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Academic Writing (for PG Education)
• Summarising and Quoting
• Research
• Self-assessment
• Literature Reviews
• APA citations & reference lists
SELF-ASSESSMENT
• Complete the self-assessment form by ticking the relevant column
• When you are ready, discuss your answers in pairs or groups
• Try and aim for a balance between the four strategies – and be proactive about getting support with your research and writing
RESOURCES
Facts & Figures
Theories / Models
Definitions
.. about the issue and / or proposed solutions
… which have been developed to explain the issue
… of the issue and/or theoretical concepts
Examples … of the issue and/or proposed solutions
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1. Articles in refereed, international journals
2. Books / chapters in edited books
3. Articles in national, refereed journals
4. Conference papers / Research reports (govt, com, org)
5. PhD theses 6. MA theses 7. Honours theses8. Websites / articles
in non-refereed journals
Natilene Bowker, Student Learning Centre, Massey University, Palmerston North © 2005
• Check course requirements• Consult with your supervisor
Hierarchy of Credibility of Sources
• Start off by using your lecture notes and recommended books. Then delve deeper into selected topics using your university library resources
• Massey students can click on the ‘Research’ tab on the Massey home page and choose ‘Library’.
• Then click on ‘Subject Guides’ and then on your subject to find the library codes, statistics, organisations, videos and research databases that will allow you to search efficiently for high quality educational sources.
Steps in a research process
CONFUCIANISM
relationships
Self-improvement
Shared rituals
Obedience - benevolence
harmony
Use mind-maps, tables etc to organise your ideas as you go along
SUMMARISING FROM SOURCES
Step 1: highlight relevant information in your source
“Confucianism developed from Confucius’s life-long concern for a humanistic government, and a political and social order that was built firmly on the rites, li, developed and implemented in the Zhou dynasty (1122-771 BC). Li, in Chinese means institutional rites and norms that define and regulate political and social behavior. Confucius’ singular contribution to this tradition was to provide a philosophical account of the true nature of li by invoking two quintessential Confucian notions, ren, human benevolence and yi, moral fittingness, as its foundation of legitimacy. These elements were then woven into a coherent moral system that is the core of Confucianism” (de Bettignies, Ip, Bai, Habisch & Lenssen, 2011, p. 625).
Step 2: Make very short notes of key ideas
C = philosophical view of social orderexplains and justifies social norms 2 principles: ren = benevolence; yi = appropriate moral behaviour
Step 3: These notes need to be clear, because when you write your draft, you need to close the original book, article or webpage
C = philosophical view of social orderexplains and justifies social norms 2 principles: ren = benevolence; yi = appropriate moral behaviour
Step 4: Expand your notes into linked sentences
Confucianism is a social philosophy which attempts to explain and justify the norms which govern social behaviour. These norms are seen as justified when they embody two underlying moral principles: ren, which means ‘benevolence’ and yi, which can be translated as ‘fittingness’ or ‘appropriateness’.
Step 5: Add the reference to the source you used
Confucianism is a ....... translated as ‘fittingness’ or ‘appropriateness’ (de Bettignies, Ip, Bai, Habisch, & Lenssen, 2011).
This is another illustration of the truth of the saying, “Those who do not remember the past are condemned to repeat it” (Santayana, 1905, p. 284).
1) definitions:
• The key principles for effective quotations are FEW and SHORT Generally only quote:
• And, where possible, EMBED the quote as a short phrase inside your own sentence, as in the two examples above.
2) stand-out comments:
QUOTING FROM SOURCES
Stuttering has been defined as “a disruption in the fluency of verbal expression characterized by involuntary, audible or silent, repetitions or prolongations of sounds or syllables” (Büchel & Sommer, 2004, p. 159).
STRUCTURING ACADEMIC TEXTS
• Generally, academic writing moves from general to particular (often ending up with a summary)
• So, a literature review as a whole, each section, and each paragraph tends to start with a general overview, then expands on the points made in the overview, finishing with a summary of main points and/or gaps or problems
• Think of it as a set of Russian dolls – each doll with its own head, body and feet!
