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ENSP703 PORTFOLIO Mere Jannery D. Serrano

Definition Essay 1st Draft:

Pre-writing:vastwideconnectedinterrelatedinterconnectedinteractivestructureinnovation

Outline:I. IntroductionA. Define I.T. wordsB. Describe your essayC. Ask questionII. BodyA. Introduce your wordB. Define it's uses and coverage/ promoteC. Give examplesIII. ConclusionA. SummarizeB. Give your main opinionC. Message

Draft:

Nowadays, technology has been a part of our daily life and we cannot deny the truth that we are using words that are related to students who take up Information and Technology, and with that I have come to create my own word in which everybody could use it.Toady I will introduce a new word for Information and Technology students and this word is the word "Integram". My challenge is, "If you were to create your own word what would be your basis?", to answer this question let me share the word that I have created.

As I was thinking deeply one time I have come to realize that we are now living in a world of modernization, where there are so many gadgets and technologies, interactive programs and where innovations always takes place, that is why I created the word INTEGRAM. Integram comes from two words first is the word "Interactive" and then the word " Program", so combined together and there you have it Integram. Base from the root words itself I can now define Integram as a new word for calling a program which is created by programmers in order to give joy and entertainment to people.

Integram can be used in different ways depending on how you want it to use in your sentence like for example you want to used it this way " I have created another gaming integram", so this means that you have created a gaming program which can be used by everybody because it's features, instructions, structures and navigations are easy to use and find. Another way of using this word is when you are pertaining to the usability and specifications of a certain program, for example " The integrams of this application is not common to everybody but it would be a better way of testing your skills in following instructions."

The word integram is very convenient to use especially to programmers because it is a better way of describing their programs, it's like when you say that your program is integram therefore your program is really good and also, it can be used as a good description for gaming applications.

So I have just defined and described my new word "Integram". First I showed you how I was able to build this word next, I define it and lastly I have given you its meaning. This is just a simple word yet when you used it in your sentence specially when describing then your sentence would be so much pleased. I have already given you an overview on how I created my word so let me just tell you this, "You don't need to torture your brain just to think for a good word, as long as you know how to defend it then your done". This is my new word and I hope that you liked what I've just created "Integram".

Draft 2:"Integram"Nowadays, technology has been a part of our daily life and we cannot deny the truth that we are using words that are related to students who take up Information and Technology, and with that I have come to create my own word in which everybody could use it.Today I will introduce a new word for Information and Technology students and this word is the word " Integram". My challenge is, "If you were to create your own word what would be your basis?", to answer this question let me share the word that I have created.

As I was thinking deeply one time I have come to realize that we are now living in a world of modernization, where there are so many gadgets and technologies, interactive programs and where innovations always takes place, that is why I created the word INTEGRAM. Integram comes from two words first is the word "Interactive" and then the word " Program", so combined together and there you have it Integram. Base from the root words itself I can now define Integram as a new word for calling a program which is created by programmers in order to give joy and entertainment to people.

Integram can be used in different ways depending on how you want it to use in your sentence like for example you want to used it this way " I have created another gaming integram", so this means that you have created a gaming program which can be used by everybody because it's features, instructions, structures and navigations are easy to use and find. Another way of using this word is when you are pertaining to the usability and specifications of a certain program, for example " The integrams of this application is not common to everybody but it would be a better way of testing your skills in following instructions."


As we all know different applications such as those created for smartphones are very in demand and with the word "Integram", programmers now have a better way of introducing their new applications. This word creates a strong impact to the ears of the audience, in which this would be the one that will catch up the attention of everybody. Integram will then be able to compete for the word of the year since this word is often used by programmers and specially in the world of technology.

So I have just defined and described my new word "Integram". First I showed you how I was able to build this word next, I define it and lastly I have given you its meaning. This is just a simple word yet when you used it in your sentence specially when describing then your sentence would be so much pleased. I have already given you an overview on how I created my word so let me just tell you this, "You don't need to torture your brain just to think for a good word, as long as you know how to defend it then your done". This is my new word and I hope that you liked what I've just created, "Integram".You may want to develop the body of the essay Mere. You can explain or prove further that Integram should be the word of the year. You also have to check for grammatical errors that you may have overlooked in your essay. I am sure you can still improve on your essay Mere. Write on.

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Final Draft:"Integram"Nowadays, technology has been a part of our daily life and we cannot deny the truth that we are using words that are related to students who are taking up Information and Technology, and with that I have come to create my own word in which everybody could use it.Today I will introduce a new word for Information and Technology students and this word is the word Integram". My challenge is, "If you were to create your own word what would be your basis? to answer this question let me share the word that I have created.

As I was thinking deeply one time I have come to realize that we are now living in a world of modernization, where there are so many gadgets and technologies, interactive programs and where innovations always takes place, that is why I created the word INTEGRAM. Integram comes from two words, first is the word "Interactive" and then the word " Program", so combined together and there you have it Integram. Base from the root words itself I can now define Integram as a new word for calling a program which is created by programmers in order to give joy and entertainment to people.

