Constructive criticism for Shades of grey

Need to lose the sound of voices from the cast behind the camera.

Wind issues need to be re thought about to make it more professional.

A voice over needs to be added to covey the typical conventions of a film noir.

Avoid eye contact with the camera to make it look professional. More shots need, a variety of different shots and continuity

editing is needed. There is no soundtrack so it needs to be added into the final cut

to make it more realistic. It was a bit confusing so adding more continuous shots will

make it less confusing.