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Oh Look At The Hole-Punch! Look At The Cute Little Hole
-Punch!
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Int. Office Cubicle Late Afternoon
Fade In, camera now on a sleeping hole -punch as the hand
appears
slowly into the screen as the hole -punch snores.The hand
holding
the paper moves it slowly towa rd the hole-punch.As the hand
inches
towards the hole-punch it awakes and is shocked.The Hand
immediately jab the paper forward as the hole -punch dodges the
jabs.
Finally the hand throws down the paper and begins typing.
Camera
Fades Out.
Act 03
Scene 6
Int. Office Cubicle Late Afternoon
Fade In, Camera focus on the hand typing on the keyboard.The
Hole -
punch come in to screen and nudges the arm once and waits.
Moment
later it nudges again, this time stopping the hand from
typing.This
time the hole-punch extends it mouth to suggest food.The
hand
brings toward the paper as hole -punch clamps down punching
holes in
the paper.The hand starts typing again.As the hole -punch looks
up
it checks if the hand is still typing.Acknowledging this the hol
e-
punch continues punching holes in the paper.This is the point
the
hand notices and immediately grabs the paper and tugs.The
paper
tears and covers screen.The Pap er falls past screen and the
image
see the hand tapping the desk as the hole -bunch
laughs.Animation
Ends.
The Step Outline
Act One: Introduce Problem
Hand opens box contains the new hole -punch and places it on
the
desk.
The hand gets the hole -punch to punch a document which it
does.
When he tries to hole-punch another documents the whole
punch
refuses turning away.
Act Two: Fighting The Problem
The hand attempts again to get the hole -punch to cooperate but
this
time by using an airplane noise to get the outcome.The result
sees
the hole-punch blow raspberries and laugh .
Attempting for a second time the hand goes in with Choo -choo
noises.
This time the hole-punch turn away every time the paper gets
close
say no...no...no
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In final attempt seems almost successful as the hole -punch is
asleep
but as the paper get near the hole -punch awakes and dodges the
jabs
the hand makes.
Act Three: Resolving the Problem
The hand is working on the keyboard, as the hole -punch nudges
the
hand to get its attention for feeding. Yet when giving paper
the
hole-punch tries eating it all whilst the hand tugs to get it
off
the hole-punch. Ripping the document is ruined.
The Premise
The story is of an office worker who tries to get his childish,
new
hole-punch to punch papers.
The Logline
This story is a depiction of an office worker battle to get co
-
operation from his newly bought childish hole-punch.Throughout
he
uses different baby techniques to get it to punch the paper
which in
the end goes all wrong.
Character Biographies
The Office Worker
The Office worker is a fresher at the new agency and his all
about
the best impressions. During his second day at the job his big
boss
asking to right memos for his next lecture. Knowing this the
worker
hit Staples and purchased new stationary.The memos will have to
go
in a folder as the manager request. Yet when inheriting a new
hold -
punchhe didnt know how hard it would be.
The Hole-Punch
After travelling from China ; the newly made hole-punch lays
in
hibernation waiting for it new master. Yet for months the box
lay
dominant. Yet as one day the hole-punch shell rattle awaking
the
hole-punch. No sooner he was born into the world as a bright
light
comes from the top of his box. What it doesnt know is what to
come.
