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Academic Writing Writing Your Dissertation Report
& Other Long Assignments
The abstract and key words
The purpose of keywords is to allow readers to search and find your
report, or reference to your report, in both printed and electronic forms.
Keywords (if required) should be placed after the abstract in
alphabetical order. Think about the words a person might type into a
search engine to find the type of research you have done. The abstract
and keywords should cover a single page only.
The abstract offers an overview to the reader of the content of the
report so they can decide whether it is worth reading. This page should
be headed by your name and the title of the project, followed by an
abstract that must not exceed 250 words, and up to ten keywords (or
phrases) that highlight the subject matter. The abstract should detail
the content and key findings of the project in such a way that its aim,
approach and outcome(s) are clearly identifiable to the reader.
Example
Abstract
This aim of this dissertation examines Wal-Mart’s branding strategy in China. As China’s retailing industry is booming in recent years, many international retailers like Wal-Mart and Carrefour have entered the market and made the competition more intensive. As Wal-Mart’s brand name is associated with low prices and the company has put much stress on this image. The objective of this research is to measure the perception of Chinese consumers to the Wal-Mart image. A structured questionnaire was designed to test consumer perceptions and attitudes. The survey was conducted in Shenzin City, China, over a four week period with a sample of 133 people. Thirteen attributes have been raised to measure consumer attitudes and four other supermarkets selected to make a comparison with Wal-Mart.
Results of the research indicate that consumers have accepted Wal-Mart and rank it high on performance in several areas. But price is not the most important factor for customers when choosing a supermarket, since a low price strategy has been adopted by most of its competitors. Recommendations based on the survey results are made to Wal-Mart for its future development. As low price is no longer its unique competitive advantage, Wal-Mark must consider other strategies to reinforce its brand image. Keywords
Wal-Mart, China, Retailing, Supermarkets, Consumer Behaviour, Consumer Perception, Attitudes, Brand Image, Low Price Strategy, Customer Service
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The main body will be sub-divided into sections, and each section will lead
naturally in terms of structure to the next. Gradually your research report
reveals its sequence and contents to the reader. A research report will be
divided into broad sections as shown below:
Broad Sections Main Aim of Each Section
Introduction
The Introduction informs the reader what the research is about, and presents the overall research objective and specific research questions – and why. The introduction may also present and summarise the contents of the remaining sections to the reader
Background Information Section(s)
The background information section(s) puts the research into a particular social, commercial, theoretical or historical context. It puts your research into perspective and helps to explain the reasons for the research.
Literature Review
The aim of the literature review is to inform the reader what previous research has been done on the topic and how it has guided or informed your own research. For example, this can include how previous research it may have influenced your own methodology or how you may be building on what happened in previous research. The literature review will also summarise the main theoretical models, principles or practices that are relevant to your research.
Methodology
The Methodology section informs the reader what overall research methodology you adopted – and why - and what research tools (or methods) you adopted to gain and analyse your result. It can also involve discussing objectively the limitations of the methodology & methods used. It also describes the participants involved (how many/how they were selected/their characteristics etc).
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Result
The results section presents a summary of the data or other information you gathered. At this stage you just present and summarise the data or information without going into detailed discussion of the implications of your findings (this goes into the next section: ‘Discussion’).
Discussion
This section analyses & discusses the result, including implications, consequences, issues raised etc. It presents some resolution or answers to the main research questions. You may also want or need to connect the result in some way to the theories, models, practices etc you introduced in the literature review.
It may also include recommendations, although this could go into a separate ‘Recommendations’ section if there are a significant number of recommendations to be made.
Conclusion
The conclusion to the report reminds the reader of the main aim of your research, your methodology and the findings. You are also likely to point out the limitations of your research and how future research might take your findings a stage further.
