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A. Theme and Rheme Analysis
Text 1: Entry
a. The numbat is an unmistakable slender marsupial with a pointed muzzle and short erect ears. ‖ The body is reddish brown ‖ but the rump is much darker ‖ and has about six white bars across it. ‖ The eye has a black stipe though it ‖ and the long bushy tail is yellowish ‖ The toes are strongly clawed and very effective in digging out termites. ‖ The tongue is extremely long, as in all mammalian ant or termite eaters. ‖ Unlike most marsupials, the numbat is active during the day. ‖ It shelters in hollow logs. ‖ It was once relatively common ‖ but now lives only in a small area of S.W. South Australia.
No.Theme Rheme
Textual TopicalMarked Unmarked
1. The numbat is an unmistakable slender marsupial with a pointed muzzle and short erect ears.
2. The body is reddish brown3. but the rump Is much darker4. and has about six white bars across it5. The eye has a black stipe though it6. and the long
bushy tailis yellowish
7. The toes are strongly clawed and very effective in digging out termites
8. The tongue is extremely long, as in all mammalian ant or termite eaters
9. Unlike most marsupials,
the numbat is active during the day
10. It shelters in hollow logs.11. It was once relatively common12. but now lives only in a small area of S.W.
South Australia.
Text 2: Explanation
After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas carry heavy loads of silt, sand and rock fragments. ‖ As they reach the flatter area of desert basins ‖ they slow down ‖ and their waters may soak quickly into the basin floor. ‖ Then the streams drop their loads; ‖ first they drop the heaviest material – the stones, ‖ then the silt. ‖ These short lived streams become choked by their own deposits ‖ and they spread their load in all directions. ‖ After some time, fan or con-shaped deposits of gravel, sand silt and clay are formed around each valley of canyon outlet. ‖ These are called alluvial fans.
No.Theme Rheme
Textual TopicalMarked Unmarked
1. After flash floods
desert streams from upland areas carry heavy loads of silt, sand and rock fragments
2. As they reach the flatter area of desert basins
3. they slow down4. and their waters may soak quickly into the basin
floor.5. Then the streams drop their loads;6. first they drop the heaviest material – the
stones7. then the silt.8. These short
lived streamsbecome choked by their own deposits
9. and they spread their load in all directions.10. After some
timefan or con-shaped deposits of gravel, sand silt and clay are formed around each valley of canyon outlet.
11. These are called alluvial fans.
B. Mood and Modality AnalysisText 1: Extract from the expose
Teacher: Minor clause: AlrightMinor clause: a quick summary of what we have just seen.Minor clause: Quick
Andrew: Minor clause: LeverTeacher: imperative
Hold onPredicator Adjunct
Residue
Daniel: Minor clause: SeesawTeacher: Minor clause: Right.
Just wait till we are all hereAdjunct Predicator Adjunct Subject Finite Comp Adjunct
MoodResidue
Have you got enough scrap paper on your desk please?Finite Subject Predicator Adjunct
Mood Residue
You ‘ll probably only need two or three piecesS F Adjunct Predicator Comp.Mood R
Minor clause: Right,
you may have to use the stand.S F Pred. Comp.Mood Residue
Steven and Brad the sun ‘s shining inside.Compl. S F Predicator Adjunct
Mood Residue
Minor clause: Alright, thank you. Solved your problem?
You ’ll probably need to see
that film tomorrow,
S F Adj Pr Compl AdjMood
Minor clause: as an extra, to get you to get your ideas really sorted out.
Right,
let’s have a summary of what was the film
basically about.
S p C Ad
They seem to mention two basic machines.
S F C
Minor clause: Um, Andrew?Andrew: Minor clause: Levers.Teacher:
It has an Australian pronunciation
S F C
Simon: Minor clause: LeversTeacher: Minor clause: Yeah, leave her alone. Lever and ….
Brad: Minor clause: An inclines plane.Teacher: Minor clause: An inclined plane.
Hold onPredicator Adjunct
Residue
Hold onPredicator Adjunct
Residue
now they extended these two basic machines,
into five separate machines.
Ad S P Com Ad
In that movie
they extended them out,
they Extended out some of the machines.
Ad S Pr Comp Adj
They used the lever.S P Com
Hold onPredicator Adjunct
Residue
Hold onPredicator Adjunct
Residue
Teacher: Minor clause: Joanne?Joanne: Minor clause: Lever.Teacher: Minor clause: No
we have done a leverS F P C
Brad: Minor clause: Baseball bat.Teacher: Minor clause: Baseball bat. Any bat really.Joanne: Minor clause: Flying fox.Teacher: Minor clause: Pardon, flying fox?Kane: Minor clause: Clothesline.Teacher: Minor clause: And what with it?Kane: Minor clause: A wheel.Teacher: Minor clause: A wheel?
Minor clause: Yeah, no
you ’re right.S F C
Minor clause: Clotheslines.
That was a…. what did she use on the clothesline?
Com Wh-Comp F S P Ad
Several: Minor clause: Pulley.Teacher: Minor clause: A pulley,
.
which is a type of leverWh-Comp F S
Minor clause: Except of course
you ’ve got also a what with it?S F P C
Minor clause: A wind lass.
Anything else that wasn’t Mentioned that
possibly uses the principles of a lever.
Comp S F P Adj P Com
Steven: Minor clause: Door handle.Teacher: Minor clause: A door handle, good one, hey.…………………………….Teacher: Minor clause: Yep, Righto,
let’s have a look
at an inclined plane
on well actually
S P Adj Adj
that ’s a type of tool
which you have seen In action, come to think of it
S F Com Wh-Comp
S F P Adj
Maybe we can get
six uses of an inclined plane.
