Advanced Comp - Summer 2007 Portfolio

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Disconnect the Dots:

Emotion Recollected in the Tranquility of Summer

A portfolio compiled by:Dianna Anderson

ENG 360: Advanced Composition

Dr. Greg Dyer


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TABLE OF CONTENTS

Introduction: Wordsworths Influence

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Short: Reckless: A Boy Wonder and the Writing Process

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Short: The Bleeding Heart Show

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Additional Writing: An Analysis of C.S. Lewis Till We Have Faces.

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Additional Writing: How Did George Orwell Work to Change the Landscape of

the British Empire During World War II and After?

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Open Essay: Geworfenheit

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Acknowledgements

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Wordsworths Influence: An Introduction

Compiling this portfolio has been a much needed cathartic experience. Taking a

class following such a rigorously academic and challenging semester, one can only begin

to scratch the surface when asked to "reflect" and write experientially. With my mind

flooded with spires and books and libraries, each still photograph in my mind's eye

became an essay, unfolding itself on the page before me as I sat down to write. Each of

my items of freewriting touched on Oxford, as it is never far from my mind. In a rather

Wordsworthian turn, I am recollecting the emotions, the highs and the lows of not only

the semester, but the return. Whilst composing the materials that eventually comprised

this portfolio, I forced myself to determine precisely what Oxford meant and still means

to me, three whole months after the fact. Rather than pretending that nothing was

different, I was able to confront that change and begin my transition in writing. I imagine

it might be a long time before I can write reflectively about anything but my experience

overseas. Each of these papers reflects that influence, even the academic papers I have

included as additional writing.

My first short - "Reckless: A Boy Wonder" - is a reflection upon friendships. I

chose to honor my friend Charley, as we had grown much closer in the last three weeks of

the programme and he became quite dear to me. I cannot think of the Crick Road kitchen

without thinking of his slight frame, bending by the stereo as he attempted to get the

ancient CD player to process one of his burned CDs. This image is but one element that

springs to mind when I think of that particular room and hopefully gives those around me

a small glimpse of the larger picture that was Oxford. This is also the essay with which I


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have included the writing process, for no other real reason than the fact that it is the essay

for which I had multiple drafts.

My second short widened the lens slightly and gave a slightly larger view of how

Oxford had affected me and inserted myself into the picture. Now in addition to my

friend Charley, the viewer had a slightly fuzzy picture of my friend Nealson, who was

also very dear to me. Another portion of the photograph is revealed and another level of

understanding, both on the part of me and the reader, is hopefully achieved.

The third and fourth bits of writing can hardly be called reflective as they were

written during the Oxford semester. They are, however, carefully chosen for their topic

and their style. They are two of my favorite papers that I completed while over there.

The first is on CS Lewis' little known novella, "Till We Have Faces," which, as the paper

says, is a retelling of a myth. It presents not only an examination of human nature

(filtered through literary analysis of Lewis' work), but is a typical example of writing that

I did during the semester. It is also the piece that I think represents a form of persuasive

writing in that it is not merely exposition of the literary work, but an attempt to persuade

the reader to a different conceptual idea of the piece.

The second piece of additional writing is one of my favorite essays to date.

George Orwell who was a favorite of mine before going over to England galvanized

Britain in ways that many other authors could only dream. As one of the final essays that

I ever wrote for Scholarship and Christianity In Oxford (SCIO), its analysis of the United

Kingdom's history and his place in it seemed oddly appropriate.

In the last, prominent, place falls the Open Essay, the most reflective piece of

them all. Finally, I put the viewer back in Sioux Falls, reflecting upon the experience in


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the present day. It offers an insight into my current feeling, through the lens of a

philosophical method. This sort of writing is inspired by Gopniks Death of a Fish

Essay, which we read inBest American Essays. Looking at memory and the experience

of the last six months through Heideggers philosophical method helped me to interpret

my feeling and is probably one of the essays of which I am most proud, probably because

it took me a very long time to arrive at a suitable topic.

Overall, I think this work represents not only my own progress as a writer, but

progress emotionally as I dealt with such a fresh and impacting experience. Compiling

this portfolio also taught me about the catharsis of the writing process in terms of

deciding how to tell people about something. Ive heard and studied Wordsworths

philosophy of emotion recollected in tranquility, but never fully put it into action

before. In this portfolio, I have done that and I feel I have done it successfully. I hope

you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.


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Reckless: A Boy Wonder

Charley danced with his eyes closed. This is the most important thing to

remember when imitating the Charley dance ones eyes must be closed. But they are

not simply closed as if one had paused mid-blink and forgot to open again. Nor is it the

closure signified by sleep, when the person is miles away, and, if one looks closely

enough, one can see the small movements of the eye behind the lids, tracking the movie

of a dream. Charley closed his eyes in ecstasy, in pure enjoyment of the song,

enraptured. He danced with joy his tousled, unkempt hair would flow over his closed

eyes as he would step back and forth in a subdued two step, his typical rainbow colored

shirt accenting the childlike joy that spread slowly across his face.

If his eyes were open during such a moment, the joy would immediately be

spoiled by the sight of dirty dishes at the sink, the rows of posters for the Ashmolean

museum on the cupboards, and the crowded refrigerator as a housemate opened it for

food. Often, a housemate would be reading at the table continually a reminder of the

nearly joyless work he should have been doing. With his eyes closed, however, he would

be spared these sights, as well as the chance reflection in the kitchen windows of the

silliness of his own limbs and body as they moved in time to the music.

It was an energetic dance, involving the whole of his body. Once, when he was

instructing me on how to do it, he told me the movement of the shoulders was the heart of

the dance. They would move in time with his legs when the right foot would move

forward, the right shoulder would roll forward as well, all in one fluid motion. In keeping

with the shoulders unrestrained movement, his elbows would be bent at a not-quite 90

degree angle; his hands would be formed into a loose fist, with only the index finger free


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and pointing into nowhere. I dont believe he even realized that he closed his eyes during

his dancing it was a purely natural movement, one that simply fit with the rest of his

joyous action.

