Introduction & Conclusion

Correct the essay in red pen.Write your name on the top of the

paper.Next to your name, write the heading

of the slide that you’re checking for.Write comments on what they did

wrong.Comment in complete sentences on

what they did right.

Underline the thesis. Does it reference that Macbeth is going

to be used? (Y) Does it seem like their essay is mainly

about Macbeth? (N) Does it define what a psychological

break? (Y) Does it offer some background to

psychological breaks? (Y) Does it go into detail about the body

paragraphs? (N) Does it open to the rest of the essay? (Y)

Underline the topic sentences of the body paragraphs.

Underline the thesis. Does the thesis reflect upon the other

thesis? (Y) Is it the same as the thesis statement?

(N) Does it summarize? (N) Does it offer new supportive ideas? (N) Does it draw a conclusion based on the

body paragraphs? (Y) Does it state how to prevent a

psychological break? (Y)

Write the strengths and weaknesses about the introduction.

Write the strengths and weaknesses about the conclusion.

Is their essay at least 1000 words? (Y)