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Choose Appropriate Sub-Headings
Although all research reports will include engagement with all the broad sections described on the previous page, the sub-headings chosen to label them with will vary from one report to the next. The order in which the information is presented may also vary a little; see four post-graduate research report examples below:
1. Title: Shopping in China – an Examination of Consumer Perception and Evaluation of Branding Strategy of Wal-Mart in China Sub-headings in main body of this report:
1. Introduction 2. Literature Review 3. Background 4. Methodology 5. Survey Findings 6. Discussion and
Recommendation 7. Conclusion
2. Title: To Develop a Human Resource Competency Framework for the Manufacturing Operation of Dunlop Latex Foam Limited Sub-headings in main body of this report
1. Introduction 2. Background: Human
Resources within Dunlop Latex Foam
3. Background: Competency and Skills Framework
4. Background: Delivering Strategic Aims
5. Summary of Key Literature 6. Key Performance Measures 7. Identifying a Framework for
Business 8. Business Benefits 9. Conclusions and
Recommendations
3. Title: Changing Personnel Management? An assessment of the personnel function leading business change in Small and Medium-sized Enterprises? Sub-headings in main body of this report:
1. Introduction 2. Scrutinising the Personnel
Function and the Search for Status (a background section divided into five sub-sections)
3. Methodology 4. Results 5. Discussion 6. Report Conclusions
4. Title: A Knowledge Management Strategy for a Leading Provider of E-Commerce Related Services Sub-headings in main body of this report:
1. Introduction (which included sub-sections on background, brief literature review & methodology)
2. Interviews 3. Interview Findings 4. Styles Survey 5. Survey Findings 6. Literature Search 7. Evaluation of Strategic
Options 8. Recommendations
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So, whilst all research projects will contain information that connect with
the broad section categories outlined on pages 9 & 10, they may be
included in an order best suited to assist the logical flow of ideas in the
report. It may be necessary too, to sub-divide long sections into sub-
sections to make the information more accessible and readable.
What to include in each section? The following is one approach to project
writing that can help you include all the relevant information into your sections.
The ‘5W & 1H’ Approach to Project Writing
This is a technique taught to journalists, and can work effectively for students who want to develop skills of critical analysis and report writing. It works by asking six interrogative questions of any theory, model, practice, or in this case, your research.
It can be used as a guide to help you focus on information you may need to present in each section. E.g.:
WHO? Who: might benefit/be disadvantaged/is or is not involved/developed the idea?
WHAT? What: are we taking for granted/assumptions are we making/ is implied that may not be true/ is missing/ is the background to this idea/is the wider significance/the advantages and negatives of the idea?
WHERE? Where: can it be applied/would it not be applicable/else could it be relevant?
WHY? Why: has this idea been developed/been introduced/should we pay any attention to it?
WHEN? When: is the idea applicable/not applicable/reasonable or unreasonable to apply/should we start or stop?
HOW? How: will the idea work in practice/be introduced/are people likely to react/will the idea be evaluated/we know or recognise success?
The grid on the following page will give you some examples of how these
questions can be applied to each of the broad sections of a research report.
These are just examples and there may be other questions you need to ask
because of the nature of your research.
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Introduction
What was the overall subject of your
research?
What was the main aim of your research?
What specific questions or issues did you
address in your research?
Why did you pursue these questions or
issues in your research?
Did you have any expectations of what you
might find out at the start of your research? If
so, what and why, and have these changed,
and why?
How is your report organised? What are the
main features of each section of your report?
What should the reader especially look out
for in your report (i.e. key points)?
What makes your research different to
previous research?
Background
Information
What are the main goods and services of
any company involved?
what is the historical/social/ or economic
background of any company or organisation
researched?
If relevant, who are the main people involved
in the research and their roles and
responsibilities?
What are the values, culture or policies
underpinning any organisation being
researched?
If relevant, why has a particular situation
arisen?
Literature
Review
What previous research has already been
done on this topic? Who did it, when and
why?
What conclusions did previous researchers
reach?
How relevant are these conclusions today
generally and for your own research?
How does your research build on previous
research? How is it similar or different?
How has previous research influenced your
research methodology and methods?
Who are the principal commentators &
theorists in the subject you researched?
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What theories, models or practices were
particularly relevant to prepare or analyse
your research topic and findings?
Methodology
What philosophical approach did you take to
your research, e.g.
positivistic/phenomenological?
Qualitative/quantitative?
Inductive/deductive?
Why did you adopt this approach?
In retrospect was this the correct approach?
What methods (to gather primary and/or
secondary data) did you decide to use and
why?