The entertainment of such a dance was usually left in the kitchen of our house, as

private as that can be, though his bouncy personality never abandoned him in

public. However, during one unique experience, he and I went to a Ska night that had

been advertised, hosted at a local club. The band was a local one, playing songs wed

never heard before and probably would never hear again. The club was dark, literally

underground, and we brash Americans soon gained the solidarity and respect of the

middle of the dance floor. Soon, Charley was in his element. His dance quickly adapted

to the dark underground scene and, despite the cigarette smoke, the beer on the floor, and

the slower, jazzy tempo of the music, he once again entered his own world. It was his

lifeline to a world away from the academics, the books, the writing, the questions. Behind

his closed eyes, he flew away from the dirtiness of the club on Cowley Road and returned

to his own world of beat, rhythm and movement, all powered by the music pumped into

his ears.

Remarkably, when home, Charley would dance around the kitchen with his eyes

closed and not run into a chair, a table or a counter he skirted around them as though he

had lived there his entire life, instead of only three and a half months of his 23 year

existence. The only threat to his safety came when some unaware housemate decided to

open a cupboard in the path of his wild dance and thus altered his environment. We

quickly learned, however, to avoid this occurrence and let him have his dance, his form

of a study break.


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Near the beginning of our friendship, I tried the same routine and nearly ran into

the kitchen island, my eyes flying open in fear of bodily harm. By the end of term,

however, I was performing it with ease, much to the entertainment of my fellow

housemates. I had also taken on extensive portions of Charleys personality, frequently

wearing his classic Waldo hat, his ugly red and blue sweater, commandeering his

skateboard and even doing his yell of Huzzah! It became a running joke throughout the

term, culminating in a new nickname of Charlianna. Despite this acquisition of his

mannerisms and clothing, I could never fully grasp the dance. My version because that

is all it is, a version has less shoulder movement and my eyes are only half-closed,

cheating the original. My joy, though present, was not nearly as complete as his and I

could never fully lose myself in the way he would. I continue, however, to dance with my

eyes partly open, hoping, someday, to dance with my eyes fully closed.


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Draft #1:

Song: I Felt Like Smashing My Face in a Clear Glass Window by Of Montreal

Charley danced with his eyes closed. This is the most important thing toremember when imitating the Charley dance ones eyes must be closed. But they are


closure signified by sleep, where the person is miles away, and, if one looks closelyenough, one can see the small movements of the eye behind the lids, tracking the movie

of a dream.

This was not what Charleys closed-eye dance was about. No, Charley closed hiseyes in ecstasy, in pure enjoyment of the song, enraptured. If his eyes were open during

such a moment, the joy would immediately be spoiled by the sight of dirty dishes at the

sink, the rows of posters for the Ashmolean on the cupboards, and the crowded

refrigerator as a housemate opened it for food. He would also be spared the chancereflection of the silliness of his own limbs and body as they jerked in time to the music.

[further description here]

Remarkably, Charley would dance around the kitchen with his eyes closed and

not hit anything. I once tried the same thing and nearly ran into the island, my eyesflying open in fear of bodily harm. By the end of term, however, I was performing it with

ease, much to the entertainment of my fellow housemates. My version, however because that is all it is, a version has less shoulder movement and my eyes are only

half-closed, cheating the original.

[hmmm]


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Draft #2:





enraptured. Charley danced with joy his tousled, unkempt hair would flow over hisclosed eyes as he would step back and forth in a subdued two step, his typical rainbow

colored shirt accenting the childlike joy that spread slowly across his face.


spoiled by the sight of dirty dishes at the sink, the rows of posters for the Ashmoleanmuseum on the cupboards, and the crowded refrigerator as a housemate opened it for

food. He would also be spared the chance reflection in the kitchen windows of the

silliness of his own limbs and body as they jerked in time to the music. It was an

energetic dance, involving the whole of his body. Once, when he was instructing me onhow to do it, he told me the movement of the shoulders was the heart of the dance. They

would move in time with his legs when the right foot would move forward, the rightshoulder would roll in one fluid movement. In keeping with the shoulders unrestrained

movement, his elbows would be bent at a not-quite 90 degree angle; his hands would be

formed into a loose fist, with only the index finger free and pointing into nowhere. I

dont believe he even realized that he closed his eyes during his dances it was a purelynatural movement, one that simply fit with the rest of his joyous movement.

Remarkably, Charley would dance around the kitchen with his eyes closed and

not run into a chair, a table or a counter he skirted around them as though he had livedthere his entire life, instead of only three and a half months of his 23 year existence. The

only threat to his safety came if some unaware housemate had decided to open a

cupboard in the path of his wild dance and thus altered his environment. We quicklylearned, however, to avoid this accidental occurrence and let him have his dance, his form

of study break.

I once tried the same routine and nearly ran into the kitchen island, my eyes flyingopen in fear of bodily harm. By the end of term, however, I was performing it with ease,

much to the entertainment of my fellow housemates. I had taken on extensive portions of

Charleys personality, frequently wearing his classic Waldo hat, his ugly red and blue

sweater, and even doing his short jump accompanied by a yell of Huzzah! My versionof his dance, however because that is all it is, a version has less shoulder movement

and my eyes are only half-closed, cheating the original.


