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Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode

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Page 1: Pizza by the Slice · PIZZA by the SLICE sign (signifying the title of the cartoon), then zooms out to show the entire store. The E on the NEON open sign flickers. (should we revise

Pizza by the SlicePilot Episode

Page 2: Pizza by the Slice · PIZZA by the SLICE sign (signifying the title of the cartoon), then zooms out to show the entire store. The E on the NEON open sign flickers. (should we revise

Scene

1A

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Notes

Establishing shot of store from outside. The camera pauses on the PIZZA by the SLICE sign (signifying the title of the cartoon), then zooms out to show the entire store.The E on the NEON open sign flickers.(should we revise the store design? I know I took off the second floor for storage and living and whatnot.)

Scene

2A

Duration

25:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Shows the ninja JIM staring frustratingly at the camera.

Scene

2A

Duration

25:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

*inhale*

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 1/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

2A

Duration

25:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

JIM's face then changes to a hopeless sigh.

Scene

2A

Duration

25:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: ...OK guys...

Scene

2A

Duration

25:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Today is the big day.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 2/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

2B

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: "The food critic is coming in today and..."

Action Notes

CHLOE'S (sitting on the right looking away) scarf is flowing in the wind on its own.

Notes

(In final version include table condiments (parmesean, ketchup, etc) and notes on sales to windows. Play up the Japanese motif of the store with an Americanized feel. some combination of traditional Japanese architecture, and the stylings of IM Pei and Frank Lloyd

NO PANEL

Wright.)

Scene

2C

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: ...you guys know what this will do for our business if this guy is impressed.

Action Notes

First shot of CHLOE and KIYOSHI

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 3/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

2D

Duration

25:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: We can be as well known as

Scene

2D

Duration

25:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: ...The Domino Mafia(Bottom left)...

Slugging

Dominos Mafia panel comes in from bottom left.

Scene

2D

Duration

25:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: ...The Roman Ceasers, or even the...

Slugging

Roman Ceasers panel comes in from bottom right corner.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 4/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

2D

Duration

25:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Samurai Pizza Hutts!

Slugging

Samurai panel trucks in from above.

Scene

2D

Duration

25:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

JIM pauses and lookes over in CHLOE'S direction with skepticism.

Scene

2E

Duration

15:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE is still nodding her head while Kiyoshi glances in her direction.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 5/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

2E

Duration

15:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Chloe! PAY ATTENTION!

Scene

2E

Duration

15:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: *muttering* I am paying attention... mrmph...

Scene

2F

Duration

15:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Then act like it! Today's not the day for not listening!

Action Notes

Jim leans back in the booth.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 6/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

Page 8: Pizza by the Slice · PIZZA by the SLICE sign (signifying the title of the cartoon), then zooms out to show the entire store. The E on the NEON open sign flickers. (should we revise

Scene

2F

Duration

15:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: The last thing we need is another delivery fiasco that tarnishes our good na----

Action Notes

Jim leans forward, Chloe takes notice of Jim's comment.

Scene

2F

Duration

15:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE muffles her laugh with her hands. Jim's brow collides with his glare.

Scene

2G

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: (still laughing) That's old news, bro! Especially considering how much of a non-issue it was...

Action Notes

CHLOE looks at JIM, then shrugs her shoulders, smirking.

Notes

As this scene ends a whooshing sound is heard as this shot pans left, with the next shot following directly afterwards.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 7/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

3A

Duration

15:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Cut to a shot of the entire city. CHLOE jumps from roof to roof. Fast swishing lines indicate CHLOE's speed. A red scarf traces her movements. CHLOE jumps out of frame to the right...

Scene

3A

Duration

15:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Same shot... CHLOE appears in the foreground, flying from the bottom to the top of the frame as one huge jump.

Scene

3A

Duration

15:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE leaves the frame in a blur. Her scarf is visible from the blur, touching the bottom of the frame to indicate it's ridiculous length.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 8/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

A silhouette of CHLOE jumps and twists through the air. The scarf traces her trajectory.

Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 9/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 10/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Scene

3B

Duration

40:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: "I GOTS PIZZAS FOR YOUR MOUTH HOLE!"

Action Notes

*doorbell rings*

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 11/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

Customer 1: Ooh!

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 enters shot and opens the door.

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: Hey! My mouth needed this! You were so fast too... Keep the change!

Action Notes

CHLOE appears with her hood on. It conceals everything but her eyes.

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Coolies! Later!

Action Notes

CHLOE takes the cash in hand, then strikes a ninja pose.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 12/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE jumps in the air. The customer watches her scarf follow...

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

....and follow...

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

... and continuously follow with the incredible length of her scarf emphasized.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 13/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Scarf is still going up as the door closes.

Notes

Camera cuts to a medium shot of the customer. Same angle.

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 turns toward the camera and licks his lips as he hums happily. He opens the pizza box...

