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29 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL Knowledge and Understanding—Level 1 Rationale The student demonstrates limited knowledge and understanding of the procedure form. The writing is on topic and provides a concluding sentence, but it does not provide a clear goal. The student includes limited information about how to play hockey. A series of simple suggestions and rules are provided with limited details (e.g., Don’t get too many penalties … listen to the referee).

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29Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Kn

ow

led

ge

and

Un

der

stan

din

g—

Leve

l 1R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

dem

onst

rate

s li

mit

ed k

now

led

ge a

nd

un

der

stan

din

g of

th

e p

roce

du

re f

orm

. T

he

wri

tin

g is

on

top

ican

d p

rovi

des

a c

oncl

ud

ing

sen

ten

ce,

but

it d

oes

not

pro

vid

e a

clea

r go

al.

Th

e st

ud

ent

incl

ud

es l

imit

ed i

nfo

rmat

ion

abo

ut

how

to p

lay

hoc

key.

A s

erie

s of

sim

ple

su

gges

tion

s an

d r

ule

s ar

ep

rovi

ded

wit

h l

imit

ed d

etai

ls (

e.g.

, D

on’t

get

too

man

y pe

nalt

ies

… l

iste

n to

the

ref

eree

).

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30 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Kn

ow

led

ge

and

Un

der

stan

din

g—

Leve

l 2R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

dem

onst

rate

s so

me

know

led

ge a

nd

un

der

stan

din

gof

th

e p

roce

du

re f

orm

. Th

e in

stru

ctio

ns

are

som

ewh

atse

qu

enti

al, p

rovi

din

g ru

les

and

a c

oncl

ud

ing

sen

ten

ce. T

he

det

ails

of

the

gam

e ar

e p

rovi

ded

wit

h s

ome

effe

ctiv

enes

s to

sup

por

t th

e u

nd

erst

and

ing

of h

ow t

o p

lay

the

gam

e (e

.g.,

To g

etth

em o

ut y

ou h

it t

hem

wit

h a

ball

belo

w t

he w

aist

…).

How

ever

,th

ere

are

inst

ruct

ion

s th

at r

equ

ire

furt

her

det

ail;

for

exam

ple

,th

e lo

cati

on o

f th

e ja

il (

If y

ou g

et o

ut y

ou w

ill h

ave

to g

o to

jail

…).

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31Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Kn

ow

led

ge

and

Un

der

stan

din

g—

Leve

l 3R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

dem

onst

rate

s co

nsi

der

able

kn

owle

dge

an

du

nd

erst

and

ing

of t

he

pro

ced

ure

for

m.

Th

e in

stru

ctio

ns

are

seq

uen

tial

wit

h c

onsi

der

able

eff

ecti

ven

ess

(i.e

., a

nu

mbe

red

lis

tp

rovi

din

g a

des

crip

tion

of

how

to

pla

y th

e ga

me

from

sta

rt t

o

fin

ish

). T

he

wri

tin

g p

rovi

des

det

ails

so

the

read

er b

ette

ru

nd

erst

and

s h

ow t

o p

lay

the

gam

e w

ith

con

sid

erab

leef

fect

iven

ess

(e.g

., T

he p

erso

n w

ith

the

ball

can

take

3 s

teps

…).

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32 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Kn

ow

led

ge

and

Un

der

stan

din

g—

Leve

l 4R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

dem

onst

rate

s a

hig

h d

egre

e of

kn

owle

dge

an

du

nd

erst

and

ing

of t

he

pro

ced

ure

for

m.

Th

e w

riti

ng

pro

vid

esse

qu

enti

al i

nst

ruct

ion

s w

ith

a h

igh

deg

ree

of e

ffec

tive

nes

s. F

orex

amp

le,

the

use

of

subt

itle

s, n

ugg

ets,

an

d n

um

bers

to

list

th

ep

roce

du

res

con

trib

ute

s to

a t

hor

ough

des

crip

tion

of

how

to

pla

y th

e ga

me

from

sta

rt t

o fi

nis

h.

Th

e w

riti

ng

incl

ud

es d

etai

lsw

ith

a h

igh

deg

ree

of e

ffec

tive

nes

s, s

o th

e re

ader

bet

ter

un

der

stan

ds

how

to

pla

y th

e ga

me

(e.g

, T

ips

for

Succ

essf

ul H

ide

and

Seek

). T

he

inst

ruct

ion

s in

clu

de

a st

ron

g cl

osin

g st

atem

ent

(Hav

e fu

n an

d ge

t go

od e

xerc

ise!

)

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33Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Thin

kin

g—

Leve

l 1R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

gen

erat

es a

nd

su

pp

orts

id

eas

wit

h l

imit

edef

fect

iven

ess.

