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From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong
Hi Jason,
How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members.
We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting.
We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch!
Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love,Gary
You are Jason. You got an email from your friend, Gary. He wrote about his school project. Read and reply to his email in about 80 words.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Greeting:Who got the e-mail?
Subject & Introduction:What is the e-mail about?
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write? Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong
Hi Jason,
How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members.
We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting.
We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch!
Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love,Gary
What will you write in paragraph 2?
① Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong?
② Where have you been?
③ What did you there?
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write?
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
① Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong?
② Where have you been?
③ What did you there?
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write?
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
① Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong?
② Where have you been?
③ What did you there?
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write?
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
① Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong?
② Where have you been?
③ What did you there?
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants.
They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write?
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you the place that I have been to.
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants.
They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!
④ Where will you go this year?
⑤ Have you prepared well?
I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will go hiking.
I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take
a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! I have broughta camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong
Hi Jason,
How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members.
We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting.
We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch!
Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love,Gary
What will you write in paragraph 3?
④ Where will you go this year?
⑤ Have you prepared well?
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Body:What does Gary want to know? What will you write?
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you the place that I have been to.
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants.
They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!
④ Where will you go this year?
⑤ Have you prepared well?
I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will go hiking.
I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take
a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! I have broughta camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday.
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants.
They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!
I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will go hiking.
I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take
a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! I have broughta camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday.
Ending:Say why you stop writing / how you feel:I have to go now. It’s dinner time.I am looking forward to going there.
I am looking forward to going there.
Closing:
Love,
Who writes the e-mail?
From: [email protected]
Date: 17 October 2010
Subject:
Hi Gary,
My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong
Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.
I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. I went therelast Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants.
They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!
I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will go hiking.
I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take
a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! I have broughta camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday.
Ending:Say why you stop writing / how you feel:I have to go now. It’s dinner time.I am looking forward to going there.
I am looking forward to going there.
Closing:
Love,
Who writes the e-mail?
Jason