F S P Comp
Minor clause: Um Aranthi?Aranthi: Minor clause: StairsTeacher: Minor clause: Stairs, right.
Minor clause: Great answer.
Text 2: Extract from children in task collaboration
C:
Ok, we are doing this one.Minor S F P C
A: So we need that.
C: Minor clause: OK.K: Minor clause Hey,.
I got itS P C
C: Minor clause: Oh, excellent.Y: Minor clause:Looks good.
C:
We need a heavy nut.
S P C
K:
There is one off the um.S F C
N:
We needS P
C: Minor clause: Yeah, yeahN:
Go ask Bill.C P S
A:
We need a thin saw bladeS P C
C: Minor clause: Use this.N: Minor clause: Oh yeah.A:
Do you have a matchbox anywhere?
F S P C
N:
Do you want me to ask Mr.
Kelly?F S P C A
A: Minor clause: Empty one.
K:
We got a heavy nuts.S P C
K:
We need to tie some strings.S P C A
Ai:
Now we need another matchboxA S P C
N: it doesn’t, it?
It doesn’t, need a matchbox does it?S F P C Q’tag
A: Minor clause: Yeah.K:
Now we need one string,A S P C
we ’ve got thatwe ’ve got thisS F P C
A: Minor clause: OK,
we need a cork.S P C
K:
Where are we going to get some of those?Wh-Comp F S P C
C:
What we need is wire and a cork.
Wh-Comp S P F C
A: Minor clause:OK,
could you ask for one cork and one wire?F S P C
C. Transitivity Analysis
Text 1: Entry
1. The numbat is an unmistakable slender marsupial with a pointed muzzle and short erect ears. ‖ 2. The body is reddish brown ‖ 3. but the rump is much darker ‖ 4. and has about six white bars across it. ‖ 5. The eye has a black stipe though it ‖ 6. and the long bushy tail is yellowish. ‖ 7. The toes are strongly clawed and very effective in digging out termites. ‖ 8. The tongue is extremely long, as in all mammalian ant or termite eaters. ‖ 9. Unlike most marsupials, the numbat is active during the day. ‖ 10. It shelters in hollow logs. ‖ 11. It was once relatively common ‖ 12. but now lives only in a small area of S.W. South Australia. ‖
Process Type Circumstance1. is Relational, intensive,
identifying2. is Relational, intensive,
identifying3. is Relational, intensive,
identifying4. has Relational, possessive
attributive,across it Cause, reason
5. has Relational, possessive attributive,
through it Cause, reason6. is Relational, intensive,
identifying7. are Relational, intensive,
identifying8. Is Relational, intensive,
identifyingas in all mammalian ant or termite eaters
Accompaniment, additive
9. Unlike most marsupials
Manner, comparison
Is Relational, intensive, identifying
during the day Extent, temporal10. Shelters Relational, circumstantial as
attributein hollow logs Location, spatial, place
11. was Relational, intensive, identifying
12. Lives Relational, circumstantial as attribute
in a small area of S.W. South Australia
Location, spatial, place
Text 2: Explanation
1. After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas carry heavy loads of silt, sand and rock fragments. ‖ 2. As they reach the flatter area of desert basins ‖ 3. they slow
down ‖ 4 and their waters may soak quickly into the basin floor. ‖ 5. Then the streams drop their loads; ‖ 6. first they drop the heaviest material – the stones, ‖ 7. then [they drop] the silt. ‖ 8. These short lived streams become choked by their own deposits ‖ 9. and they spread their load in all directions. ‖ 10. After some time, fan or con-shaped deposits of gravel, sand silt and clay are formed around each valley of canyon outlet. ‖ 11. These are called alluvial fans.
Process Type Circumstance1. After flash floods Location, temporal
carry Material, actor2. reach Material, goal3. Slow down Material, goal4. may soak Material, goal
Quickly Manner, qualityinto the basin floor Location, spatial
5. drop Material, actor6. drop Material, actor7. drop Material, actor8. Become choked Mental, phenomena9. spread Material, actor10. After some time Location, temporal
are formed Mental, phenomenaaround each valley of canyon outlet
Accompaniment, additive
11. are called Mental, phenomena
Text 3There are many species of whales. They are conveniently divided into toothed and baleen categories. The toothed whales are found world-wide in great numbers. The largest is the Sperm whale., which grows to about the size of a boxcar. Other species familiar to Canadians are the Beluga or white whale, the Narwhal with its unicorn-like tusk, the Killer whale or Orca, the Pilot or Pothead whale, which is commonly stranded on beaches, the Spotted and Spinner Dolphins that create a problem for tuna seiners, and the Porpoises which we commonly see along our shores.
There are fewer species of the larger baleen whales, that filter krill and small fish through their baleen plates. The largest is the Blue whale which is seen frequently in the Gulf of St. Lawrence. It reaches a length of 100 feet and a weight of 200 tons, equivalent to about 30 African elephants. The young are 25 feet long at birth and put on about 200 lbs. a day on their milk diet. Other species are: the Fins which at a length of 75 ft. blow spouts of 20 ft., the fast swimming Seis, the Grays so commonly seen on migrations along our Pacific coast between Baja California and Bering Sea the Bowheads of Alaskan waters, the Rights, so seriously threatened, the Humpbacks
enjoyed by tourist in such places as Hawaii and Alaska, the smaller Bryde’s whales and the smallest Minke whales, which continue to be abundant worldwide.
As with the growing interest in birding, increasing number of whale watchers can distinguishing the various species of whales.
Process Typearearedividedare foundisgrowsarewithisstrandedcreateseearefilterthroughis reachesareareseenthreatenedenjoyedcontinue