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Pizza by the SlicePilot Episode
Scene
1A
Duration
05:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Notes
Establishing shot of store from outside. The camera pauses on the PIZZA by the SLICE sign (signifying the title of the cartoon), then zooms out to show the entire store.The E on the NEON open sign flickers.(should we revise the store design? I know I took off the second floor for storage and living and whatnot.)
Scene
2A
Duration
25:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Shows the ninja JIM staring frustratingly at the camera.
Scene
2A
Duration
25:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
*inhale*
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 1/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2A
Duration
25:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
JIM's face then changes to a hopeless sigh.
Scene
2A
Duration
25:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: ...OK guys...
Scene
2A
Duration
25:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Today is the big day.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 2/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2B
Duration
05:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: "The food critic is coming in today and..."
Action Notes
CHLOE'S (sitting on the right looking away) scarf is flowing in the wind on its own.
Notes
(In final version include table condiments (parmesean, ketchup, etc) and notes on sales to windows. Play up the Japanese motif of the store with an Americanized feel. some combination of traditional Japanese architecture, and the stylings of IM Pei and Frank Lloyd
NO PANEL
Wright.)
Scene
2C
Duration
05:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: ...you guys know what this will do for our business if this guy is impressed.
Action Notes
First shot of CHLOE and KIYOSHI
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 3/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2D
Duration
25:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: We can be as well known as
Scene
2D
Duration
25:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: ...The Domino Mafia(Bottom left)...
Slugging
Dominos Mafia panel comes in from bottom left.
Scene
2D
Duration
25:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: ...The Roman Ceasers, or even the...
Slugging
Roman Ceasers panel comes in from bottom right corner.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 4/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2D
Duration
25:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Samurai Pizza Hutts!
Slugging
Samurai panel trucks in from above.
Scene
2D
Duration
25:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
JIM pauses and lookes over in CHLOE'S direction with skepticism.
Scene
2E
Duration
15:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE is still nodding her head while Kiyoshi glances in her direction.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 5/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2E
Duration
15:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Chloe! PAY ATTENTION!
Scene
2E
Duration
15:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: *muttering* I am paying attention... mrmph...
Scene
2F
Duration
15:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Then act like it! Today's not the day for not listening!
Action Notes
Jim leans back in the booth.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 6/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
2F
Duration
15:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: The last thing we need is another delivery fiasco that tarnishes our good na----
Action Notes
Jim leans forward, Chloe takes notice of Jim's comment.
Scene
2F
Duration
15:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE muffles her laugh with her hands. Jim's brow collides with his glare.
Scene
2G
Duration
05:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: (still laughing) That's old news, bro! Especially considering how much of a non-issue it was...
Action Notes
CHLOE looks at JIM, then shrugs her shoulders, smirking.
Notes
As this scene ends a whooshing sound is heard as this shot pans left, with the next shot following directly afterwards.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 7/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
3A
Duration
15:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Cut to a shot of the entire city. CHLOE jumps from roof to roof. Fast swishing lines indicate CHLOE's speed. A red scarf traces her movements. CHLOE jumps out of frame to the right...
Scene
3A
Duration
15:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Same shot... CHLOE appears in the foreground, flying from the bottom to the top of the frame as one huge jump.
Scene
3A
Duration
15:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE leaves the frame in a blur. Her scarf is visible from the blur, touching the bottom of the frame to indicate it's ridiculous length.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 8/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
A silhouette of CHLOE jumps and twists through the air. The scarf traces her trajectory.
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 9/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 10/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Scene
3B
Duration
40:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: "I GOTS PIZZAS FOR YOUR MOUTH HOLE!"
Action Notes
*doorbell rings*
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 11/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
Customer 1: Ooh!
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 enters shot and opens the door.
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: Hey! My mouth needed this! You were so fast too... Keep the change!
Action Notes
CHLOE appears with her hood on. It conceals everything but her eyes.
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Coolies! Later!
Action Notes
CHLOE takes the cash in hand, then strikes a ninja pose.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 12/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE jumps in the air. The customer watches her scarf follow...
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
....and follow...
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
... and continuously follow with the incredible length of her scarf emphasized.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 13/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Scarf is still going up as the door closes.
Notes
Camera cuts to a medium shot of the customer. Same angle.
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 turns toward the camera and licks his lips as he hums happily. He opens the pizza box...
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
10
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
and then starts to shed tears...
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 14/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
11
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
The pizza has exploded in the box from all of Chloe's acrobatics during delivery. All that is left is cheese sticking everywhere. (sad music plays)
Scene
4A
Duration
01:00:00
Panel
12
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Camera zooms in slowly while he cries.