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

10

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

and then starts to shed tears...

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 14/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

11

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The pizza has exploded in the box from all of Chloe's acrobatics during delivery. All that is left is cheese sticking everywhere. (sad music plays)

Scene

4A

Duration

01:00:00

Panel

12

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Camera zooms in slowly while he cries.

Scene

5A

Duration

20:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

*pause*

Action Notes

JIM's eyebrow raises in skepticism.

Slugging

Camera Cuts in from stage right.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 15/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

5A

Duration

20:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI is chuckling to himself. Chloe shrugs her hands hoping for a bid from Jim.

Scene

5A

Duration

20:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

Chloe: *sigh* Ok that was one time.

Scene

5A

Duration

20:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: But it's hard out here for a run-down Ninja Shop! Until we get--

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 16/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

5B

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: a cool cannon to make delivers like the Samurai, there's no other way we can compete!

Notes

Include the sound of a group of people grunting... "YAAAAH!"

Scene

5C

Duration

10:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Maybe so, but they still get their pizzas there safely...

Scene

5C

Duration

10:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Although I don't know how breaking the sound barrier makes for a safe pizza. We tried that once with smoke bomb deliveries... that didn't work either.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 17/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Door opens. Customer 1 stares disapprovingly, remembering what happened the last time a pizza was delivered.

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 18/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 examines the pizza box while CHLOE motions for her pay.

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Customer 1 lifts up his hand...

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

and drops money into CHLOE's hand almost daring for something to be wrong with the pizza.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 19/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: NINJA VANISH!

Action Notes

CHLOE jumps and turns around.

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE disappears in a smoke cloud.

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 20/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

10

Duration

05:00

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

11

Duration

05:00

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

12

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Pizza box explodes with smoke too.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 21/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

13

Duration

05:00

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

14

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 looks at the box, emotionally distraught.

Scene

6A

Duration

01:15:00

Panel

15

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 drops pizza box. Pizza box is empty.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 22/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

7A

Duration

15:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

Chloe: AHA! See! and that was your idea! You're supposed to know that our pizzas are capable of two-way travel before we use experimental stuff! At least I know my route when I jump from buildings!

Scene

7A

Duration

15:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: *sigh*

Scene

7A

Duration

15:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: (frustrated) Look, just use the car next time. Considering what happened the last time, we need to be as safe as possible with delivering pizzas!

Action Notes

JIM points towards the delivery vehicle outside.

Notes

(it's understood it's actually on a different side, but pointing backwards for visual coherency)

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 23/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

8A

Duration

25:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Pause camera for a second on the pizza box with a ton of markings. Then pan upward.

Scene

8A

Duration

25:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: HOOOOOOO!

Scene

8A

Duration

25:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

slams hand onto pizza box, and smoke appears.

Notes

Bird's eye view. Camera quickly zooms out from her hand.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 24/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

8A

Duration

25:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Scene

8A

Duration

25:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Pizza box is gone.

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Cut to scene in livingroom. CUSTOMER 1 repaired his glasses. And now has a bandage from previous smokebomb.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 25/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Explosion appears

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Customer notices pizza box, panicing in memory of the last flashback.

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Customer relaxes.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 26/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUSTOMER's fingers move up and down in the classic "I'm ready to eat" pose.

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

A living FOX made of cheese and pepperoni is in the box. It's licking itself when he opens it. The fox has 3 cheesy tails.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 27/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: Awwww!

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

FOX scratches ear. CUSTOMER 1 kneels down to look at him.

Notes

Camera cuts to a close up of the Fox. MAXIMUM adorableness!

Scene

9A

Duration

50:00

Panel

10

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Fox yawns.

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 28/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9B

Duration

10:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

FOX: purrs.

Action Notes

Fox tilts head....

Scene

9B

Duration

10:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

FOX: ...kyu?

Action Notes

...then turns around, noticing CUSTOMER 1.

Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

FOX: (makes a low growl)

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 29/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: AAAAAH!!!!!FOX: (angry biting and scratching noises)

Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: RAAAAAAH!!!!!!!

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 falls back and kicks the table....

Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 30/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013

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Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)

Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 falls over the couch.

Scene

9C

Duration

35:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CUSTOMER 1: BRAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!

Action Notes

CUSTOMER 1 falls behind the chair.

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10A

Duration

35:00

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1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

FOX hops into frame in from the right. Kiyoshi and Chloe watch the fox in silence.

Scene

10A

Duration

35:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

FOX turns to jump on CHLOE's head.

Scene

10A

Duration

35:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

FOX jumps into CHLOE's hair and goes to sleep.

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4

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05:00

Dialogue

At least we got an awesome pet out of that lawsuit, right!?

Scene

10A

Duration

35:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI shrugs and shakes his head.

Scene

10A

Duration

35:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE folds her arms.