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2.1. Introduction
2.1.1. Social consequences of obesity
2.2. Broader communication issues
2.2.1. Advertising
2.2.1.1. Advertising expenditure
2.2.1.2. Advertising style
2.3. Likely causes of obesity
2.3.1. Obesity and genetics
2.3.2. Television watching, exercise and obesity
2.3.3. Lifestyles and eating choices
2.3.4. Advertising, children and obesity
2.3.4.1. Communication theory
2.3.4.2. Television content analysis
2.3.4.3. Television advertising and nutrition practices
2.4. Proposed public policy changes to reduce obesity
2.4.1. Fat/Sin taxes
2.4.2. Health education
2.4.3. Advertising restrictons
2.5. Summary of literature and research aims (Hawkins, 2003)
Table of Contents for a Literature Review (as part of a thesis)
• Arranged by key themes or findings• Arranged in headings and sub-headings
Logical grouping of information from your
sources
To provide a coherent argument about research on your topic so
far
Leading to your research question
PARAGRAPH WRITING
• Paragraphs are the little dolls of your academic writing – each starting with a topic sentences, expanding on this with arguments and evidence in the next few sentences, and (generally) reaching a conclusion
• With their little legs, paragraphs get tired quickly! Generally, keep them between 4 and 8 sentences long (about 100 – 200 words)
• Aim to make a paragraph plan before writing – consisting of the number of sections and the number of paragraphs in each section
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2.3.4.3. Television advertising and nutrition practices
Television advertising may influence children’s nutrition practices, particularly in
regard to food requests, purchases and consumption (see for example,
Hutchings & Moynihan, 1998; Kotz & Story, 1994; Borzekowski & Robinson,
2001). Story and Faulkner (1990) state that television exposure may impact on
actual eating behaviour [but that further research is required to establish causal
links]. Similarly, Kotz and Story (1994) note that television is such a ubiquitous
medium that it is difficult to measure its behavioural effects. Their report
concluded that it was not possible to prove that food advertisements aimed at
children cause poor eating habits. Whilst these and other such studies report a
positive correlation between television viewing and food requests, purchases
and consumption, there is limited conclusive evidence to support a direct cause
and effect relationship between the messages portrayed and the actual eating
patterns of children.
(Source of extract: Hawkins, 2003, p. 29)
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Television advertising may influence children’s nutrition
practices, particularly in regard to food requests, purchases and
consumption (see for example, Hutchings & Moynihan, 1998;
Kotz & Story, 1994; Borzekowski & Robinson, 2001). Story and
Faulkner (1990) state that television exposure may impact on
actual eating behaviour [but that further research is required to
establish causal links]. Similarly, Kotz and Story (1994) note that
television is such a ubiquitous medium that it is difficult to
measure its behavioural effects. Their report concluded that it
was not possible to prove that food advertisements aimed at
children cause poor eating habits. Whilst these and other such
studies report a positive correlation between television viewing
and food requests, purchases and consumption, there is limited
conclusive evidence to support a direct cause and effect
relationship between the messages portrayed and the actual
eating patterns of children.
TOPIC SENTENCE
SUPPORTING ARGUMENTS & EVIDENCE
SO WHAT?
So BEFORE putting fingers to keys, make sure you’ve worked out what point you’re making and what research you’ve got to back it up – ideally in a simple list.
LEADERSHIP IN CONFUCIANISM
• Confucianism = philosophical system of social relationships (de Bettignies …).
• 5 relationships: emperor-subject, father-son, husband-wife, older-young brother, and friend-friend (Li).
• Manager like a father (Zhang)
• Duty important (Tsui).
• Harmony important - Leader – self-improvement – to become junzi = superior man (Ip)
To make your paragraphs ‘FLOW’ start sentences by referring back to a previous idea and then building on this – Make THIS and THESE your flow bro’s!
In contrast to Fayol’s pragmatic focus on management of organisations, Confucianism is a systematic, philosophical approach to the maintenance of human relationships in society as a whole (de Bettignies, Ip, Bai, Habisch & Lenssen, 2011). These relationships are categorised into five types: emperor-subject, father-son, husband-wife, older-young brother, and friend-friend (Li, 1984). Leadership is central to these relationships because society is viewed as hierarchical, with each member typically having power over some, while being subservient to others. Harmony, is seen as a paramount objective in order to secure the sustainability of the society (Ip, 2009), which otherwise might be riven by power struggles. Therefore, in an organisational context, leaders are encouraged to avoid any extremes and ensure that employees willingly accept their duties (Tsui, Wang, Xin, Zhang, & Fu, 2004). This approach involves a delicate balance between obedience (which is expected of employees) and rewards (which they may expect in return from the manager, in the guise of a benevolent father-figure) (Zhang, Lin, Nonoka, & Beom, 2005). Obedience also depends on the leader’s commitment to continual self-improvement, with the aim of achieving the status of junzi, or superior man, (Ip, 2011).
