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    Jenne

    Keith Jenne

    Barbara Pittman

    English 1020

    10/12/10

    In my rough draft it was diagnosed that my essay was anopinionated analysis of the poem and article. I added twoparagraphs, after the intro, with a better summary of thearticle.I revised my thesis a little from my rough draft to focusmore of my argument around the poem being confessional andless about devaluing the Holocaust. As I talked about in myreflections I dont believe that I should have used Ithink in my thesis. It sounds too opinionated.Much of the work below I kept intact but I moved somesentences around and added more clarity to help bettersupport a consistent argument.

    Lady Lazarus and the Mysterious Black Phones

    In the scholarly article Black Phones: Postmodern

    Poetics in the Holocaust Poetry of Sylvia Plath Matthew

    Boswell argues that Plaths poem attempts to convince the

    reader that Lady Lazarus is a non-confessional look at

    herself. Boswell emphasizes that Plaths poem is nothing

    more than a post modernistic look at the Holocaust through

    the eyes of a suicidal strip artist who performs a kind

    of Holocaust-themed cabaret (54). I respect what Boswell

    has written and I think that he makes a compelling argument

    surrounding postmodernism, but I just cannot bring myself

    to subscribe to the ideology that Plaths poem was written

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    purely for art. In the end, I am not entirely persuaded by

    his argument. I think that Plath wrote this poem as an

    intimate self-diluted glance at her inner psyche, while

    using an approach regarded as post modernistic by comparing

    the Holocaust to her suicidal urges.

    Boswell begins his article by looking at views of

    other critics that suggest that Plaths poem is some way

    confessional in nature. He employs these views to separate

    his argument from his peers and to state that Plath is

    brazen in her exploitation of the tropes and iconography

    associated with the Holocaust (Boswell 55) and that she

    conveys a clear sense of the distinction between art and

    reality (Boswell 55). Boswell goes onto argue that her

    style ultimately becomes the defining features of

    postmodernism (55). He also examines the significance of

    the Holocaust in Plaths poetry and how it illustrates her

    feministic views.

    In the second half of Boswells article he switches

    gears to dissect the meaning of the black phones and what

    they symbolize. He indicates that the metaphorical black

    phone used in many poems written by Plath imply, an

    amputation of poetrys relationship with the past

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    (Boswell 59) and its modernistic ideas. Boswell continues

    to elaborate on his interpretation of the black phones and

    how it represents voicelessness (62) that is created by

    artistic performances which can never equate to

    historical reality (62). Boswell makes a powerful case for

    postmodern influence in Plaths Holocaust poetry, but I

    feel he ignores obvious hints that tell the audience that

    it is much more disturbing opposed to postmodern art.

    As I take a look at Plaths poem I would first like to

    examine the definition of postmodernism and how it relates

    to Boswells take on Lady Lazarus. Postmodernism is

    defined as a late-20th-century style and concept in the arts

    that represents a departure from modernism and has at its

    heart a general distrust of grand theories and ideologies

    as well as a problematical relationship with any notion of

    art. Based on that definition, Boswell makes a compelling

    argument that Plaths poem represents postmodernism. I

    would have to agree with his views here to a certain

    extent. I believe that Plath uses this poem as an artistic

    disagreement from the conventional modernistic views by

    challenging the ideas of her era. I am sure that many

    people believe the Holocaust was not something to depict in

    art metaphorically, particularly when much of the world was

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    affected by this catastrophe at the time. Furthermore, her

    unwillingness to convey sympathy for the genocide of

    millions of Jewish men and women may have left many of her

    critics nauseated, thus establishing a postmodern feel. In

    my opinion I believe that Plaths style comes off as a

    little insensitive, but as I try to compare it to her

    desperate mental state at the time she probably felt more

    like a tortured Holocaust victim rather than a

    conceptualized suicidal strip artist (Boswell 54).

