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Integrating Writing into the Reading Curriculum
CoSandra Haynes
CoSandra Haynes, READ 7140, Summer 2006 2
The Benefits of Teaching Writing in Kindergarten Writing enhances readiness and pre-reading skills. Writing benefits communication skills. Writing helps in all areas of your curriculum. The writing experience leads to creativity. Writing can enhance self-esteem. Writing is fun!
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Making Writing a Habit in Kindergarten If first-graders have come from a kindergarten
classroom where writing is a natural part of their day, they move easily into a first-grade writer’s workshop (Dorn, Soffos, 2001).
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Stages in Writing/Spelling Development
Scribbling/Drawing
Precommunicative
Semiphonetic
Phonetic
Transitional
Conventional
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Scribbles/Drawing
Can be observed at the beginning of kindergarten
Practicing how to hold a pencil
Motor control development
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Pre-communicative Use scribbles Use symbols to
represent thought Letter-like forms Like to use uppercase
letters Limited understanding of
phoneme-grapheme (letter-sound) relationships
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Semi-phonetic Use letters to represent
sounds Have trouble
communicating with vowels
May use space between words
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Phonetic Assign letters to sounds that they hear Represent all sounds in words Writing can be read by others
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Phonetic spelling example
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Upper Developmental Stages of Writing/Spelling Transitional Includes a vowel in each syllable Applies spelling rules; may over generalize Spelling resembles standard English spelling Written words can be read
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Transitional spelling example
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Upper Developmental Stages of Writing/Spelling Conventional Aware of alphabetic
principle Know basic spelling
words Can spell words
appropriately
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Georgia Writing Test This statewide writing
assessment serves the purpose of improving writing and writing instruction.
Administered to students in grades three, five, eight, and eleven.
Developmental Stage Scoring Guidelines for 3rd grade
Stage 1: Emergent Writer Stage 2: The Developing Writer Stage 3: The Focusing Writer Stage 4: The Experimenting
Writer Stage 5: The Engaging Writer Stage 6: The Extending Writer
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Overview of Writing Process
Prewriting
Revising
Editing
Drafting
Publishing
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PrewritingStudent Get ready, set…(stage) “Getting ready to write” Organize ideas Gather information Organizers Sequence organizer, story
map, or specific topic organizer
Teacher Model the prewriting
strategy that you want the students to use when they do their own prewriting.
Show students comparisons and contrasts with yours
Take down students’ dictations
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DraftingStudent “Getting ideas down
on paper” Use information
prewriting organizer or drawing strategy
Teacher Take your prewriting
strategy and show students how to covert ideas into sentences.
Provide encouragement and support
Encourage developmental spelling
Do not supply spelling
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RevisingStudent Revising - “clarifying
and refining ideas” Change or enhance
ideas Rearrange information
Teacher Post class draft Get suggestions Add, delete, rearrange
content on class draft
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EditingStudent “Cleaning up the
grammar” Conference with
teacher
Teacher
Provide editing visors as motivators
Wikki sticks to practice using proofreading marks
Transparency for editing purposes (not on student’s paper)
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PublishingStudent “Sharing with the
world” Congratulate the
authors in the room
Teacher Post class published
piece Provide time to share Decide whether to
place the published pieces
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“I’m An Author” A song to help you
remember the steps in the writing process.
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Grouping OptionsPrewriting and Writing: Whole group:
The students will be grouped as a total group during the instruction and practice activities. time-saving consistency
Individual: The students will complete the assessment activities individually. Individual assessments help teachers plan instruction
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Components of Writing Lessons
Mini-lessons
Practice session
The Writer’s Workshop Approach
Mini-lessons Practice Session
Writing and Conferring Time
Sharing Time: “Share in the Chair” Writing and
Conferring Time
Sharing Time
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Mini-lessons Focus on a particular
strategy or skill Based on the needs of
the class as a whole 5 - 10 minutes Whole or small group
arrangement
Practice Teacher and students
write together. Modeled writing,
interactive writing, shared writing, or guided
Approximately 5 minutes.
