7/17/2019 Goofus and Gallant Peer Revisions

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Goofus   and Gallant 

Peer Revisions

Goofus GallantWhat problems arose in the plot?

Space battle.

Were these problems resolved? Yes/No

If so, how?

  Yes. Good guys won.

Are there interesting !ARA"#R$ in the

stor% that are developed, not &ust 'at

(ari(atures? Write %our notes and

suggestions here)

 Yes. Everything looks great!

What problems arose in the plot?

Miguel Mars defends the Interstellar Space

Station from a lutonian invasion.

Were these problems resolved? Yes/No

If so, how?

  Yes Miguel was able to trick the lutonians

into "ying too close to the sun which

caused their shields to melt.

Are there interesting !ARA"#R$ in the

stor% that are developed, not &ust 'at

(ari(atures? Write %our notes and

suggestions here)

I en#oyed how you made Miguel sound

realistic by adding some Spanish phrases

into his dialogue but I think you can make

his brother into a better character by

having them talk more.