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Peer Revision

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Reflection

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TIP FROM OWL

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FIRST GRAB A COPY OF THE ESSAY:

“Kitchen”.

NEXT: Write out the themes of each

paragraph. Pick out

Specific details…

CLASS DISCUSSION… (Total 30 minutes).

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REVISION: Pages: 56-7, 90, 118 (Ch 2,3,4)

Pick one color card: match with person w/

corresponding color/ A or B.

One reads their essay first (or have it read)

Editing, discussion, plans for revision

TIME LIMIT: 30 Minutes, each reading.

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TIPS for Proofreading

Read aloud! You’ll hear your mistakes

Play Devil’s advocate: what might another reader want from your essay?

Think about the wider audience: how does it connect?

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FEEDBACK-- Change spots

Go through the other essay

Be Specific: in critiques, in

praise

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Find your main point.

Save only the good pieces.

Tighten and clean up your language

Eliminate mistakes in grammar and usage

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REFLECTION: Setting a time for rewriting

What worked? What was out of place?

2 HOURS Time Goal

REMEMBER: DUE 20TH End of Day

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