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Friday 15th January2021
Today we are going to focus on Sentence
building!
You will need a paper and a pencil as you are going to
be building and improving sentences!
Building Simple SentencesEach coloured brick represents a different part of a sentence.
With just two or three of these starting blocks, you can make simple sentences, such as:
Subject Verb Object
The girl brushed her hair. Fido barked.or
Let’s practise making some simple sentences together.
Building SV and SVO SentencesUsing just two or three of the bricks below, how many different SV and SVO sentences can you make?
Linda
or
Share one of your simple sentences with a friend. Does it contain the correct combination of building blocks?
The trees
Mydad
A kitten
George
QueenAnne
Threedogs
Mostshops
bit cooked
chewed read
wrote kicked
prepared stole
twelvestories the food
herfinger a ball
anoctopus
fourlollies
a mealone
treat
Those Pesky Determiners
Determiners are words that come before a noun. They introduce the noun and give the reader important information about it. Some examples are:
trees
finger
dogs dadthe two my
octopusher an
Improving Simple Sentences
Once you have a simple sentence, you can use other bricks to make it more interesting to the reader.
Why not add an adjective to describe any nouns or pronouns in the sentence?
This will turn a simple sentence such as...adjective
girl brushed hair.The herlittle curly
The girl brushed her hair.
... into a sentence like:
Sneaky Adjectives
Can you think of adjectives to describe the nouns below and sneak them in between the determiner and the noun?
treesThe ?
elephantThe ?
sweetsSome ?
castlesFour ?
tastydelicioussturdystronggrey
humongoustowering
bushy
Click here to reveal
some cheeky little
helpers if you get stuck.
Talk to your partner. Could I add more than one adjective between the determiner
and the noun?
Slightly Exciting SentencesCan you include an adjective between every noun and its determiner to make these sentences a little bit more exciting?
boysTheare
watchingfootballmatch.
a
ducksTwo ate bread.some
clownA juggled balls.five
Adding a Little More Excitement
Once you’ve added adjectives to describe the nouns, why not add an adverb to describe the verb?
Think about how the action is happening and include an adverb to give the reader more information.adverb
girl brushed hair.The herlittle curly
An adverb usually goes before the verb that it describes.
girl brushed hair.The herlittle curlycarefully
Awesome Adverbs
Can you think of adverbs to describe the verbs below?
Can you think of more than one adverb which could go with each verb?
?
?
happilyangrilyquicklycrossly
carefullyneatly
dangerouslybravely
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some cheeky little
helpers if you get stuck.
ran
walked
? wrote
?
?
cut
jumped
? smiled
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Slightly More Exciting SentencesCan you include an adverb in these sentences to make them even more exciting?
mum washed hands.My herlovely dirty
boys kicked leaves.Some theplayful orange
Anita ate Sandwich..
aTired delicious
Spicing Things Up!
Now let’s take it one step further by adding a fronted adverbial.
A fronted adverbial is a word, phrase or clause at the beginning of a sentence to give more information about the action. They are always followed by a comma.
frontedadverbial
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https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/topics/zwwp8mn/articles/zp937p3
Spicing Things Up!
Now let’s take it one step further by adding a fronted adverbial.
A fronted adverbial is a word, phrase or clause at the beginning of a sentence to give more information about the action. They are always followed by a comma.
frontedadverbial
girl brushed hair.The herlittle curlycarefully
girl brushed hair.The herlittle curlycarefullyIn the
morning
Adding Amazing AdverbialsCan you start these sentences with a fronted adverbial to give the reader more
information about when, where, how or how often the action took place?
circus left town.the ourexciting smallsadly
Jakub started school.hisshy newnervously
seagulls pecked breadcrumbs.many thenoisy soggyhungrily
It’s Getting Hot in Here!Your sentences are getting mighty spicy! Let’s turn up the heat even further by using a conjunction to add another clause.
Use a co-ordinating or subordinating conjunction to add another clause to your sentence which will give the reader all the information they need to fully understand what is happening.
conjunctionand clause
girl brushed hair.the herlittle curlycarefullyIn the
morning,
girl brushed hairthe little curlycarefullyIn the
morning, herbecause it was
tangled.
Cracking ConjunctionsCan you add a co-ordinating or subordinating conjunction to these sentences to give the reader extra information about the action?
campers hiked to tentsthe weary soddenslowlyCompletelyexhausted, their
noiseechoed
in cavethe mysterious massivescarilySuddenly, the
Salim slammed doorfrustrated woodenfirmlyObviously
angry, the
Building SentencesLet’s look at how our sentence has changed just by
adding a few different bricks.
We started off with...
girl brushed hairthe little curlycarefullyIn the
morning,her
because it was tangled.
The girl brushed her hair.
...and have transformed it into:
Why is the second sentence better?Which would a reader enjoy more? Why?
Scorching SentencesCan you transform this boring sentence in just three minutes?
Use the building blocks below to help you.
The boy dranksome milk.
boy drank milkthe clever freshhurriedlyEveryday, some
so that his bones stayed strong.
subject verb object determiner adjective adverbfronted
adverbialconjunctionand clause
start stop
Scorching SentencesCan you transform this boring sentence in just three minutes?
Use the building blocks below to help you.
Simon watched the TV.
Simon watched TVbored ancientsilentlyEach
morning, thebecause he had
nothing else to do.
subject verb object determiner adjective adverbfronted
adverbialconjunctionand clause
start stop
Scorching SentencesCan you transform this boring sentence in just three minutes?
Use the building blocks below to help you.
Samson attacked the lion.
Samson attacked lionfearless ferociousbravelyHeroically, theas his life
was in danger.
subject verb object determiner adjective adverbfronted
adverbialconjunctionand clause
start stop
Scorching SentencesCan you transform this boring sentence in just three minutes?
Use the building blocks below to help you.
The teacher marked the books.
teacher marked booksthe dedicated thickcarefullyAfter
school, theso she could see how her class
had done.
start stop
subject verb object determiner adjective adverbfronted
adverbialconjunctionand clause
Start BuildingCan you write sentences which will fit with the following patterns of bricks?
subject verb object determiner adjective adverbfronted
adverbialconjunctionand clause