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Draft #3:





enraptured. Yes, Charley danced with joy his tousled, unkempt hair would flow overhis closed eyes as he would step back and forth in a subdued two step, his typical rainbow

colored shirt accenting the childlike joy that spread slowly across his face.


spoiled by the sight of dirty dishes at the sink, the rows of posters for the Ashmoleanmuseum on the cupboards, and the crowded refrigerator as a housemate opened it for

food. He would also be spared the chance reflection in the kitchen windows of the

silliness of his own limbs and body as they moved in time to the music. It was an

energetic dance, involving the whole of his body. Once, when he was instructing me onhow to do it, he told me the movement of the shoulders was the heart of the dance. They

would move in time with his legs when the right foot would move forward, the rightshoulder would roll in one fluid motion. In keeping with the shoulders unrestrained

movement, his elbows would be bent at a not-quite 90 degree angle; his hands would be

formed into a loose fist, with only the index finger free and pointing into nowhere. I

dont believe he even realized that he closed his eyes during his dances it was a purelynatural movement, one that simply fit with the rest of his joyous movement.

The entertainment of such a dance was usually left to the kitchen of our house, as

private as that can be, though his bouncy personality never abandoned him in public.However, during one unique experience, he and I went to a Ska night that had been

advertised, hosted at a local club. His dance quickly adapted to the dark underground

scene and despite the cigarette smoke, the beer on the floor, and the slower tempo of themusic, he once again entered his own world. The dance was his lifeline to a world away

from the academics, the books, the writing, and questions. Behind his closed eyes, he left

behind the dirtiness of the club on Cowley road and returned to his own world of beat,rhythm and movement, all powered by the music pumped into his ears.

Remarkably, when home, Charley would dance around the kitchen with his eyes


had lived there his entire life, instead of only three and a half months of his 23 yearexistence. The only threat to his safety came if some unaware housemate had decided to


quickly learned, however, to avoid this accidental occurrence and let him have his dance,his form of study break.

I once tried the same routine and nearly ran into the kitchen island, my eyes flying open

in fear of bodily harm. By the end of term, however, I was performing it with ease, muchto the entertainment of my fellow housemates. I had taken on extensive portions of

Charleys personality, frequently wearing his classic Waldo hat, his ugly red and blue

sweater, commandeering his skateboard and even doing his short jump of

accomplishment complemented by a yell of Huzzah! It became a running joke


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throughout the term, culminating in the new nickname for me of Charlianna. Despite

this acquisition of his mannerisms and clothing, I could never fully grasp the dance. My

version because that is all it is, a version has less shoulder movement and my eyes areonly half-closed, cheating the original.


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Draft #4:

Charley danced with his eyes closed. This is the most important thing to

remember when imitating the Charley dance ones eyes must be closed. But they arenot simply closed as if one had paused mid-blink and forgot to open again. Nor is it the

closure signified by sleep, when the person is miles away, and, if one looks closely

enough, one can see the small movements of the eye behind the lids, tracking the movieof a dream. Charley closed his eyes in ecstasy, in pure enjoyment of the song,

enraptured. He danced with joy his tousled, unkempt hair would flow over his closed

eyes as he would step back and forth in a subdued two step, his typical rainbow coloredshirt accenting the childlike joy that spread slowly across his face.


spoiled by the sight of dirty dishes at the sink, the rows of posters for the Ashmolean

museum on the cupboards, and the crowded refrigerator as a housemate opened it forfood. Often, a housemate would be reading at the table continually a reminder of the

nearly joyless work he should have been doing. With his eyes closed, however, he would

be spared these sights, as well as the chance reflection in the kitchen windows of the

silliness of his own limbs and body as they moved in time to the music.It was an energetic dance, involving the whole of his body. Once, when he was

instructing me on how to do it, he told me the movement of the shoulders was the heart ofthe dance. They would move in time with his legs when the right foot would move

forward, the right shoulder would roll forward as well, all in one fluid motion. In

keeping with the shoulders unrestrained movement, his elbows would be bent at a not-

quite 90 degree angle; his hands would be formed into a loose fist, with only the indexfinger free and pointing into nowhere. I dont believe he even realized that he closed his

eyes during his dancing it was a purely natural movement, one that simply fit with the

rest of his joyous action.The entertainment of such a dance was usually left in the kitchen of our house, as

private as that can be, though his bouncy personality never abandoned him in public.

However, during one unique experience, he and I went to a Ska night that had beenadvertised, hosted at a local club. The band was a local one, playing songs wed never

heard before and probably would never hear again. The club was dark, literally

underground, and we brash Americans soon gained the solidarity and respect of themiddle of the dance floor. Soon, Charley was in his element. His dance quickly adapted

to the dark underground scene and, despite the cigarette smoke, the beer on the floor, and

the slower, jazzy tempo of the music, he once again entered his own world. It was his

lifeline to a world away from the academics, the books, the writing, the questions.Behind his closed eyes, he flew away from the dirtiness of the club on Cowley Road and

returned to his own world of beat, rhythm and movement, all powered by the music

pumped into his ears.Remarkably, when home, Charley would dance around the kitchen with his eyes


had lived there his entire life, instead of only three and a half months of his 23 yearexistence. The only threat to his safety came when some unaware housemate decided to


quickly learned, however, to avoid this occurrence and let him have his dance, his form

of a study break.


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Near the beginning of our friendship, I tried the same routine and nearly ran into

the kitchen island, my eyes flying open in fear of bodily harm. By the end of term,

however, I was performing it with ease, much to the entertainment of my fellowhousemates. I had also taken on extensive portions of Charleys personality, frequently

wearing his classic Waldo hat, his ugly red and blue sweater, commandeering his

skateboard and even doing his yell of Huzzah! It became a running joke throughoutthe term, culminating in a new nickname of Charlianna. Despite this acquisition of his

mannerisms and clothing, I could never fully grasp the dance. My version because that

is all it is, a version has less shoulder movement and my eyes are only half-closed,cheating the original. My joy, though present, was not nearly as complete as his and I

could never fully lose myself in the way he would. I continue, however, to dance with

my eyes partly open, hoping, someday, to dance with my eyes fully closed.


