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Item 1What was going on politicaly in dublin ireland in during that time asked Juanita

Corrected“What was going on politically in Dublin, Ireland, during that time?” asked Juanita.

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Item 2Civil war of course aint nobody’s idea of a good time.

CorrectedCivil war, of course, isn’t anybody’s idea of a good time.

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Item 3The snipers rifle was setting next to him on the ground.

CorrectedThe sniper’s rifle was sitting next to him on the ground.

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Item 4No one was not safe anywheres on the streets of dublin that night.

CorrectedNo one was safe anywhere on the streets of Dublin that night. (not deleted)

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Item 5the bullet had actualy busted his arm.

CorrectedThe bullet had actually broken his arm.

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Item 6For a while he just laid their, and tryed to decide how to procede.

CorrectedFor a while he just lay there and tried to decide how to proceed.

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Item 7Korea which is still divided into two countrys borders both china and russia

CorrectedKorea, which is still divided into two countries, borders both China and Russia.

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Item 8he immediate recognized the young man whom had been took prisoner.

CorrectedHe immediately recognized the young man who had been taken prisoner.

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Item 9The crane stretched it’s neck, let out a whoop, and flies away.

CorrectedThe crane stretched its neck, let out a whoop, and flew away.

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Item 10When she and her sisters was growing up the girls’ parents spoke both english and spanish.

CorrectedWhen she and her sisters were growing up, the girls’ parents spoke both English and Spanish.

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Item 11Her and her dog almost got theirselves into alot of trouble that day

CorrectedShe and her dog almost got themselves into a lot of trouble that day.

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Item 12Do you think the dog should of been named trouble or liberty.

CorrectedDo you think the dog should have been named Trouble or Liberty?

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Item 13What kind of a dog was it anyways.

CorrectedWhat kind of dog was it, anyway? (a deleted)

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Item 14The journey to America will be a real exciting adventure for we sisters.

CorrectedThe journey to America will be a really exciting adventure for us sisters.