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Writing Time
Use illustrations from prewriting Students compose sentences to match pictures Teacher conducts mini-conferences 15- 20 minutes
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Share in the Chair This is the author’s time to shine. Students share with whole class or a small
group. Celebrate the writer’s accomplishments Encourage the writer to enhance his or her
illustration and writing.
Integrating Writing into the Reading Curriculum
Narrative Writing
Kindergarten
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Pre-assessment prompt The teacher will give each student a sheet of
white paper. The teacher will ask the students to make sure that they have a sharpened pencil. The teacher will ask the students to draw a picture and write a story about a time when they received a new toy. The students will be encouraged to write about the events that occurred at the beginning, middle, and end of their experience.
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Georgia Performance StandardsEnglish Language Arts GPS: WritingELAKW1 The student begins to understand the principles of
writing. The student a. Writes or dictates to describe familiar persons, places, objects, or
experiences. b. Uses drawings, letters, and phonetically spelled words to create
meaning.
Reading GPSELAKR6 The student gains meaning from orally presented
text. The student e. Retells familiar events and stories to include beginning, middle,
and end. f. Uses prior knowledge, graphic features (illustrations), and graphic
organizers to understand text.
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Overview of Narrative Writing Unit Day 1: Get ready, set, write a narrative piece Day 2: Prewriting Day 3: Writing Day 4: Prewriting Day 5: Writing
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Getting Ready for Narrative WritingDay 1:Introduction of Narrative Writing Teacher: Mini-lesson
What is a narrative? What happened in the beginning, middle, and at the end
of the narrative? Carle, E. (1995). The very lonely firefly. New York:
Philomel. Practice: Shared writing
How did you make friends on the first day of school?Assessment: Think of a time when you saw a fireworks show.
Write a story about yourself. Tell what happened. What did you see, hear, and smell? How did you feel?
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Prewriting Day 2: Narrative Writing Unit Lesson 1: Prewriting and Story Organizer Teacher: Mini Lesson
What is prewriting? Lionni, L. (1969). Alexander and the wind-up mouse.
New York: Random House. Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer
“The boy who became a toy.” Assessment: Individual Story Organizer
I want you to imagine that you are a toy that someone is throwing away. How do you think you would feel?
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Narrative Writing Story Organizer
My Plan f or Narrative Writing
Beginning pictures Middle pictures Ending pictures
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Scoring Guide for Prewriting Stage of Narrative Writing
Standards criteria
Exceeds the Standard (E)
5
Meets the Standard(M)
4
Approaches the Standard
(A)
3
Needs time and
instruction(N) 2
Needs substantial time and
instruction(NS)1
EventsPictures tell a “story”
Detailed related pictures that represent that beginning, middle, and end
Related pictures represent beginning, middle, and end
Pictures attempt to communicate events
Pictures attempt to communicate events
Pictures are unrelated to topic but show sense of story
Characters Pictures of more than 2 characters
Pictures of 2 characters
Picture of 1 character
Picture of an unrelated character
No pictures of characters
Illustrations
Provides detailed illustrations that describes the story
Illustrationsdescribe the story; illustrations are fairly detailed
Illustration matches the story but may lack details
Provides detailed illustrations that do not match story
Has no illustration or illustration does not match story
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WritingDay 3: Writing – from pictures to words and
sentences Lesson 1 continued… Teacher: Mini Lesson
How to use your pictures to help you write sentences Practice: Shared pen
Use Class Story Organizer from previous day Write sentences that describe the beginning, middle, and
end pictures Assessment
Use Individual Story Organizer from previous day Write sentences that describe your beginning, middle, and
end pictures
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Scoring Guide for Drafting Stage of Narrative WritingStandards criteria
Exceeds the Standard (E)
5
Meets the Standard(M)
4
Approaches the Standard
(A) 3
Needs time and instruction
(N) 2
Needs substantial time and
instruction(NS)1
Events Drafts 1 beginning sentence, 2 middle sentences, and 1 ending sentence
Drafts 1 beginning sentence, 1 middle sentence, and 1 ending sentence
Drafts 2 sentences related to the beginning, middle, or end
Drafts 1 sentence related to the beginning, middle, or end
Drafts events that do not describe the narrative
Characters Includes 2 or more characters
Includes at least 2 characters
Includes 1 character
Includes 1 character, often self
May include a character, often self
Story Map Includes 3 or more ideas from story map
Includes at least 3 ideas from story map
Includes at least 2 ideas from story map
Includes at least 1 idea from story map
Does not include ideas from story map; may include unrelated ideas
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PrewritingDay 4: Narrative Writing Unit Lesson 2: Prewriting our second narrative piece Teacher: Mini-lesson
Review prewriting Encourage students to add more details to their pictures Bang, M. (1999). When Sophie gets angry- really, really
angry… New York: The Blue Sky. Practice: Shared writing and Story Organizer
Draw and label pictures of: “The day I got really, really angry!”