Scene
5A
Duration
20:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
*pause*
Action Notes
JIM's eyebrow raises in skepticism.
Slugging
Camera Cuts in from stage right.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 15/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
5A
Duration
20:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI is chuckling to himself. Chloe shrugs her hands hoping for a bid from Jim.
Scene
5A
Duration
20:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
Chloe: *sigh* Ok that was one time.
Scene
5A
Duration
20:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: But it's hard out here for a run-down Ninja Shop! Until we get--
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 16/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
5B
Duration
05:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: a cool cannon to make delivers like the Samurai, there's no other way we can compete!
Notes
Include the sound of a group of people grunting... "YAAAAH!"
Scene
5C
Duration
10:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Maybe so, but they still get their pizzas there safely...
Scene
5C
Duration
10:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Although I don't know how breaking the sound barrier makes for a safe pizza. We tried that once with smoke bomb deliveries... that didn't work either.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 17/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Door opens. Customer 1 stares disapprovingly, remembering what happened the last time a pizza was delivered.
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 18/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 examines the pizza box while CHLOE motions for her pay.
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Customer 1 lifts up his hand...
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
and drops money into CHLOE's hand almost daring for something to be wrong with the pizza.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 19/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: NINJA VANISH!
Action Notes
CHLOE jumps and turns around.
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE disappears in a smoke cloud.
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 20/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
10
Duration
05:00
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
11
Duration
05:00
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
12
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Pizza box explodes with smoke too.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 21/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
13
Duration
05:00
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
14
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 looks at the box, emotionally distraught.
Scene
6A
Duration
01:15:00
Panel
15
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 drops pizza box. Pizza box is empty.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 22/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
7A
Duration
15:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
Chloe: AHA! See! and that was your idea! You're supposed to know that our pizzas are capable of two-way travel before we use experimental stuff! At least I know my route when I jump from buildings!
Scene
7A
Duration
15:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: *sigh*
Scene
7A
Duration
15:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: (frustrated) Look, just use the car next time. Considering what happened the last time, we need to be as safe as possible with delivering pizzas!
Action Notes
JIM points towards the delivery vehicle outside.
Notes
(it's understood it's actually on a different side, but pointing backwards for visual coherency)
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 23/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
8A
Duration
25:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Pause camera for a second on the pizza box with a ton of markings. Then pan upward.
Scene
8A
Duration
25:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: HOOOOOOO!
Scene
8A
Duration
25:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
slams hand onto pizza box, and smoke appears.
Notes
Bird's eye view. Camera quickly zooms out from her hand.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 24/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
8A
Duration
25:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Scene
8A
Duration
25:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Pizza box is gone.
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Cut to scene in livingroom. CUSTOMER 1 repaired his glasses. And now has a bandage from previous smokebomb.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 25/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Explosion appears
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Customer notices pizza box, panicing in memory of the last flashback.
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Customer relaxes.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 26/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUSTOMER's fingers move up and down in the classic "I'm ready to eat" pose.
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
A living FOX made of cheese and pepperoni is in the box. It's licking itself when he opens it. The fox has 3 cheesy tails.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 27/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: Awwww!
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
FOX scratches ear. CUSTOMER 1 kneels down to look at him.
Notes
Camera cuts to a close up of the Fox. MAXIMUM adorableness!
Scene
9A
Duration
50:00
Panel
10
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Fox yawns.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 28/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9B
Duration
10:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
FOX: purrs.
Action Notes
Fox tilts head....
Scene
9B
Duration
10:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
FOX: ...kyu?
Action Notes
...then turns around, noticing CUSTOMER 1.
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
FOX: (makes a low growl)
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 29/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: AAAAAH!!!!!FOX: (angry biting and scratching noises)
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: RAAAAAAH!!!!!!!
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 falls back and kicks the table....
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 30/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: (inchoherent stammering)
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 falls over the couch.
Scene
9C
Duration
35:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CUSTOMER 1: BRAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!
Action Notes
CUSTOMER 1 falls behind the chair.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 31/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
FOX hops into frame in from the right. Kiyoshi and Chloe watch the fox in silence.
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
FOX turns to jump on CHLOE's head.
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
FOX jumps into CHLOE's hair and goes to sleep.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 32/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
At least we got an awesome pet out of that lawsuit, right!?
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI shrugs and shakes his head.
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE folds her arms.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 33/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10A
Duration
35:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Oooook.... Fine... whatever... car it is.
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Okay.
Action Notes
JIM facepalms.
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Do you have any questions, KIYOSHI?
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 34/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI sits back in his chair.
