This is my second draft of my music magazine. I do not have a picture of my first draft however my teacher gave me feedback. The feedback was that I should make the masthead bigger, and add a barcode, I also made the strapline a bit smaller. I chose to make my magazine cover quite minimal. Therefore my use of white space is effective as I made the image very strong and so that becomes the main focus rather than lots of kickers that would crowd the page and the image. I think I gave enough information on the front cover for people to be able to understand what its about. I circled the things that would help people understand that its about music and what type of genre and that it includes upcoming artists.