Th

e in

stru

ctio

ns

incl

ud

e li

mit

ed d

etai

ls a

bou

th

ow t

o p

lay

hop

scot

ch.

Th

e w

riti

ng

doe

s n

ot p

rovi

de

det

ails

abou

t h

ow t

o d

raw

th

e co

urs

e, i

ts s

ize,

or

its

loca

tion

, an

dre

leva

nt

info

rmat

ion

is

mis

sin

g; f

or e

xam

ple

, h

ow e

xact

ly t

o

“ju

mp

to

you

r m

arke

r” (

i.e.

, d

oes

a p

laye

r ju

mp

on

eve

ry b

oxor

doe

s a

pla

yer

jum

p w

ith

on

ly o

ne

foot

in

th

e bo

x?)

Th

ew

riti

ng

dem

onst

rate

s li

mit

ed c

riti

cal

and

cre

ativ

e th

inki

ng

pro

cess

es,

pro

vid

ing

a si

mp

le i

dea

abo

ut

pla

yin

g w

ith

fri

end

s (…

not

hing

is

fun

alon

e).

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34 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Thin

kin

g—

Leve

l 2R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

gen

erat

es a

nd

su

pp

orts

id

eas

wit

h s

ome

effe

ctiv

enes

s. T

he

inst

ruct

ion

s in

clu

de

det

ails

abo

ut

how

to

pla

y M

onop

oly

wit

h s

ome

effe

ctiv

enes

s (e

.g.,

you

have

to

goar

ound

the

boa

rd o

nce

befo

re y

ou c

an b

uy a

nyth

ing)

. R

elev

ant

info

rmat

ion

to

sup

por

t p

layi

ng

the

gam

e is

som

ewh

at e

ffec

tive

(e.g

., th

e ga

me

end

s w

hen

eve

ryth

ing

is b

ough

t, t

hou

gh“e

very

thin

g” i

s n

ot c

lari

fied

). T

he

wri

tin

g d

emon

stra

tes

som

ecr

eati

ve t

hin

kin

g p

roce

sses

; fo

r ex

amp

le,

the

stu

den

t d

escr

ibes

Mon

opol

y in

a c

reat

ive

and

im

agin

ativ

e w

ay (

e.g.

, lik

e a

fam

ilyga

me)

.

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35Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Thin

kin

g—

Leve

l 3R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

gen

erat

es a

nd

su

pp

orts

id

eas

wit

h c

onsi

der

able

effe

ctiv

enes

s. T

he

inst

ruct

ion

s in

clu

de

rele

van

t in

form

atio

nab

out

how

to

pla

y C

once

ntr

atio

n w

ith

con

sid

erab

leef

fect

iven

ess

(e.g

., Ta

ke o

ut a

ll of

the

Jok

ers.

) T

he

wri

tin

g

dem

onst

rate

s co

nsi

der

able

cre

ativ

e th

inki

ng

pro

cess

es.

Th

est

ud

ent

sugg

ests

an

im

agin

ativ

e w

ay t

o d

eter

min

e w

hic

h p

laye

rgo

es f

irst

(e.

g.,

play

ing

rock

, pa

per,

scis

sors

or

flip

ping

a c

oin

…).

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36 Ontario Writing Assessment 7

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Thin

kin

g—

Leve

l 4R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

gen

erat

es a

nd

su

pp

orts

id

eas

wit

h a

hig

h d

egre

e of

effe

ctiv

enes

s. T

he

inst

ruct

ion

s in

clu

de

rele

van

t d

etai

ls t

osu

pp

ort

the

mai

n i

dea

of

how

to

pla

y ti

c ta

c to

e w

ith

th

orou

ghef

fect

iven

ess

(e.g

., T

his

area

cou

ld b

e a

tabl

e, a

des

k, o

r an

ythi

ng

wit

h a

flat

sur

face

.) T

he

stu

den

t d

emon

stra

tes

crit

ical

th

inki

ng

pro

cess

es w

ith

a h

igh

deg

ree

of e

ffec

tive

nes

s, r

eali

zin

g th

ere

ader

wil

l be

nef

it f

rom

see

ing

som

e of

th

e in

form

atio

nvi

sual

ly (

i.e.

, in

clu

des

lab

elle

d d

iagr

ams

wit

h d

escr

ipti

ons)

.

NEL

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37Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Co

mm

un

icat

ion

—Le

vel 1

Rat

ion

ale

Th

e st

ud

ent

exp

ress

es a

nd

org

aniz

es i

dea

s in

th

is p

roce

du

rew

ith

lim

ited

eff

ecti

ven

ess.

Use

of

con

ven

tion

s, s

uch

as

gram

mar

, sp

elli

ng,

an

d p

un

ctu

atio

n,

are

lim

ited

. T

he

wri

tin

gin

clu

des

man

y ru

n-o

n s

ente

nce

s an

d s

pel

lin

g er

rors

(e.

g.,

goly

,fe

ild,

stop

e).