Assessment: Individual Story Organizer Draw and label pictures of: “ My Happiest Day Ever!”
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Writing Day 5: Writing – from pictures to story Lesson 2 continued… Teacher: Mini-lesson
State a sentence that could describe this picture. Use drawings and labels to write sentences and words
Practice: Shared writing and Class Organizer from previous lesson Write sentences that describe the beginning, middle, and end of our
story: “The day I got really, really, angry!” Assessment: Individual Organizer
Write sentences that describe the beginning, middle, and end of you story: “My Happiest Day Ever!
Integrating Writing within the Reading CurriculumInformational Writing
Kindergarten
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Pre-assessment prompt The teacher will give each student a sheet of white
paper. The teacher will ask the students to make sure that they have a sharpened pencil. The teacher will ask the students to draw pictures that explain how to get on and ride a bicycle. The teacher will ask the students to write down the steps in getting on and riding a bicycle. Alternative prompts:
Instructions on how to get on and slide down a sliding board
Instructions on how to swing
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Georgia Performance StandardsEnglish Language Arts GPS: WritingELAKW1 The student begins to understand the principles of writing. The
student b. Uses drawings, letters, and phonetically spelled words to create
meaning.Reading GPS: ELAKR1 The student demonstrates knowledge of concepts of print. The
student a. Recognizes that print and pictures (signs and labels, newspapers,
and informational books) can inform, entertain, and persuade.ELAKR6 The student gains information from orally presented text. The
student e. Retells familiar events and stories to include beginning, middle,
and end.
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Overview of Informational Writing Unit
Day One: Get ready, set, write an informational piece
Day Two: Prewriting Day Three: Writing Day Four: Prewriting Day Five : Writing
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Informational WritingDay One: Introduction to Informational Writing Teacher: Mini-Lesson
What is informational writing? Carle, E. (1969). The very hungry caterpillar. New York: Philomel
Books. Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer
Draw pictures of the foods that you ate last week. The foods may be listed under the day of the week that you ate them. “A Week of Food”
Assessment: Individual Story Organizer Draw pictures of yourself as a baby, growing infant, as a
kindergartener “The Very Hungry Baby”
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PrewritingDay 2: Prewriting with pictures Lesson 1: Prewriting our first informational piece Teacher: Mini-lesson
Review prewriting and informational writing What does the word sequence mean? What are directions? (No Author). Peanut Butter and Jelly. (1987). New York: Penguin
Books. (Literacy bag) Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer
Draw pictures: How to make a glass of kool-aid. Assessment: Individual Story Organizer
Draw pictures: How to prepare a bowl of cereal.
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Organizer for Informational WritingName _________________________________ Prewriting
At the end of my day I …
Haynes, C. (2006). Organizer for Prewriting Stage of Informational Writing. Unpublished manuscript, Valdosta State University.
