Pitch Feedback

Do you think that the style and form of my magazine ties in with My target audience?

• Yes, the style of the magazine is clear throughout• Yeah we can really see who the audience for the magazine is!• Yeah but make sure that the colours don’t get too girly for a unisex magazine• Yes I think it ties in well

Are there any other features you think would be suitable to includein the content of my magazine?

• No• You could write about some album reviews as well as gig reviews• Not really you’ve covered the main features• No, make sure you write a lot about festivals though

Do you think I have selected the correct potential advertisers?

Do you see any issues when further developing this idea?

• Definitely I think the advertisers are suitable• I think there could have been a few more examples but generally good• Yes, it specifically targets the festival go-ers• Yep

• Not really• No, I think it will be really good• Cant think of any issues• No issues with development but you need to make sure the photographs look realistic

Conclusion

Overall the feedback was positive from my pitch. Comments were made saying that the overall style and form of my magazine fitted well with the audience and that the concept was easy to understand. The only criticisms received were regarding the colour. For this I will need to make sure I am not bias and I use a unisex colour scheme throughout. Another point was also made about the quality of the photographs. I will make sure that the photographs are shot in a professional way that mirrors the look and feel of a real magazine publication.