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Scene

10A

Duration

35:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Oooook.... Fine... whatever... car it is.

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Okay.

Action Notes

JIM facepalms.

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Do you have any questions, KIYOSHI?

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Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI sits back in his chair.

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CUT TO A HYPER CLOSE UP OF KIOSHIA slow zoom in on his eyes, with black bars coming down to squeez the shot in on his eyes. His eyes slowly squint as well with peaceful, TRADITIONAL JAPANESE FOLK MUSIC playing in the background.KIYOSHI'S hair sways to and fro. As the music ends an Eagle screeches.

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Those are some really good points Kiyoshi.

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Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: We could have them order and Pickup! That's an awesome idea!

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI and CHLOE both nod in agreement.

Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Does this mean I have extra time to practice ninja moves during my break!?JIM: No.

Action Notes

Zoom in to FOX sleeping on CHLOE's head.

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Scene

10B

Duration

45:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Please?Jim: NO.Please?-NoWhat if I wax the floor?-Well...

Action Notes

FOX's ear twitches

Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

Or wax the ceiling?NO!

Action Notes

Door opens as bell chimes.

Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

NOTE: In final version, Fox takes refuge in CHLOE's poofy hair, disappearing.

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Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

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10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 38/55Episode 0: Making the Grade

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Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

FOOD CRITIC: HISSSSSSSSSS........

Action Notes

As the FOOD CRITIC hisses, smoke comes out of his nose and eyes.

Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Uh... I'm sorry about screwing up Jim. That dude looks like he's here to wreck us.

Scene

10C

Duration

40:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: It's cool. Stuff happens! Just be on your game today! Let's give this guy the total ninja experience!

Slugging

Everyone nods in agreement.

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Scene

10D

Duration

10:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Welcome to Pizza by the Slice! Please sit!

Action Notes

JIM bows and extends a hand.

Notes

The critic towers over the others.

Scene

10D

Duration

10:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Everyone jumps away.

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The CRITIC eases into his seat.

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Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

(Explosion appears.)

Notes

(que action music. lots of beating drums)

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI appears with pizza dough held above his head.

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Zoom in to a medium shot of KIYOSHI, twirling the dough in his hand.

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Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI slashes at the air.

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Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The pizza dough and cut open can of tomato sauce lands from the sky.

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI creeps into the frame (from right) with a block of cheese.

Notes

(music pauses)

Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

10

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI punches the cheese into confetti.

Notes

(music starts again as KIYOSHI punches block of cheese)

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Scene

11A

Duration

55:00

Panel

11

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The CRITIC looks to his left.

Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI is gone, now there is just a crack on the ground.

Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

EXPLOSION

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Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE comes out of the ground, spinning in with a block of sausage in her hand.

Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE throws the pepperoni, and it begins to spin laterally.

Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE, still spining, slashes the pepperoni. The pepperoni stays intact.

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Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Notes

(music pauses)

Scene

11B

Duration

35:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Scene

11C

Duration

25:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Pepperonis are now on pizza. (shot begins with a closeup of the pizza, then zooms outward.)

Notes

(music starts again)

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Scene

11C

Duration

25:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CRITIC looks up

Scene

11C

Duration

25:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Camera pans upward as CHLOE jumps over the critic. She comes in from the right doing a flying, upside-down cartwheel.

Scene

11C

Duration

25:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CHLOE makes a small fireball pop up in her hand. It becomes a huge fireball.

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Scene

11C

Duration

25:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Pizza is now fully cooked with visible steam.

Notes

(music ends)

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

JIM comes into frame with a can of parmesean cheese. He pauses for a couple of seconds...

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Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

JIM gently shakes the parmesean can with EXTREME focus. Squeezing his right hand tightly while a couple of drops of sweat appear on his forehead.

Notes

(only sound is the sound of a cheese shaker going up and down very slowly. [3 times] )

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

Jim leaves the frame for a sec.

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

JIM jumps back into frame. He frustratingly cuts the pizza into slices with a pizza cutter.

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Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

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Scene

11D

Duration

45:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

As opposed to a burp, steam comes out after he eats.

Scene

11E

Duration

20:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Scene

11E

Duration

20:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

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Scene

11E

Duration

20:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Scene

11E

Duration

20:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The ninjas pose in victory.

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CRITIC waves goodbye.

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Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

2

Duration

05:00

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

3

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CRITIC falls to the floor.

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

4

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

CRITIC's clothes are cut up.

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Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

5

Duration

05:00

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

6

Duration

05:00

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

7

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Did he post the review?

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Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

8

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

KIYOSHI pulls out the signed grade and shakes it in his hands.

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

9

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

JIM: Wooooo, guys we really need to practice makingpizzas in front of people without hurting them.

Scene

11F

Duration

50:00

Panel

10

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

CHLOE: Well, you did tell us to give him the FULL ninja experience....

Notes

STORY END.

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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013