Here is a single introduction paragraph to a literature review. What are the elements that make it ‘introductory’?
Without greenhouse gases, there would be no policy-makers to agonise over them. For naturally-produced greenhouse gases are what has made this planet habitable for everyone of us, through an estimated 33°c increase in global temperatures over millions of years (IPCC, 2007). No one disputes this – and few dispute that the last few decades have seen a sharp upturn in this warming process. However, sceptics view this latest temperature increase as no more than a temporary spike in an ancient pattern of natural variation. This review follows the IPCC in referring to such natural variation as ‘climate variability’, whereas ‘global warming’ will be defined as temperature increases brought about by what are called ‘anthropogenic’ (human-produced) greenhouse gas concentrations. Empirical evidence for global warming and for its impact on extreme weather events will be summarised and critically evaluated in the sections which follow.
Without greenhouse gases, there would be no policy-makers to agonise over them. For naturally-produced greenhouse gases are what has made this planet habitable for everyone of us, through an estimated 33°c increase in global temperatures over millions of years (IPCC, 2007). No one disputes this – and few dispute that the last few decades have seen a sharp upturn in this warming process. However, sceptics view this latest temperature increase as no more than a temporary spike in an ancient pattern of natural variation. This review follows the IPCC in referring to such natural variation as ‘climate variability’, whereas ‘global warming’ will be defined as temperature increases brought about by what are called ‘anthropogenic’ (human-produced) greenhouse gas concentrations. Empirical evidence for global warming and for its impact on extreme weather events will be summarised and critically evaluated in the sections which follow.
IMPORTANCE
PROBLEM
BASIC DEFINITION
PREVIEW
CITATIONS (IN-TEXT REFERENCES)
– Surname of author(s) + year of publication– Direct quotations need quotation marks and page
number(s)
Observational learning can be defined as “the phenomenon whereby people develop patterns of behavior by observing the actions of others” (Mowen & Minor, 1998, p. 147).Surnames of authors
Year of publication
Page
book journal articlewebsite newspaper article
etc
The same basic principle for ALL sources
CITATIONS (more than one author)
For two authors, always include both:Blah, blah, blah, blah (Chang & Liu, 2009).
For three to five authors– include all surnames first timeBlah, blah, blah, blah (Hubbard, Thomas, & Varnham, 2001).
And then use et al. if you refer to the same source againBlah, blah, blah, blah (Hubbard et al., 2001).
For six or more authors, use et al. all the timeBlah, blah, blah, blah (Singh et al., 2011).
CITATIONS (SECONDARY SOURCES)
In a recently discovered private diary, Jane Austen describes the character as “my greatest challenge and most uncertain achievement” (as cited in Smith, 2012, p. 231).
But avoid these secondary references and, if possible, include a direct reference to the original source (you’ll find the details you need in the book you’ve used).
This period during which a learner can complete a task with the support of tools and/ or mentors is known as the Zone of Proximal Development (ZPD) (Vygotsky, 1978).
In this case, it doesn’t really matter that I haven’t read Vygotsky’s book myself – I read about this theory in a recent book, but I’m including a reference to the original book by Vygotsky [in its first publication in English translation].
CITATIONS (three ways)
According to Dunbar and Holmes (2003), cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred …..
Dunbar and Holmes (2003) claim / argue / suggest / state / provide evidence that cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred …..
Cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred to more traditional medical interventions in such cases (Dunbar & Holmes, 2003).
Most of the time, you’ll put the reference in brackets, just after you’ve finished with the information.
But sometimes you can include the author(s) in your sentence and then just put the year in brackets.
END OF TEXT REFERENCES
References
Finkelstein, S., Whitehead, J., & Campbell, A. (2009). Think again: Why good leaders make bad decisions and how to stop it happening to you. Cambridge, MA: Harvard Business School Press.