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The Bleeding Heart Show

I have had three goodbyes in my life that will stay with me forever. The first was

not a goodbye to a specific person, but a parting with something that had consumed my

life for a period of four years: my debating career. My senior year of high school, as I

was climbing off the bus, home from the final tournament of the year having

unsuccessfully tried for the National Tournament for the third time I turned to my coach

and said, You know, Im glad its over. The goodbye began then, but took more than a

year to complete, until I finally decided to cut myself off from the debate world, though

never fully leaving behind the skills I learned there. As with most goodbyes, a small part

of what one is saying goodbye to remains, forever a reminder of what was once a large

part of the persons life.

The second and third goodbyes are recent and still sting. The first occurred on the

front lawn of the house I had lived in for three and a half months in Oxford. My taxi

arrived at 11:30, precisely as requested. In the midst of loading a collection of luggage

and bags and souvenirs pulled together over a three month stay, I somehow managed to

find my friend Nealson in the crowd around the taxi and hugged him for the second time

in our friendship. The first hug had occurred on my birthday, two months before, in

response to a card he had written to me. This second and final one was brief a short,

quick hug of two people who knew the inevitable was finally here, that the moment their

friendship had been bulleting toward had finally come, and now, in these last moments,

both wished to deny was happening.

This hug was one of finality, the closing of a chapter Nealson and I had begun

the long process of saying goodbye approximately a week before, with a conversation


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about the end of the programme in the entryway of our four story brick house in North

Oxford. I still see it perfectly in my minds eye: I, sitting on the floor, with my back to

the fire door, looking up at the white and bleak walls as Nealson perched on the stairs,

guitar cradled in his hands as though it was his child. In the course of that short

conversation, he was blinking to hold back tears Oxford had been his home for eight

months and he was going back to a place he didnt and couldnt know any more. Even

now, I cannot imagine what was going on in his heart and mind. During three of those

eight months, we had become fast friends, beginning with our first dinner in the house,

which he sat next to me and introduced himself as Neal. This name I came to find out

later was somewhat of a misnomer. Unselfishly, he introduced himself as such to avoid

the conversation that followed focusing on himself and his unusual name. Everything

was encapsulated in these two bookends: even in the end, his goodbye was not one of

selfishness: Write me, call me, facebook me. The last words he said to me, with a

smile on his face and a small movement of an air guitar, told me to enjoy my indie

music and with a laugh, I clambered into the taxi and left him behind with tears in my

eyes.

The last and most powerful goodbye came in a country foreign to the people

involved at two in the morning, among the city streets in a part of Rome I am entirely

unfamiliar with, my friend Charley and I said our last words in each others presence.

Our group of approximately ten people had stayed at the Trevi Fountain, delaying the

goodbye, until nearly one a.m. We sat for two hours, slowly munching on gelato, and

continued sitting until long after the gelato was finished. I exchanged a few meaningless

words with Zach and Elise, not wanting to acknowledge the coming goodbyes. Rich,


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Lucy, Charley and I climbed on the bus and rode in silence, watching the lights of Rome

flick by. With the search for a taxi, there were false alarms as taxis slowed down, yet

none stopped. I remember Lucy rushing across the road and wrapping me in one of her

powerful hugs, whispering in my ear what it was she loved about me, aware that a taxi

could be coming any minute. It was several minutes after the formal goodbye that we

actually hailed a taxi. My last words to that group of three (which included a man who,

even now, I dont know that I realize what he means to me) were I love you! as the

door of the taxi swung shut on that chapter of our lives. Right then, I wanted to cry, but

somehow could not get the tears to come. They would, weeks later, as I heard skateboard

wheels clatter outside the library, and with a sigh of frustration, stood to shoo the

interlopers off. I finally realized that the noise of a skateboard was not one belonging to

Charley, that the open window was not an invitation for water and rock wars, that ducks

quacking by the water did not mean that bread and his smiling face would soon appear.


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Dianna Anderson

CS Lewis in Context

Dr. Emma Plaskitt

Faces are the primary identification of human beings; they are the outward aspect

of the self. Unless the true self, the psyche, is allowed to develop, human faces serveonly as masks for various roles in which the person in engaged. (Katherine Filmer)

Discuss in relation to Till We Have Faces.

C.S. Lewis bookTill We Have Faces presents a unique interpretation of Apuleius

tale of Cupid and Psyche. By changing the perspective from which the story is told and

one key detail, Lewis has created a new story in which the idea of veils and faces has

become the central theme. Heightening on Biblical allusions and the theme of illusion,

the idea of the face within Lewis story becomes a metaphor for the Christians spiritual

life.

First, there is a distinct Biblical allusion throughout the novel. The veil, in

Biblical terms, references a veil that Moses wears after meeting with God upon the

mountain. Paul alludes to it in 2nd Corinthians, saying: We act with great boldness, not

like Moses, who put a veil over his face to keep the people of Israel from gazing at the

end of the glory that was being set aside. [] But when one turns to the Lord, the veil is

removed.1 For the majority of the book, the Princess, and later Queen, Orual wears a

veil for a parallel, and yet opposite, reason. Like Moses, Orual has an encounter with a

god whose glory is such that she is nearly struck down by it A monster [] would

have subdued me less than the beauty this face wore.2 Within days of this encounter,

Orual dons a veil that she will wear for the rest of her life until the time when her veil is

removed in front of another god, this time her own half-sister. For the time that she was

wearing the veil, her intents were often veiled as well, like the word of God that Paul

1 Holy Bible, New Revised Standard Version, 2 Corinthians 3:12-13, 16a.2 Lewis, CS. Till We Have Faces in Selected Books (HarperCollins: London, 1956) p545.


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references in the passage in Corinthians. She learned how to reveal her intents carefully,

using vocal tones instead of facial expressions. This hidden nature of Oruals true

meanings parallels the above verse from Paul Gods Word is veiled until a person has

come to the Lord in supplication and want of Him alone. No doubt this was the intention

of Lewis theological meaning behind her veil.