    Early on it is clear that Plath represents herself

    through a woman named Lady Lazarus, a Jew executed in the

    Holocaust, but as I look deeper into this poem it all seems

    like a red herring covering up the definitive truth. Lady

    Lazarus reads like a woman screaming for help specifically

    when she writes, And I a smiling woman./ I am only

    thirty./ And I like the cat have nine times to die. (Plath

    19-21). Plath issues the reader a warning that she is not

    afraid to die and that she will continue to pursue death

    until she succeeds. As I read ahead Plath informs the

    audience that Dying/ Is an art, like everything else./ I

    do it exceptionally well. (43-45). As I read these

    stanzas it sounds less like a fictional character and more

    like a poet in need of psychological help. I agree with

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    Boswell that she uses touches of postmodern art, but it all

    seems to detract from her underlying attitude concerning

    death that is impossible to ignore.

    In an attempt to persuade the readers, Boswell

    promotes the idea that Plaths exploitation of the

    Holocaust behaves as a platform used to illustrate her

    feministic views in a strip tease like fashion that,

    borders on prostitution (56). I tend to agree with

    Boswell that Plath uses strong feministic tones throughout

    her poem, particularly when Boswell writes, the aggressive

    feminist position, that Lady Lazarus assumesis not a total

    distortion of the concerns of Holocaust verse, and could be

    justified by the insight that the Holocaust was an event

    which was, for the most part, conceived and perpetrated by

    men (57). His statement rings true in a sense that her

    writing is femininely driven, but I think that Plaths

    writing runs considerably deeper. We see her feministic

    tone illustrated when Plath writes, And I eat men like

    air. (Plath 84). Boswell states that this feminist

    posturing is intended for the masters from Germany

    (58). This could be true figuratively, but this sentence

    seems to be clearly pointed at the men that mistreated her

    throughout her life. It would almost certainly not be a

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    stretch to say that the men in Plaths life in all

    probability facilitated her mental state of hate. Therefore

    inspiring her true voice for Lady Lazarus while exposing

    the main antagonists in her life.

    Boswell suggests that the black phones referenced in

    Plaths Holocaust poems symbolize the death of modernism

    and the reigning in of postmodern views. He refers to the

    black phones as a mode of communication with the past that

    can only transmit incommunicability. (Boswell 61). Once

    again he tries to insinuate that the black phones rally

    around his hypothesis that her poetry is artistic in nature

    and less confessional. I fail to see the connection of the

    black phones artistically. The central character of Lady

    Lazarus has tried to commit suicide three times. I believe

    that character to be Plath, literally. I get the feeling

    that she is truly crying for help in her poem, specifically

    when she says, I do it so it feels like hell./ I do it so

    it feels real./ I guess you could say Ive a call. (Plath

    46-48). The black phones could be translated as her

    metaphorical disconnect from the world. This detachment

    from reality has left her vulnerable to her ultimate goal

    of self-destruction. She fuses this into our consciousness

    when she articulates that, I turn and burn (Plath 70).

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    Boswell makes a strong case for his ideas on

    postmodernism and the black phones regarding Plaths

    poetry, but I tend to classify her work as an open

    proclamation of her inner being. I did some research on

    Sylvia Plath and discovered that she committed suicide

    months after writing this. It came as a shock to learn

    this, but I really was not that surprised after all. Plath

    was most likely beyond a point of no return at the time and

    this reinforced my opinion of her dark mental state. It is

    hard to comprehend any interpretation other than a

    confession of a depressed woman. With that said, Plaths

    poem demonstrates to the reader how afflicted she was when

    she wrote Lady Lazarus and I feel it embodied her true

    feelings for suicide.

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    Work Cited

    Boswell, Matthew. Black Phones: Postmodern Poetics in

    the Holocaust Poetry of Sylvia Plath CriticalSurvey;

    2008, Vol. 20 Issue 2, p53-64. Ebscohost. Web. 13 Oct.

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    Plath, Sylvia. "Lady Lazarus." An Introduction to Poetry.

    By X.J. Kennedy and Dana Gioia. 13th ed. N.p.: Longman,

    2010. 262-264. Print.

    Postmodernism. Oxford Online Reference. Oxford U Press,

    2010. Web. 12 Oct. 2010

    http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/view/entry/m_en_us1279801

    #m_en_us1279801

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