AS Blog feedbackL/O: to understand teacher comments on blog and know how to

improve blogs, also know what marks you currently have

marks• Lowest = 1• Highest 13-14• Average: 7-8

• Remember the blog is EASY marks, much easier to achieve L3/4 than video or evaluation….

• POOR R&P = POOR VIDEO + POOR EVAL.

• What’s wrong with these?

And this?

Templates…..

This is L1

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Good blogs• http://1415twbsasmediagroup4.blogspot.co.uk/ GROUP 4

• (notice their technical skills – zooms/embedded videos in prezi) like in this: http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2015/10/research-assignment-4-types-of-ots_9.html

• Extensive research/analysis and excellent presentation! http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2015/12/research-frame-analysis.html

Good work

Group 7’s revised planning• This is fine if you have decent planning from before

• If rubbish:(separate posts)

http://1516twbsasmediagroup7.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/planning-assignment-60-revised-planning.html

More good stuff:• Joseph – excellent costume/prop:

http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/assignment-46-costume-props-make-up.html

• Jamaal – music/sound research http://1516twbsasmediagroup7.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/research-assignment-37-music-research.html

Target audience was area for development• MASS = xfactor (some people said top gear?) or avatar • NICHE= location location location or Geordie shore

• #36 (your target audience and how it’s appealing…..)• Create a chart to make demographics clear• Psychographics?• Explain clearly HOW/WHY your film would be appealing to your TA

Marks/GradesA B C D E U

80-100 70-79 60-69 50-59 40-49 39-0

A B C D E U

160-200 140-159 120-139 100-119 80-99 79-0

Aim for 175 Aim for 150 Aim for 130

____/100

____/100 c/w + ____/50 mock = _____

33/100 c/w + 34/50 mock = 67/200

Wants secure B = 150-67 = 83 more marks

30/100 c/w + 19/50 mock = 49/200

Wants secure B = 150-49 = 101 more marks