The countenance of a human being reveals much about a persons true feelings

often more than one would want. In the act of veiling herself, Orual has removed this

precious information. If Katherine Filmers quote is true, then Orual has merely

bypassed the idea of the facial mask and replaced it with a physical, material one. Peter

Schakel writes that a veil is a conventional cultural and literary symbol, sometimes used

as an emblem of modesty and decency.3 She gains strength and confidence hiding what

she saw as her ugliness behind her veil. The perception of ugliness had been reinforced

time and again by rejection from her father, but it, too, was a mask behind which she hid.

When she makes the decision to wear a veil, she writes that It is sort of a treaty made

with my ugliness.4 She has made a contract with herself to replace one mask with

another. Instead of exchanging facial expressions, Orual exchanges literal faces. Schakel

continues: Her external identity can be altered by wearing a veil and plunging into a life

of activity.5

The lack of mirrors within the story is also pertinent to Lewis Biblical parallel

and overall spiritual emphasis. In the book, Orual is only shown the mirror twice once

at the beginning of her childhood when her ugliness is shown to her by her father, and

again in old age when her greater ugliness as the goddess Ungit is shown to her in a

3 Schakel, Peter. Reason and Imagination in CS Lewis: A Study of Till We Have Faces. (Eerdmans

Publishing Co: Grand Rapids, 1984) p56.4 Lewis, p550.5 Schakel, p60.


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dream, again, by her now long dead father. As a result, she regards the mirror with terror:

I saw that mirror on the wall, just where it always had been. At the sight of it my terror

increased, and I fought with all my strength not to go on. 6 She has long been so

convinced of her own ugliness that the terror of the mirror is overwhelming. To herself,

the lack of the veil has become something to cause great distress. Her own veil not only

protects her subjects from her face (as she believes it does) but it protects herself from

confronting what she truly is Ungit, the goddess who devours those she loves, a

swollen spider, squat at its centre, gorged with mens stolen lives.7 Her own inner

ugliness has become what she dreads and now her face can no longer be hidden,

especially before a mirror.

However, Orual finds that through work of her own, mending the ugliness she

sees is useless. I could mend my soul no more than my face.8 In attempting to work it

through on her own, Orual finds the task impossible, foreshadowing the impossibility of

the tasks Psyche has had to take upon herself to be saved. This parallels an expanded part

of the section from Paul: Indeed, to this very day whenever Moses is read, a veil lies

over their minds.9 The veil, the covering that hides Oruals own face from herself, acts

as a cover of knowledge of how to reach the gods and to mend her own soul. Because

she has hidden herself behind the mask of both her ugliness and her veil for so long, she

cannot see a way to mend the ugliness that she now knows exists in her own soul.

However, as Clyde Kirby writes, Orual is an instance of a person to whom God

seemingly says, I will have you, whether or no.10 This continues the Pauline parallel in

6 Lewis, p605.7 Ibid, p605.8 Ibid, p608.9 Holy Bible, NRSV, 2 Corinthians 3:15.10 Kirby, Clyde S. Till We Have Faces: An Interpretation, in Schakels The Longing for a Form (Kent

State University Press, 1977), p173.


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that Paul is of the same stock resistant to God until God literally steps in and blinds

him.

Another important element of Lewis creation is the combination of holy and

dark. Darkness often acts as concealment. In Biblical imagery, it is associated with evil,

as the most holy of all is associated with light. This dichotomy is especially prevalent in

the gospel of John, wherein the author sets up a tension between light and darkness.

Lewis turns Johns dichotomy on its head by associating the holy with the darkness.

Orual makes continual reference to the oppressive darkness of holy places, questioning

near the end of part one: Why must holy places be dark places?

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This destruction of

the normal contrast between holiness (as light) and darkness (as evil) further blurs the

line between the gods and humans.

Oruals own search for a disguise becomes a part of this blurred line when she

seeks to go out into the city at night and does not wear her veil for the first time in years:

I was Ungit; I in her and she in me. Perhaps if any saw me, they would worship me. I

had become what the people, and the old Priest, called holy.12 The distinction of the

old Priest is important because it signifies a change, a distinction between holy and dark

finally being drawn and the confusion cleared. Ungit, the goddesss that they had been

worshipping, is called The Queen of Shadows13 and it is revealed that each person must

work to get free of her.14 The distinction is thus drawn and the theological parallel made

what has been dark and veiled was that which was actually evil in disguise and what

was clear and unveiled was actually holy.

11 Lewis, p589.12 Ibid, p606.13 Ibid, p619.14 Ibid, p619.


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The veil also symbolizes a change within Orual. When she dons the veil for the

first time, she is able to create a new personality and gain new confidence in what she

sees as her voice. She rebukes her father without consequence for the first time in her life

and asserts her position as the rightful queen from behind the veil, using only her voice.

Schakel says that a key function of the veil is to symbolize Oruals new identity as the

Queen.15 She states that as queen, her strength was in her veil and the voice coming

from behind it.16 People began to discover all manners of beauties in my voice.17 Her

voice, however, becomes simply another mask which she hides behind as revealed in the

climatic scene of complaint before the gods. The metaphor that the veil and the voice

forms within the novel comes to a climax in the final scene of the reading of the

complaint. Orual is stripped of her veil, her last vestige of her strength is stripped from

her, and there was given to me a certainty that this, at last, was my real voice.18 She has

found her real voice and her real self as a stripped and unmade person, standing meekly

before the gods. And this completes the Pauline parallel that once a person comes

before God completely humbled do answers come. Again, it recalls the Biblical imagery

of the road to Damascus, on which Paul was confronted by God and shocked into the life

of a believer, humbled and blinded by God. And that is the message of Lewis theology

humility before God and gaining of a face of ones own in His presence after being

blinded by His glory.