What criteria did you adopt for collecting this
data (e.g. target number, age, gender,
occupational etc) and why?
What was the target sample number? What
type of sample was it, e.g. a random
sample?
What was the actual number you achieved?
Why was there a shortfall?
Where did you collect the data?
When did you collect it?
Who was involved in the collection?
How did you collect it?
How did you analyse it?
What logistical or other problems did you
encounter in collecting or analysing it?
Results
What was the result of your findings?
Were the results affected in any way by any
event, situation or phenomenon?
If there was a shortfall in the amount of data
you gained, how have you compensated or
dealt with this situation?
How does the amount of data collected by
you compare or contrast with previous
research in this area of enquiry?
What is the best way of presenting these
results in the report?
Discussion
How do the findings connect with your
overall research aim and research
questions?
What do the findings mean in theory and/or
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practice?
How unexpected/expected were some or all
of the findings?
How can the findings be applied?
When can they be applied?
Who could apply them?
What recommendations can you make
based on your research findings?
Conclusion
The introduction of your report was the place to
tell the reader what you are going to say. The
conclusion is an opportunity to remind readers
what you have told them!
This sounds trite, but in fact, in a long report it is
important to do this, as the reader may need
reminding of important points you made earlier
in the report.
The conclusion pulls the threads of your
research together and leaves you and the
reader with a sense of achievement.
The concluding section therefore can contain
the following answers to these questions:
what are the main aims & findings of your
research? Remind the reader of these key
parts in your research.
What are the practical or applied applications
of your findings for others?
What were the unexpected problems that
arose and the limitations of the research?
How future research might build on where
you left off?
What will be the last sentence you will write?
Make it a good one.
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10 Writing Tips
1. Good writers have to continually revise and rewrite until they are satisfied
with the final result. Don’t underestimate the time this takes.
2. Talk to people about your research and explain it to them. By explaining it
to others you will explain it to yourself.
3. Always keep in mind your original research aims and research questions
and remind the reader of these at regular intervals: in the introduction,
literature review, methodology, findings – in virtually in every section - you
need to remind the reader (and yourself) what your research is about.
4. Always keep in mind the central point or findings of your report and
emphasise these in your writing. Emphasise them in the results section
and emphasise them again in the conclusion.
5. Start writing early. Write a section at a time as you complete them; don’t
try writing the report all at once. Show your supervisor each section at a
time as you write them, unless you have agreed another arrangement.
Give yourself plenty of time for revision, correcting and for formatting the
document – this can be very time-consuming.
6. In a long report, it is necessary to remind the reader of the main points in
each section. Summarise the main points made at the end of each
section and build the anticipation of the reader for what is to come in the
subsequent sections. The example below illustrates how a student
concludes his literature review and sets the scene to move on to the next
section.
The literature has demonstrated a range of views regarding change agency
and the extent of their adoption can now be assessed through a survey relating
to the role of the personnel management function in UK SMEs. This study will
now discuss, in the following chapter, the extent to which modern conceptions
of the personnel function, in particular business change, exist among UK
SMEs and the nature of such a business change role.
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7. Write with the ear. A sentence may look correct on paper, but often
sounds jumbled or rambling if read aloud. Listen to your sentences in your
head as you write, and do not write anything that sounds false or
uncomfortable to say aloud.
8. Write for the eye as well. Make the document visually appealing, and use
plenty of white space in margins, between sections and paragraphs to make
the document look good (see also guidelines on line spacing & type font in
Appendix 4).
9. Keep your writing clear and simple. Avoid long, convoluted sentences - and don’t fill them with jargon or pretentious waffle. For tips on good writing visit the Plain English Campaign website www.plainenglish.co.uk
10. If you are concerned about your spelling and grammar, try and get your
sections proof read before you hand them to your supervisor. This is not a
task you should expect your supervisor, tutor or any member of staff at the
university to do.
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Appendix or Appendices
What can be included in Appendices?
Copies of any questionnaires used
Source codes
Technical documentation produced during the solution process, e.g.
