POST PRODUCTION FEEDBACK

My post production feedback consists of feedback on all 3 of my magazine pagesfrom my target audience , saying what's good about the pages and how I canimprove the page.

ABRAHAM TAIWO

Front cover feedback (1)

The first person I asked for feedback on my magazine

Front page Ebony , said that she liked the front page

Because it looks professional , and I have cluttered the

Page with plenty of pictures she also added that the

Yellow outline on the masthead stands out on the

Purple background and she also likes the choice of the theme colour which ispurple .

She said I could improve this page my making the main cover line moredistinctive because it looks like any other cover line , I agree with thisbecause the main cover line was not mad too clear because I did not want tohave it running across his body to disrupt the focus on the main image but itturns out that that would have made it clear that that cover line was themain one and that ‘L Cookie’ was the main image.

Double page spread feed back (1)

When asked Ebony said that she liked the logo of

Subway magazine , she also said that I can improve

My double page spread by making the title stand

Out more . Taking into consideration her point I

Disagree and I think that it was made very clear and

Stood out a lot.

Contents page feed back (1)

She also went on to say that the layout of my

contents page was very good and one thing she said

that I should improve and that it was a weakness

was that the colour of that font in the bottom box

was not so clear and that a brighter colour should

have been used instead. I disagree with this because

the colour goes along with the colour scheme and stands out and is very clearinto what the text says.

Front cover feed back (2)

The second person that I asked for feedback on my front

cover said that a strength to it was that she likes the choice

of font that I used for the masthead , she said it was very

creative and different which I agree with. She also went on

to say that a weakness and a point to improve would be the

choice of background colour , she said that it would have beenmore suitable to use a white background because mostmagazines use white. I’ve taken her point into considerationand I would disagree because I think the colour purple was asuitable colour to use for the front cover which subsequentlywas also the theme colour of my magazine and also wentalong with the costumes of ‘L Cookie’ .

Double page spread feed back (2)

She said that my double page spread looked very

professional and neat and that the picture that I took of

‘L Cookie’ was good quality which I agree with and she

also said that the gradient background was good.

A weakness and an area for improvement she said would

be if I changed the background on the second page and not use the gradienttool on it. And also the font on this page . I agree with her because I thinkthat a plain background would look more presentable , professional andappeal to my target audience more.

Contents page feed back (2)

She also added that my contents page looks good and that

there is nothing that I need to do to improve it. I can

understand why she has said this but I very much do not

agree with this because I feel that the choice of the main

image should have been different because it looks very

similar to that of the front cover , I also think that I should have used a bettercolour for the gradient tool as the background.

Front cover feed back (3)

This person that I asked for feedback on my magazine

said that the colours on the front page blend very well

and that all the information that my target audience

would want to know is on the front page and also

added the text is very much readable which I agree

with. A area that she said there was room for improvement for was that Ineeded to add more photos which would attract more people to buy themagazine. I do not agree with this because conventionally speaking the vastamount of music magazines front page only have one main image and noothers on the front page.

Double page spread feed back (3)

The feedback that I was also given on my double page

spread was that I should not have too many pictures of

‘L Cookie’ on the second page because he already been

shown on the cover of the magazine , which I can

understand but I disagree because conventionally

speaking the main star of a magazine is shown in

more than one place in the magazine. She also said that everything stands outon the two pages and instantly would instigate my target market to read on.

Contents page feed back (3)

The feedback that I was given on my contents page was

that the information that was presented was good and

gets straight to the point. And area she said I need to

improve and could be seen as a weakness would be the

variation of pictures and that too many of them are of

‘L Cookie’ and I disagree with this because he is the

main topic of these issue of subway magazine and therefore should be depictedin many areas of the magazine.

Front cover feedback 4

The feedback that I received on the front page of my

music magazine was that it was very appealing , an area

that I was told was a weakness and an area for

improvement was increasing the size of the font which

says what the price is ; I disagree with this because the

purpose of using a small font for the price would be so that regardless of how big the font is it would still appear that the price is small because it has been put in a small font.

Double page spread feed back (4)

Feedback that I have received on the double page

spread was that the image on the first page was very

good , the colour scheme consistency was also good

here and not too busy. An area I was given improvement

was that I should reduce the amount of text that I had

on these pages , which I disagree with because I believe that I ha a reasonable amount of text on both pages and that it was not too much.

Contents page feed back (4)

The feedback that I received on my contents page was

that I would need to make the headings in the boxes at

the bottom of the page more clear by changing the font

colour , I disagree with this because I think it was very

clear and it also goes with the colour scheme of my

magazine. Other than that I was told there was nothing else wrong with it.