15 Schakel, p57.16 Lewis, p577.17 Ibid, p577.18 Ibid, p614.


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Dianna Anderson

Module 4: George Orwell

SCIO British Landscapes

How did George Orwell work to change the landscape of the British Empire during

World War II and after?

I write it because there is some lie that I want to expose, some fact to which I want

to draw attention, and my initial concern is to get a hearing.19 When George Orwell

penned these words in 1946, he was explaining, near the height (and end) of his writing

career why he had begun to write in the first place. He could have barely predicted the

impact that exposing the lie would have on Britain and the governments of the rest of

the developed world. Orwells uniquely socialist political views covered all manner of

topics and his work affected much of public thought in the warring period in the first half

of the 20th century.

George Orwell was born Eric Arthur Blair to English parents living in India in

1903.20 By 1904, Blair returned to England with his mom to receive an English

education.21 In primary school, his political views (though he could have hardly guessed

it at the time) began their formation. The older writer Orwell reflected on his time at St.

Cyprians, his primary school: A child conscious of poverty will suffer snobbish

agonies such as a grown-up person can scarcely imagine.22 This experience as a poorer

child at a rich school helped the young Blair to realize the impact of class differences and

has often been pinpointed as the beginning of his hatred of the class system. After

earning a scholarship to Eton, Blair developed a bloody-minded indifference23toward

academics and life in general, haughtily refusing to conform and finishing Eton without

19 George Orwell. Why I Write. Shooting an Elephant and Other Essays. Penguin Books, 2003. p.8.20 Bernard Crick, Eric Arthur Blair, Oxford Dictionary of National Biography. Online.21 Robert Wilson, Introduction to the Longman Edition, Animal Farm (Longman: 1983), p.vii.22 Ibid, p.viii.23 Simon Schama, The Two Winstons,A History of Britain. BBC Video.


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honors. Shortly thereafter, in 1922, Blair enlisted as an officer in the British Burmese

Police24 possibly the most formative five years of his life. In Burma, he experienced

the full reach of British Imperialism and it was likely around this time that he decided to

be an ardent socialist. After coming back to England, he announced that he was quitting

the service and becoming a writer.25 He then proceeded to live life as a tramp, seeking

the very bottom of the social ladder, and after two years took a job as a book reviewer.26

When his writing became successful, he took on the pseudonym of George Orwell.27 His

first novel,Down and Out in Paris and London, exposed the dark underbelly of those

poor and suffering in London the tramp life he had lived in for two years was exposed

to the publics eye.28 From this time on, Blair became the writer we now know as George

Orwell and wrote rather successfully until his death in 1950.

Orwells early work is rife with anger at the Imperialism of the British colonies.

One particularly inflammatory and incensed essay, Shooting an Elephant, written in

1936, highlights the impact that British Imperialism had, not only the native people, but

on the officers who were there to enforce the measures of the Empire. Shooting an

Elephant details the conflict between Orwell and his own personal feelings about

shooting an elephant that has gotten loose in the village. He writes that he could feel the

two thousand wills29of the people bearing down on him, willing him to shoot the

elephant that he did not want to shoot and knew that he ought not to shoot. Orwell writes

that I perceived in this moment that when the white man turns tyrant it is his own

freedom that he destroys. He becomes a sort of hollow, posing dummy, the

24 Crick, online.25 Wilson, p.ix.26 Ibid, p.x.27 Crick, online.28 Ibid.29 Orwell, Shooting an Elephant, from Shooting an Elephant, p.35


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conventionalized figure of a sahib.30 Rather than feeling freed by the realization of the

amount of power he had, he felt powerless and constrained, knowing that his every move,

as the physical representative of the tyrant to the people of Burma, was subject in reality

to their wills. My whole life, every white mans life in the East, was one long struggle

not [to] be laughed at.31

What Orwell experienced was the paradox inherent in a position of power one is

always in a precarious stance, on the verge of being torn apart politically if one missteps.

Orwells problem was that his power was barely real and mostly illusory he was a

puppet, the hand of the Empire. This growing hatred of Imperialism was probably fed by

his hatred of the class system, which he also felt a puppet of while in Burma. In the class

system, he was higher than those he was punishing, but he could tell that the Burmese did

not feel that they had committed any crime. The Burmese felt victim to the evil Empire

and Orwell could not help but identify with and admire such a view. In his 1931 essay

A Hanging, he describes the reaction to just such a punishment:

I saw the mystery, the unspeakable wrongness, of cutting a life short when it is infull tide. This man was not dying, he was alive just as we were alive. All the

organs of his body were working bowels digesting food, skin renewing itself,

nails growing, tissues forming all toiling away in solemn foolery. [] He andwe were a party of men walking together, seeing, hearing, feeling, understanding

the same world; and in two minutes, with a sudden snap, one of us would be gone

one mind less, one world less.32

And thus he wrote to expose the lie that was haunting him. His words are literarily

powerful, which strengthened his impact as a writer. As we see in his later works,

Animal Farm andNineteen Eighty-Four, Orwells powerful story telling was his major

strength in finding support for his political views.

30 Orwell, Shooting an Elephant, p.36.31 Orwell, Shooting an Elephant. p.37.32 Orwell, A Hanging. Shooting an Elephant, p.25-26.


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Orwells later novelAnimal Farm highlights a further development in his political

thought. Bernard Crick writes that Orwell, in this period and especially within the novel,

was forming his impression of liberty and arguing that equality doesnt negate liberty:

On the contrary, he stood in that lineage of English socialists who, through Morris,

Blatchford, Tawney, Cole, Laski, and Bevan, have argued that only in a more egalitarian

and fraternal society can liberties flourish and abound for the common people. 33 Orwell

argued now in his thinly veiled allegory that the Russian Revolution could and would not

succeed. Over the years, Orwell has been criticized as a party to the communist

movement an umbrage to his legacy as a socialist.