URD, SRD, DDD, or a User Manual
Lengthy tables of results or other data (you can include extracts from
these in the body of the main report)
Other information not absolutely necessary in the main body of the text,
but which provides additional insights and information to the background,
development or discussion stages of the report.
Bibliography
A bibliography is the total list of sources you consulted in preparation for your
report, whether you cited or referred directly to them or not in your report.
What evidence must be referenced?
The source of all statistics from external sources used in your report
The source of all quotations used
The source of specialist knowledge you have paraphrased or summarised
The source of any definitions quoted or paraphrased
The source of any previous external research summarised
The source of any theory, model, idea, or working practice that you refer
to in your text
However, you don’t need to reference:
Common knowledge (things that most people would know or easily find
out)
Undisputed historical facts
Your own opinions, observations, and ideas – but make sure you make it
clear in the report that they are your views. At those points in the report
you can take ‘ownership’ of them by using the term ‘I’; for example, “ I
would argue that…”; “It is my view that…” etc.
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Example of an introduction from a Masters level dissertation
Introduction
“It is our people who make the difference where it matters most…”
(Tesco 2002)
“This is a global success story made possible by the quality and
determination of over 100,000 people worldwide.” (Vodafone 2002)
“…we believe that competitive advantage is achieved through our
people…” (Kellogg 2002)
Employees are important to the competitive success of organisations and yet
the role of a business function dedicated to the management of people has
never been a glamorous one. Over the past 50 years in particular it has been
subject to heavy criticism and has sought to re-invent itself to attain the status
and the respect of other management functions.
Writing in 1955, Peter Drucker asked “Is Personnel Management Bankrupt?”
In concluding that it was not, he heavily criticised the state of the function.
Describing it a “…largely a collection of incidental techniques without much
internal cohesion.” (p243). Drucker demonstrated that the personnel function
had failed to deliver on the promise of relating how workers and work
elements may be managed (p253/4). Given this view, it is unsurprising that he
perceived personnel workers as constantly worrying about an inability to
prove their worth to the organisation (p243).
Consequently the function has sought to identify new ways in which a
valuable contribution can be made and demonstrated. The most recent trend
to emerge from this search has been a desire to become business change
agents and there is evidence suggesting that this approach has been adopted
in some large UK businesses.
This study assesses the extent to which a change agent role forms part of the
personnel management function1 in small and medium sized enterprises
(SMEs). It also aims to survey attitudes towards the effectiveness of, and
establish a future direction for, the function in this role. In doing this, the study
builds on the work of Storey (1992), Caldwell (2001) and others who identified
the presence of a change agent element in the responsibilities of the modern
personnel manager. However, unlike these studies of large organisations with
personnel specialists, this assessment considers a group of organisations
1 The term “personnel management” is used throughout to describe a function, or set of functions,
aimed at systematically managing people. The debate surrounding personnel and human resource
management is covered elsewhere in the literature and is not strictly relevant to this study, however the
main differences are outlined below in the section headed “The Search for Status”
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reported to be less sophisticated in their approach to people management
issues (Duberley and Walley, 1995).
Contents of this report
Chapter Two introduces personnel management in SMEs before considering
the function as viewed through academic literature. This will outline how the
challenges to its validity and business-worth have resulted in an “introspective
neurosis” (Guest 1991, p165). This concern with status as a theme of
personnel management is traced through the principal works of the past 25
years to the identification of business change as a factor of the role. The
nature of this new component is then contrasted with the views expressed by
authors working in the discipline of business change.
Having established the development and current state of the function, Chapter
Three is concerned with the survey methodology and Chapter Four presents a
report of key findings. Chapter Five has three broad sections. The first
establishes that SMEs perceive a need for business change capability and
consider the ability to change an important factor in their continuing business
success. In light of this, the second section looks at how effective the
personnel management function is thought to be at undertaking a spectrum of
change activities. In the final part of Chapter Five, the themes arising from the
preceding appraisal are compared with the literature surveyed in Chapter
Two, demonstrating the extent to which the survey findings break new ground.
This informs the identification of a new form of change agent.
Chapter Six forms a review of the key ideas outlined here, their practical
application, and a look towards how this research could be developed. This
includes a brief consideration of how this study is limited and how such issues
could be improved upon in subsequent work.
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