the end of each chapters? What do you think would work and not be too stressful for you? Minimal effort, maximum effect

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eBook changes

I tried to make them in page order as much as possible!

1.Can I add somewhere in the beginning "Copyright © 2013 Cassie Mendoza-Jones, Elevate Vitality. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form without the prior written consent of the author (with the exception of quotations used with acknowledgement of the author and source).” Perhaps we could overlay it on the same design as page 55, in a lighter colour, with the leaf lightly watermarked behind or somewhere on the page? I LOVE page 55!!!! :) this page can go right after cover page, before dedication

2. On page 7 where it says “My gentle suggestion would be to start with chapter 4...” can I add “My gentle suggestion would be to at least start with chapter 4...”

3. Is it possible to add some large whole-page images from my shoots between some chapters? I think it would be nice to add some more images from the shoots (either website or ebook shoot). Even if you again used page 55 as a template with only an image, and keep some colour as a background, e.g. examples below, but obviously reversed (image would be colour block, and text space would be an image). Or (probably easier) use page 55 as a template, change the colour depending on the chapter, and add an image into the circle where the leaf was (maybe slightly bigger) at the end of each chapters? What do you think would work and not be too stressful for you? Minimal effort, maximum effect

Page 2: Web viewOn pages 12 and 36 the word ‘continued’ in title has funny ... On page 50 can we change the red apples to green apples (granny smiths like in

4. On page 24 I’m not sure I love how the quote is laid out. Perhaps it should just be one block of text without spaces, and maybe centered in the box? Or not centered, as Kerry Bone’s quote on page 26 is to the left and it looks great. But whatever works, I guess as long as they’re consistent.

5. The affirmations and quotes pages are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6. Not sure how much I love the cartoon on pg33… maybe we can use the one from page 6? Or that other one that she sent through, that was on the top right of the four faces, maybe that one? Even though the eyes are looking down I think I prefer it. Unless it’s too much work to make it ebook ready, in which case just use the one from page 6!

7. On pages 12 and 36 the word ‘continued’ in title has funny spacing

8. On Page 45 can we change the image of the salt to either almonds or shredded coconut please?

9. On page 46 the pics are the same as page 45. Can we use maybe macadamia nuts, green veggies like broccolini or green beans, and salmon fillet?

10. On page 50 can we change the red apples to green apples (granny smiths like in recipe) and maybe change the nut pic to walnuts not in the shell, or even cinnamon sticks? Or honey with one of those traditional wooden stirrer spoons that is typical of honey (can send you pic if you need)

Page 3: Web viewOn pages 12 and 36 the word ‘continued’ in title has funny ... On page 50 can we change the red apples to green apples (granny smiths like in

11. On page 48 can we change the quinoa pic to something a little more obvious, like pic below perhaps

12. I think we should make the differentiation between breakfast, lunch&dinner and desserts&treats a little more obvious. Perhaps use a variation of page 55 between the sections to break them up, and put the heading in their somewhere? The page between them can be in the chapter’s colour? Or just something to break them up.

13. Can you now do a happy dance because YOU’RE AMAZING! AND WE COMPLETED MY EBOOK!!!!