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Scoring Guide for Prewriting Stage of Informational WritingStandards criteria
Exceeds the Standard (E)
5
Meets the Standard
(M)
4
Approaches the Standard (A)
3
Needs time and instruction
(N)
2
Needs substantial time and instruction
(NS)1
IllustrationPictures tell a “procedure”
Detailed pictures that show a step-by-step process4 or more steps
Related pictures represent show 3 steps
Pictures attempt to communicate 2 steps
Pictures attempt to communicate 1 step
Pictures are unrelated to topic
Illustrations “readable pictures"
Provides detailed illustrations that describes the process
Illustrationsdescribe the process; illustrations are fairly detailed
Illustration matches the process but may lack details
Provides detailed illustrations that do not match the process
Has no illustration or illustration does not describe the process
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WritingDay 3:Writing – from pictures to writing directions Lesson 1 continued… Teacher: Mini-lesson
How to make pictures “readable.” Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer
from previous day Write sentences : How to make a glass of kool-aid.
Assessment: Individual Story Organizer Write sentences: How to prepare a bowl of cereal.
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Scoring Guide for Drafting Stage of Informational Writing
Standards criteria
Exceeds the Standard (E)
5
Meets the Standard
(M) 4
Approaches the Standard
(A)
3
Needs time and
instruction(N) 2
Needs substantial time and
instruction(NS)1
Events Drafts 1 beginning sentence, 2 middle sentences, and 1 ending sentence
Drafts 1 beginning sentence, 1 middle sentence, and 1 ending sentence
Drafts 2 sentences related to the beginning, middle, or end
Drafts 1 sentence related to the beginning, middle, or end
Drafts events that are not related to topic
Uses organizer Includes 3 or more ideas fromorganizer
Includes at least 3 ideas from organizer
Includes at least 2 ideas from organizer
Includes at least 1 idea from organizer
Does not include ideas from organizer; may include unrelated ideas
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Informational WritingDay 4: Prewriting with pictures Lesson 2:Prewriting our second informational piece Teacher: Mini-lesson
Review how to sequence pictures of a story Harrison, D. (2001).When cows come home. Pennsylvania: Boy Mills
Press. Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer
Draw pictures to show what a hen (or another farm animal) may do when it goes to the barn at the end of the day
Assessment: Individual Story Organizer Draw pictures to show what you do when you come home at the end
of the day
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Informational WritingDay 5: Writing – from pictures to story Lesson 2 continued… Teacher: Mini-lesson
Encourage students to add more details to pictures Practice: Shared writing and Class Story Organizer form
previous day Write sentences using the class organizer to show what a hen (or
another farm animal) may do when it goes to the barn at the end of the day
Assessment: Individual Story Organizer Write sentences using your story organizer to show what you do
when you come home at the end of the day
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Accommodations and/or ModificationsCultural and Linguistic Needs
Make sure activities and instruction are not culturally bias. Bring in all items that will be used and referenced to during instruction. Allow learner to participate and to reenact activities.
Developmental Delays (fine-motor issues) It may be easier for the child if he uses a pencil grip or a
slantboard. Special paper with raised lines may help a struggling writer stay within the lines.
Give student only plain white paper.
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ReferencesCarolyn, C. & King, R. (2003). Differentiated
instructional strategies for teaching writing in the content area. California: Corwin Press.
Fletcher, R. & Portalupi, J. (2001). Writer’s workshop. Portsmouth: Reed Elsevier.
Johnson, B. (2003). Never too early to write: adventures in the k-1 writing workshop. Gainesville, Fl: Maupin House Publishing.
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References continued…Root, T. (n.d.).The writing process: prewriting and
beyond. Unpublished manuscript, Valdosta State University at Valdosta.
Stead, T. (2001). Is that a fact? Teaching nonfiction writing K-3. Portland, ME: Stenhouse.
Tompkins, G.E. (2004). Teaching writing: Balancing process and product. (4th ed.). Upper Saddle River. NJ: Merrill Prentice Hall.