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Part of the attacks on Orwell have

come from people who confuse the allegory with condemning socialism in addition to

communism as an unwieldy political system, or confusing the two. Orwell was adamant

that socialism isnt perfect by any means, but still offers realistic hopes of improvement,

not utopian idealism.35 Communism, on the other hand, offers an idealistic notion of

utopia which begins with a bloody Marxian revolution something Orwell was firmly

opposed to because of the inherent instability of utopian idealism. His military tour of

Spain only reinforced an already growing hatred of tyranny, which he saw in the Stalinist

regime in Russia.36 This very idealism [in communism] allowed for the emergence of a

frightening and repressive dictatorship in Russia.37

According to the Longman edition ofAnimal Farm, one must understand the events

in the history of the Russian Revolution and Stalins regime before one can fully grasp

the allegory of the book.38 But part of the beauty of Orwells work is that the allegory is

33 Bernard Crick, George Orwell: A Life. (Penguin Books:1992) p.17.34 Crick, online.35 Wilson, p.xx.36 Schama, video.37 Wilson, p.xxi.38 Wilson, p.xxiii.


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couched within such a child-like story that it can be read simply as a story when one is a

child, though one does lose some of the deeper meaning. Knowing, however, the history

behind the events of the Russian revolution, one can see quite clear connections between

the events of the revolution and the novel Orwell was not shy about his allegory. At the

beginning of the book, the Old Major tells the farm animals: Never listen when they tell

you Man and the animals have a common interest, that the prosperity of the one is the

prosperity of the others. It is all lies.39 This line is an allegorical example of the

propaganda that was present during the Russian Revolution and a clear dig at the

U.S.S.R. Orwell shows his literary prowess when he connects to this line again with the

closing line of the novel: The creatures outside looked from pig to man, and from man

to pig, and from pig to man again; but already it was impossible to say which was

which.40 This also functions as an allegory that essentially calls Joseph Stalin a pig.

Animal Farm had an impact that spread far and wide and was even used by the American

Central Intelligence Agency in the Ukraine as an attempt to subvert the Stalinist Iron

Curtain.41

However,Animal Farm was not to be Orwells greatest political triumph. While

Animal Farm succeeded in satirizing the Russian regime,Nineteen Eighty-Four

galvanized its readers into thought about the idea of a negative utopia. Up until Orwells

writing, the idea of utopia was one of that pervaded the communist structure Marxs

ideal would be a utopia.42 And Orwells Oceania certainly is a utopia, but one created by

an oppressive communist government which is frighteningly controlling. Written in

1948, Orwells Winston Smith lives in a world scarily close to our own. This Winston

39 Orwell,Animal Farm. (Longman: 1983), p.5.40 Ibid, p88.41 Crick, online.42 Wilson, p.xx.


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becomes the literary hero for our time not out of any weaponry or force, but because he

does not forget. Even working in the Ministry of Truth, changing around the past,

Winston proves that memory and knowledge of the past is the most important weapon we

have against tyranny. Simon Schama says that Orwells novel proves that the last refuge

of freedom against Big Brother [or tyranny] is memory.43 Similarly, Orwell writes in the

novel:

And when memory failed and written records were falsifiedwhen that happened,the claim of the Party to have improved the conditions of human life had got to be

accepted, because there did not exist, and never again could exist, any standard

against which it could be tested.44

Memory and history are truly what were on Winstons side and Orwell is

encouraging the same for his audience. Winston triumphs because he has some memory

of what things used to be, when, as Schama puts it, a country walk or singing a song

seemed perfectly normal.45

Orwells novel was an early warning to the promoters of communism the

government that follows communist ideals will ultimately be totalitarian and oppressive

and will always have to work to quash rebellion. Orwell was essentially sounding the

death knell for communism with his liberating book communism just took forty some

years to get the message. The true fear of the novel, however, is in how much control the

totalitarian regime had. The total and complete control over its subjects, based on

improved surveillance and the manipulation of children, serves also as a warning to

future generations.

43 Schama, video.44 Orwell,Nineteen Eighty-Four, (Signet Classics: 1950).45 Schama, video.


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To this end, Orwells novel remains heavily influential in popular cinema, music

and books. His name has even entered English vocabulary Orwellian conveys the fear

of a future for humanity governed by rival totalitarian regimes who rule through

suffering, deprivation, deceit, and fear, and who debase language and people equally.46

In the impact that Orwell has made on modern society, often movies and books will be

described as Orwellian, displaying just how much influence his literary career had. The

movieEquilibrium for example, draws heavily on the Big Brother figure and the

elimination of emotion prevalent inNineteen Eighty-Four.47 The novels influence

spreads far and wide and Orwells example of a world full of totalitarianism continues to

terrify. While not directly contributing to the collapse of communism, Orwell predicted it

long before it occurred. He knew, through experience and careful study, that communism

could never work and yet was cognizant of the idea that no political system was perfect.

But he was more angered by the idea of communism than he was penitent of his own

political ideals: If I had not been angry about that I should never have written the

book.48

As Orwell writes in his own story, How the Poor Die: Every institution will

always bear upon it some lingering memory of its past.49 The institution Orwell indicted

bears the lingering memory of Orwells attacks and jibes and the memory of the past will

always be the liberating freedom of historical truth Orwell contends. His legacy lives on,

ever so appropriately, in our memories.

46 Crick, online.47 Kurt Wimmer (screenplay),Equilibrium, Dimension Films/Blue Tulip Production48 Orwell, Why I Write. p.949 Orwell, How The Poor Die. Shooting an Elephant, p.289.