Kahnemann, D. (2003). Maps of bounded rationality: Psychology for behavioural economics. The American Economic Review 93(5), 1449-1475.
Kahnemann, D., Fredrickson, B. I., Schreiber, C.A., & Redelmeier, D.A. (1993). When more pain is preferred to less: Adding a better end. Psychological Science 4(6), 401-405.
Krause, T. R. (2008). The role of cognitive bias in safety decisions. Occupational Hazards 70(6), 28.
Simon, H. A. (1955). A behavioural model of rational choice. Quarterly Journal of Economics 69(1), 99-118.
White, E. (2009, February 14). Why good leaders make bad decisions. The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 13, 2012 from: http://online.wsj.com/article/SB123438338010974235.html
Use a YouTube video to help you with formatting – e.g. http://tinyurl.com/APAindenting
BOOK
Hamel, G. (2000). Leading the revolution. Boston, MA: Harvard Business School Press
surname, initial
(year) title citypublisher
For more than one author, include all names with initials (followed by . and ,)
Hubbard, J., Thomas, C., & Varnham, S. (2001). Principles of law for New Zealand business students (2nd ed.). Auckland, New Zealand: Pearson Education.
CHAPTER INEDITED BOOK
Biggins, G. (2009). Why I became a social worker. In P. Te Ara & T. Rogers (Eds.), Social work and social workers in New Zealand/Aotearoa (pp.102-120). Auckland, New Zealand: Insight Press.
Title of chapter – not in italics
Editors’ names – initial goes before and (Eds.), goes after!
Title of book – in italics
Page numbers of chapter – in brackets with pp. before
Author of chapter and year of publication
City & Publisher
CITY OF PUBLICATION
UK, NZ etc city, countryHarmondsworth, England: Penguin
Palmerston North, New Zealand: Dunmore Press
USAcity, state initials
Upper Saddle River, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates
Check title of book in library catalogue and/or Google if city of publication is not clear from the book itself
AustraliaEither state OR country
Milton, Qld: McGraw-Hill
Milton, Australia: McGraw-Hill
JOURNAL REFERENCE
Silverblatt, A. (2004). Media as a social institution. American Behavioral Scientist, 48(1), 35-42.
author’s nameyear Title (no italics)
journal name (italics)
volume & issue number
page numbers
doi:10.1080/09585190802707433
doi number (not always needed)
WEB PAGE REFERENCE
Statistics New Zealand. (2009). Mapping trends in the Auckland region. Retrieved from http://www.stats.govt.nz/Publications/PopulationStatistics/mapping-trends-in-the-auckland-region.aspx.
author’s name (or organisation that owns the web site)
Year (if it’s missing put (n.d.)
Retrieved from followed by full internet address
Title of page (in italics)
REFERENCING SOFTWARE
Endnote ($36 from library – and make sure you go to a tutorial)
http://tinyurl.com/endnoteguide
http://www.zotero.org/
Free Programmes to download (but you’ll need to learn how to use them, through online tutorials etc)
Use the references tab in the toolbar
Microsoft Word 2007 +
Click ‘insert citation’ + add new sourceTake care with names (Hamel, Gary) and type of source
http://www.mendeley.com
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Selected guides to Education / PG writing
http://tinyurl.com/PGwritingadvice1 http://tinyurl.com/PGwritingadvice2 http://tinyurl.com/PGwritingadvice3 http://tinyurl.com/PGwritingadvice4 http://tinyurl.com/PGwritingadvice5
Swales, J.M. & Feak, C.B. (1996). Academic writing for graduate students. Ann Arbor, MI: The University of Michigan Press.
Emerson, L. & McPherson, J. (Eds.). (1997). Writing guidelines for education students. Palmerston North, New Zealand: Dunmore Press.
BOOKS
WEBSITES
Martin McMorrow © 2014
with grateful acknowledgement of contributions from Vanessa van der Ham (slide 11), Natilene Bowker (slide 4) and Jacinta Hawkins(slides
11 & 13)
This PowerPoint Presentation and the accompanying materials are the intellectual property of the Centre for Teaching and Learning, Massey
University and may not be used, except for personal study, without written permission from the copyright owner.