Th

e st

ud

ent

com

mu

nic

ates

in

form

atio

n a

bou

t h

ow

to p

lay

socc

er w

ith

lim

ited

eff

ecti

ve u

se o

f st

yle,

voi

ce,

and

wor

d c

hoi

ce (

e.g.

, …

the

num

ber

1 ru

le i

s do

n’t

tuch

the

bal

l w

ith

your

han

ds,

no f

isic

le c

onta

ct,

no r

ude

com

ents

to

the

othe

tea

m o

rth

e re

f an

d no

tri

ping

…).

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Co

mm

un

icat

ion

—Le

vel 2

Rat

ion

ale

Th

e st

ud

ent

exp

ress

es a

nd

org

aniz

es i

dea

s in

th

is p

roce

du

rew

ith

som

e ef

fect

iven

ess.

Th

e vo

cabu

lary

an

d s

ente

nce

str

uct

ure

use

d a

re s

imp

le (

e.g.

, T

he p

iece

s ar

e tw

o di

ffer

ent

colo

rs f

or e

ach

play

er.)

Th

e st

ud

ent

com

mu

nic

ates

in

form

atio

n a

bou

t h

ow t

op

lay

chec

kers

wit

h s

ome

effe

ctiv

e u

se o

f st

yle,

voi

ce,

and

wor

d

choi

ce;

how

ever

, th

e in

stru

ctio

ns

req

uir

e m

ore

clea

r an

d p

reci

sela

ngu

age.

For

exa

mp

le,

to s

tate

how

th

e re

ader

can

avo

idcr

own

ing

the

opp

onen

t’s c

hec

kers

, th

e st

ud

ent

pro

vid

es t

he

foll

owin

g in

stru

ctio

ns:

So

for

you

not

to h

ave

to c

row

n th

e ot

her

play

ers

piec

es,

you

shou

ld t

ry a

nd n

ot m

ove

your

che

cker

pie

ces.

38 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

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39Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Co

mm

un

icat

ion

—Le

vel 3

Rat

ion

ale

Th

e st

ud

ent

exp

ress

es a

nd

org

aniz

es i

dea

s in

th

is p

roce

du

rew

ith

con

sid

erab

le e

ffec

tive

nes

s. T

he

wri

tin

g in

clu

des

eff

ecti

vevo

cabu

lary

to

com

mu

nic

ate

clea

r in

stru

ctio

ns

(e.g

., te

rrit

ory,

occu

pies

, al

tern

ativ

e).

Th

ere

is v

aria

tion

in

sen

ten

ce l

engt

h,

com

mas

are

use

d e

ffec

tive

ly,

and

th

ere

are

few

err

ors

in

spel

lin

g. T

he

stu

den

t co

mm

un

icat

es i

nfo

rmat

ion

abo

ut

how

to

pla

y C

aptu

re t

he

Flag

wit

h c

onsi

der

able

eff

ecti

ve u

se o

f st

yle,

voic

e, a

nd

wor

d c

hoi

ce (

e.g.

, O

nce

ther

e ar

e tw

o te

ams

of e

qual

size

… T

his

plac

e sh

ould

be

divi

ded

into

tw

o eq

ual

area

s an

d ea

chte

am s

houl

d ta

ke o

ne a

rea)

.

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Co

mm

un

icat

ion

—Le

vel 4

Rat

ion

ale

Th

e st

ud

ent

exp

ress

es a

nd

org

aniz

es i

dea

s in

th

is p

roce

du

rew

ith

a h

igh

deg

ree

of e

ffec

tive

nes

s. T

he

wri

tin

g in

clu

des

a s

tep

-by

-ste

p s

et o

f in

stru

ctio

ns

pre

sen

ted

log

ical

ly.

Th

e st

ud

ent

use

sco

nve

nti

ons

such

as

pu

nct

uat

ion

, sp

elli

ng,

an

d g

ram

mar

wit

h a

hig

h d

egre

e of

eff

ecti

ven

ess.

Th

e w

riti

ng

incl

ud

es u

nd

erli

nin

gto

hig

hli

ght

imp

orta

nt

par

ts (

e.g.

, *N

ote*

Thi

s is

the

onl

y ti

me

in

the

gam

e th

at p

laye

rs m

ay l

ook

at a

ny o

f th

eir

card

s.)

Th

e st

ud

ent

com

mu

nic

ates

in

form

atio

n a

bou

t h

ow t

o p

lay

Stop

th

e B

us

wit

h c

onsi

der

able

eff

ecti

ve u

se o

f st

yle,

voi

ce,

and

wor

d c

hoi

ce.