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CUT TO A HYPER CLOSE UP OF KIOSHIA slow zoom in on his eyes, with black bars coming down to squeez the shot in on his eyes. His eyes slowly squint as well with peaceful, TRADITIONAL JAPANESE FOLK MUSIC playing in the background.KIYOSHI'S hair sways to and fro. As the music ends an Eagle screeches.
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Those are some really good points Kiyoshi.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 35/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: We could have them order and Pickup! That's an awesome idea!
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI and CHLOE both nod in agreement.
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Does this mean I have extra time to practice ninja moves during my break!?JIM: No.
Action Notes
Zoom in to FOX sleeping on CHLOE's head.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 36/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10B
Duration
45:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Please?Jim: NO.Please?-NoWhat if I wax the floor?-Well...
Action Notes
FOX's ear twitches
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
Or wax the ceiling?NO!
Action Notes
Door opens as bell chimes.
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
NOTE: In final version, Fox takes refuge in CHLOE's poofy hair, disappearing.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 37/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 38/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
FOOD CRITIC: HISSSSSSSSSS........
Action Notes
As the FOOD CRITIC hisses, smoke comes out of his nose and eyes.
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Uh... I'm sorry about screwing up Jim. That dude looks like he's here to wreck us.
Scene
10C
Duration
40:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: It's cool. Stuff happens! Just be on your game today! Let's give this guy the total ninja experience!
Slugging
Everyone nods in agreement.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 39/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
10D
Duration
10:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Welcome to Pizza by the Slice! Please sit!
Action Notes
JIM bows and extends a hand.
Notes
The critic towers over the others.
Scene
10D
Duration
10:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Everyone jumps away.
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
The CRITIC eases into his seat.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
(Explosion appears.)
Notes
(que action music. lots of beating drums)
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI appears with pizza dough held above his head.
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Zoom in to a medium shot of KIYOSHI, twirling the dough in his hand.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI slashes at the air.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
The pizza dough and cut open can of tomato sauce lands from the sky.
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI creeps into the frame (from right) with a block of cheese.
Notes
(music pauses)
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
10
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI punches the cheese into confetti.
Notes
(music starts again as KIYOSHI punches block of cheese)
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11A
Duration
55:00
Panel
11
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
The CRITIC looks to his left.
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI is gone, now there is just a crack on the ground.
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
EXPLOSION
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE comes out of the ground, spinning in with a block of sausage in her hand.
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE throws the pepperoni, and it begins to spin laterally.
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE, still spining, slashes the pepperoni. The pepperoni stays intact.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 45/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Notes
(music pauses)
Scene
11B
Duration
35:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Scene
11C
Duration
25:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Pepperonis are now on pizza. (shot begins with a closeup of the pizza, then zooms outward.)
Notes
(music starts again)
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11C
Duration
25:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CRITIC looks up
Scene
11C
Duration
25:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Camera pans upward as CHLOE jumps over the critic. She comes in from the right doing a flying, upside-down cartwheel.
Scene
11C
Duration
25:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CHLOE makes a small fireball pop up in her hand. It becomes a huge fireball.
Pizza by the Slice Pilot Episode Page 47/55Episode 0: Making the Grade
Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11C
Duration
25:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Pizza is now fully cooked with visible steam.
Notes
(music ends)
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
JIM comes into frame with a can of parmesean cheese. He pauses for a couple of seconds...
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
JIM gently shakes the parmesean can with EXTREME focus. Squeezing his right hand tightly while a couple of drops of sweat appear on his forehead.
Notes
(only sound is the sound of a cheese shaker going up and down very slowly. [3 times] )
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
Jim leaves the frame for a sec.
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
JIM jumps back into frame. He frustratingly cuts the pizza into slices with a pizza cutter.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11D
Duration
45:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
As opposed to a burp, steam comes out after he eats.
Scene
11E
Duration
20:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Scene
11E
Duration
20:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11E
Duration
20:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Scene
11E
Duration
20:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
The ninjas pose in victory.
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
1
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CRITIC waves goodbye.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
2
Duration
05:00
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
3
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CRITIC falls to the floor.
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
4
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
CRITIC's clothes are cut up.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
5
Duration
05:00
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
6
Duration
05:00
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
7
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Did he post the review?
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
8
Duration
05:00
Action Notes
KIYOSHI pulls out the signed grade and shakes it in his hands.
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
9
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
JIM: Wooooo, guys we really need to practice makingpizzas in front of people without hurting them.
Scene
11F
Duration
50:00
Panel
10
Duration
05:00
Dialogue
CHLOE: Well, you did tell us to give him the FULL ninja experience....
Notes
STORY END.
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Original Story by: Michael Shaw and Dwight Carter. Storyboards and designs by Michael Shaw. ©2013