The Dirty Dozen

The 12 most common mistakes made by students that cause the professor to

deduct points from their papers.

Number 1:Never use a comma to separate two complete sentences. That error is a “run-on sentence.” When you have two complete sentences, separate them with a semi-colon or a period.

Example:Writers who don’t know grammar write run-on sentences, they usually get failing grades. Writers who don’t know grammar write run-on sentences; they usually get failing grades. (separate the sentences with a semi-colon) Writers who don’t know grammar write run-on sentences, and they usually get failing grades. (add the conjunction)

Number 2:Use a comma to precede the conjunction (and, but, or) in a compound sentence (meaning the sentence has two subjects and two verbs)

Example:

An accreditation team will visit the Department of Journalism next week, and members will interview students and faculty.

Number 3:Do not use a comma to precede the conjunction in a sentence that has a two verbs but only one subject. That is not a compound sentence.)

Example:

An accreditation team will visit the Department of Journalism next week and interview students and faculty.

Number 4:Use a comma to separate a dependent clause from the main clause when the dependent clause precedes the main clause. These clauses often begin with “although” or “because.”

Example:

Because he loved what he was doing, he felt the work was fun.

Number 5:Do not use a comma to separate a dependent clause from the main clause when the dependent clause follows the main clause.

Example:

He felt the work was fun because he loved what he was doing.

Number 6:Put a comma after the name of a city and a state or the day and the year in a date. Do not use two letter state postal abbreviations.

Example:

The political candidate visited Muncie, Ind., on Jan. 23, 2007, before going on to Dayton, Ohio.

Also note: Use real abbreviations, not post office abbreviations [Ind. Instead of IN] in journalism writing.

Number 7:An apostrophe and an “s” is used to indicate the possessive form of a singular noun. Do not use an apostrophe before an “s” when the noun is plural, but not possessive. Do use the apostrophe after the “s” when the plural noun is also possessive.

Example: The committees [two committees] are meeting now.

The committee’s [singular possessive] assignment is difficult.

Number 8:Hyphenate compound modifiers (or adjectives) of nouns, such as “4-year-old boy,” except when a modifier ends in “ly” (such as “commonly broken rules”).

Example:

The well-worn house needed a paint job and lots of work.

The easily-misunderstood rule was often broken.

Number 9:

Pronoun disagreement. Use “it” or “its” to refer to a singular collective noun instead of “they” or “their.” When you use “they” or “their” the pronoun must refer to at least two people and not “he” or she.” Avoid gender traps by using plural antecedents. (“students” and not “student’).

Example:

The popular magazine announced that it (not “they”) will no longer accept cigarette ads.

The downtown store is having its (not “their”) annual sale.

Number 10:Over-capitalization. Do not capitalize a word to emphasize it or make it seem more important. Only formal proper names of people, places, companies, institutions, etc. should be capitalized.

Example:

Most writers know to write “University of Massachusetts” or “Jones Manufacturing Company.” But when you refer to them later, you should say “the university” or “the company” and not “the University” or “the Company.”

Number 11:Incomplete sentences. A clause beginning with “although’ or “because” is not a complete sentence and cannot stand by itself.

Example:

Although the Indianapolis Colts are playing in the Super Bowl.

Because the unemployment rate is now about ten percent.

(these are not complete sentences)

Number 12:Quotation mark punctuation. Periods and commas always go inside quotation marks.

Example:

“It was a riot,” he said.

“My professor told me ‘don’t do it,’” but added, “I did it anyway.”