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in a University town. My friend Nealson was often the unofficial leader of such

discussion, so it was no surprise to find him at the center of Trevors video, discussing yet

another famous philosopher. After nearly six weeks of missing his laugh and the sound of

his voice, my first viewing of the video consisted of simply hearing and not seriously

understanding what he was saying. Upon hitting replay, however, I listened more

closely to his discourse on Heideggers concept of thrownness the concept that one is

thrown into life, hovering somewhere along the chain of events between birth, a

beginning of life, and death, the ending of such consciousness. Essentially, a person is a

baseball being thrown, and his life is the journey between pitcher and the catcher. Life,

according to Heidegger, is something over which man has no control we, as human

beings, are simply thrown: tossed from one end to another, with no control over our

flight. The realization ofgeworfenheit or that one is thrown therefore, is adequately

termed ontological shock. Or as Charley coined, speaking to me from months ago and

through my fathers computer screen, it is a baseball bat right to the face.

Charley, as he quickly realized in the short video, was slightly incorrect in his

analogy. A baseball bat to the face, in terms of thrownness, would have connoted another

journey, beyond life the ending of the throw and the beginning of another if one were

to follow the analogy through to its logical conclusion. It is also utterly unlike

Heideggers original intention. With a laugh, I watched him realize his folly and tell the

viewer to forget the baseball bat analogy pitcher and catcher, no bat. Despite his

instruction, I cannot help but feel that I have begun a second journey, bouncing toward an

outfield on my return journey home. There is nothing to hold me back I am streaking


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through the air with nothing to hold me back until I reach an absolute, an end to my

flight.

Throughout all these thoughts and turbulent emotions, a line from Frodo in

Return of the Kingkeeps repeating in my head: "How do you pick up the threads of an

old life? How do you go on, when in your heart, you begin to understand there is no

going back? There are some things that time cannot mend. How do I pick up the threads

of an old life? How should I return to life in my hometown of Sioux Falls when I feel that

I hardly know myself anymore? I am here physically, but not quite mentally or

emotionally yet. Thisgeworfenheithas been cast into sharp relief by the harsh light of the

South Dakota sky. I keep imagining, for some odd reason, that I'm going to walk into the

kitchen and see Nealson chopping mushrooms, Charley dancing to Of Montreal, Tori

sitting by the window reading, Jonathan at the French press making his coffee and Carri

at the fridge, searching for her cheese. Each of these images floats before my minds eye,

only to be whisked away by a telephone call from an old friend, asking if Im available to

hang out tonight. The immediacy of such a request forces me to lurch into the present,

forgetting my reveries.

In my dreams, I wander through the streets of Oxford, passing the familiar

Sainsbury's Local, with a Borders bookstore right next door, a crowded Cornmarket

Street and the buses making their way through High Street. The sign for the Wheatsheaf

passes me by; All Souls College slides by on the left, and I remember one of the most

unintentionally humorous lecturers I ever had the joy of seeing. Soon, my mind's eye

travels past Logic Lane and the Exam Schools, arriving at the Cowley Road roundabout

and jumping along to the M40, returning to London for my outward journey, forever


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leaving behind the gorgeous skyline formed by the spires. I am unable to control this

trajectory, watching as a portion of my life slides by like hourglass grains falling one by

one into an ever growing pile. The sand flows through my fingers as I realize that in

tightening my grip, I have forced more sand out through the spaces and lost myself along

with the grains as they fall. It is my own personal form of ontological shock. It is slowly

sinking in that when I wake up in the morning, there will be no Leilani debating

emotionally, no night-Dan pontificating about the finer points of Star Trek, no Eric

screaming like a girl, no Lauren laughing at Alex's mimicry, no Katy winking

suggestively. Each of these friends, named only in my memory, are now gone. This is

geworfenheitat its utmost.

Of course, I also hear Frodo's voice, although less frequently, saying: "My dear

Sam: You cannot always be torn in two. You will have to be one and whole for many

years. You have so much to enjoy and to be and to do. Your part in the story will go on."

In overcoming this Heideggerean moment, one realizes that, while it is often impossible

to change the trajectory once the realization of thrownness has occurred, one may

reconcile with the fact that life is continuing, the circumstance has changed and the flight

must be finished. It is settling into the next of Heideggers concepts: Dasein or Being-

In, the realization of thrownness and that one can do nothing about it.

Back in my campus library, I come across a new copy ofThe Book of Common

Prayer, the prayer book of the Anglican Church, similar to the Catholic Churchs

catechism. The Anglican church of Saint Mary Magdalenes stirs in my memory, a

church I visited briefly during my tenure at Oxford. The church owns an old building

near the shopping district of Oxford and exudes the odor of incense in services past the


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history connected with such a place is unlike any Ive encountered in the states. My only

experience with a highly liturgical service before was a visit to a Greek Orthodox church

my freshman year of college. The service was typified in the unexpected hospitality of

the English tea and biscuits were served afterward and members of the church made

sure to meet and talk with the new visitors. Contrary to most experiences with churches

stateside, the church welcomed and accepted me and did not question where I came from

they were only concerned with where I was going. They met me in the center of my

geworfenheitand set themselves alongside it. Even as a visitor, I was embraced as one of

the old crowd.

Even in the United States, I must remember what it means to be one of the old

crowd. I must continue and attempt to pick up the threads of my old life, though some

are changed or missing entirely. I must learn again who my friends truly are and deepen

those friendships once more. The world of Oxford and the world of Sioux Falls can be

reconciled, and I can succeed where Frodo could not - there is no boat to take me hence

from this world.

As quickly as my reverie began, it ends. I am awakened in the back room of my

universitys too-small library, staring down at a new copy of the Book of Common

Prayer, with a lingering smell of incense, imagined and yet so real. My library does not

have the same old book smell that brings what George MacDonald termed the faintness

of rapturous delight, yet I am still surrounded by books speaking to me through

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Acknowledgements:These people helped me greatly with the writing of these

essays and are thanked here for their help:Audrey AndersonBetty Anderson

LaRissa FeltDan Hodges

Kimberly KinderKevin Muirhead

Dr. Meriel PatrickDr. Emma PlaskittCourtney Whitney

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