For

exam

ple

, th

e w

riti

ng

com

mu

nic

ates

wit

h a

n o

ffic

ial

voic

e,st

yle,

an

d t

one

(*N

ote*

You

mus

t ha

ve 4

car

ds a

t al

l ti

mes

.)

40 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

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41Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Ap

plic

atio

n—

Leve

l 1R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

mak

es c

onn

ecti

ons

amon

g th

e to

pic

(h

ow t

o p

lay

bad

min

ton

), p

erso

nal

exp

erie

nce

s, a

nd

lif

e si

tuat

ion

s w

ith

lim

ited

eff

ecti

ven

ess

(e.g

,, ba

dm

into

n c

an b

e p

laye

d i

n a

gym

or

whe

re e

ver

you

are

and

it h

as t

o be

eve

n).

Th

e st

ud

ent

tran

sfer

s

lim

ited

kn

owle

dge

abo

ut

the

con

cep

t of

in

stru

ctio

ns.

For

exam

ple

, th

e st

ud

ent

doe

s n

ot c

lear

ly i

nd

icat

e th

eob

ject

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the

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42 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Ap

plic

atio

n—

Leve

l 2R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

mak

es c

onn

ecti

ons

amon

g th

e to

pic

(h

ow t

o p

lay

the

gam

e of

Nig

ht

Wat

ch),

per

son

al e

xper

ien

ces,

an

d l

ife

situ

atio

ns

wit

h s

ome

effe

ctiv

enes

s. S

he

incl

ud

es s

ome

per

son

alco

nn

ecti

ons

thro

ugh

out

the

pie

ce (

e.g.

, th

ree

is e

noug

h bu

t it

is

bett

er w

ith

mor

e).

Th

e st

ud

ent

tran

sfer

s so

me

know

led

ge a

bou

tth

e co

nce

pt

of i

nst

ruct

ion

s by

in

clu

din

g a

reas

on f

or t

he

gam

e(e

.g.,

It i

s a

very

fun

gam

e …

).

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43Ontario Writing Assessment 7NEL

Ap

plic

atio

n—

Leve

l 3R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

mak

es c

onn

ecti

ons

amon

g th

e to

pic

(h

ow t

o p

lay

a vi

deo

gam

e),

per

son

al e

xper

ien

ces,

an

d l

ife

situ

atio

ns

wit

hco

nsi

der

able

eff

ecti

ven

ess.

Th

e w

riti

ng

incl

ud

es p

erso

nal

con

nec

tion

s th

rou

ghou

t th

e p

iece

. Fo

r ex

amp

le,

the

stu

den

td

escr

ibes

bec

omin

g ac

cust

omed

to

the

pro

gram

(O

nce

you

spen

d

tim

e ge

ttin

g to

kno

w t

he c

ity

…).

Th

e st

ud

ent

tran

sfer

sco

nsi

der

able

kn

owle

dge

abo

ut

the

con

cep

t of

in

stru

ctio

ns

byp

rovi

din

g im

por

tan

t in

form

atio

n a

nd

tip

s ab

out

pla

yin

g (e

.g.,

You

shou

ld s

top

and

read

all

the

bulle

tins

too

. T

hese

giv

e yo

u hi

nts

abou

t ho

w t

o m

ake

mor

e m

oney

…).

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44 Ontario Writing Assessment 7 NEL

WR

ITIN

GTA

SK

1

Ap

plic

atio

n—

Leve

l 4R

atio

nal

e

Th

e st

ud

ent

mak

es c

onn

ecti

ons

amon

g th

e to

pic

(h

ow t

o p

lay

Roc

k, P

aper

, Sc

isso

rs),

per

son

al e

xper

ien

ces,

an

d l

ife

situ

atio

ns

wit

h a

hig

h d

egre

e of

eff

ecti

ven

ess.

For

exa

mp

le,

the

stu

den

tu

ses

con

nec

tion

s to

oth

er i

nst

ruct

ion

al b

ooks

or

mat

eria

ls i

nth

e ti

tle

(Lau

ras’

Gui

de T

o R

ock,

Pap

er,

Scis

sors

). T

he

stu

den

ttr

ansf

ers

a h

igh

deg

ree

of k

now

led

ge a

bou

t th

e co

nce

pt

of

inst

ruct

ion

s by

pro

vid

ing

spec

ific

fea

ture

s of

th

e p

roce

ss o

fp

layi

ng

(e.g

.,…

you

mak

e a

peac

e si

ng b

y pl

acin

g yo

ur t

hum

b on

top

of y

our

pink

y fi

nger

and

you

r ri

ng f

inge

r …

You

r m

iddl

e an

dpo

inte

r fi

nger

are

spr

ead

apar

t.…

If

you

desi

de t

o co

ntin

ue,

repe

at a

llof

the

abo

ve s

teps

.)

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