Integram can be used in different ways depending on how you want it to use in your sentence like for example you want to used it this way " I have created another gaming integram", so this means that you have created a gaming program which can be used by everybody because it's features, instructions, structures and navigations are easy to use and find. Another way of using this word is when you are pertaining to the usability and specifications of a certain program, for example The integrams of this application is not common to everybody but it would be a better way of testing your skills in following instructions."


The word integram is originated in the year 2013 that is why this word really fits the modern era. So there is a much greater chance that this word might be one of the nominees for the Word of the Year. It is a word for everyone who wishes to be a good programmer, make this word as your inspiration in doing your programs, Integram.

As we all know different applications such as those created for smartphones are very in demand and with the word "Integram", programmers now have a better way of introducing their new applications. This word creates a strong impact to the ears of the audience, in which this would be the one that will catch up the attention of everybody. Integram will then be able to compete for the word of the year since this word is often used by programmers and especially in the world of technology.

So I have just defined and described my new word "Integram". First I showed you how I was able to build this word next, I define it and lastly I have given you its meaning. This is just a simple word yet when you used it in your sentence especially when describing then your sentence would be so much pleased. I have already given you an overview on how I created my word so let me just tell you this, "You don't need to torture your brain just to think for a good word, as long as you know how to defend it then youre done". This is my new word and I hope that you liked what I've just created, "Integram".

Descriptive Essay 1st Draft:

I. Pre-writingTragicTraumawreckremarkabledeathregretpainsadnesstremblingshockedII. OutlinesI. IntroductionA. Ask questionB. QoutesII. BodyA. First situation (describe)B. Main Incident (narrate)III. ConclusionA. Lessons learnedB. MessageIII. Draft

What's the sense of moving on when you keep on reminiscing those bad memories of the past? "Don't start your day with the broken pieces of yesterday", because today is new day, another life, another chance. Allow me to open up your heart as we go on to the journey of my life story.

On this very day (March 26, 2012), a day to glorify and celebrate for an achievement of a fruit-bearing hardship and patience has come at last, the day of my graduation day. Everyone was filled with mixed emotions; of overflowing gladness and sadness. Happy for we have surpass the challenges of Highschool life but sad because we will be leaving our dearest school and friends in order to face the new battle of life-in the field of education; a way to our dream of successful life. It was indeed a happy day for me, I thought that this was the greatest day of my life until a sudden unexpected incident happened.

It was the night of the celebration of my graduation day when everything seems to be perfect and happy. Me and my mother was asked to drove home my classmate so she would be back safely. We managed to drove her safely and now we are heading back to our house. On the way home my mother was the one who drive the car, it was around12:00in the evening and everybody whose in the car was so sleepy. I was observing them and a moment of silence lead me to feel the same way as they all feel and in just a blink of an eye the car speeds up and "BOOM!", we hit the Mango tree, planted near the wet and unharvested pile of rice, the car was hanged on the branches of the tree, it's totally wrecked and folded as if everybody whose inside the car was dead. I don't know what to do I was shocked, my feet are trembling, my mind seems to stop working I can't think of anything to do. Bloods, bruises and wounds is all that I could see, people are staring at us, murmuring and my Mom was calling for help. The police mobile arrived and even them, they can't do anything to get my Tita off the car, she was seated on the front seat, where I was supposed to sit, my Tita saved my life because she insist to sit there. She suffered the worst and I was the one to be blamed. I want to cry and to tell them that it wasn't my fault, it was nobody's fault, but I can't argue with them. I just accepted every blame that they could throw on me, and when I sleep I always cry, that's the only thing that I could do, and He was the only one whom I can talk with. I told Him everything that I feel, every anger, every heartaches and every pain that I felt. I told God everything because His the only one who could understand me, this is the time that I realized how He loved me because He filled my heart with love and patience, He let me feel that He was with me all the time, He never let me think of anything that could make the situation worst. He guided me all the way until I found myself again, I am now relieved, I can see things clearly now and I begun to change. I decided to change my life and my perspective to be a better person, to prove to them that I am not what they thought I am, that I am not the one to be blamed that I stand up even though they let me down, even though everybody blames me, even though they thought that I am a failure and even though they never trust me. I became stronger, I survived and I have my faith in God.

All the bad things that had happen to me are just ways of God in order for me to realize that He is always there. I learned this lesson and I want to share it to everyone who suffers hopelessness, misery, heartaches and depressions. Never lose your hope and faith in Him, He will never leave you and He will always be ready to guide and help you all through the way of your life. I managed to fight the depressions and downfalls of my life. I took up my entrance examination carrying the fresh moment of the accident but I never let it be the reason to hinder me from achieving my goals and aim in life, instead I continued my fight in the battle of life and now here I am studying and taking up the course that might help me be the person that everyone of them would be proud of.

When you feel like giving up, don't lose hope. Imagine that yesterday is the past and you are leaving in the present, don't let these disastrous, traumatic and tremendous experience bring you down, instead let this be your reason to move on and become stronger in fighting the battles of life. Be strong, be brave, these are the things that life is trying to teach you when you suffer such things so stand up and live your life to the fullest. When you live your life with LOVE, FAITH, and HOPE in God, then you can never fail and you will achieve success. This is the story of my life I almost lost hope but I believed in God, I moved on and I survived.

2nd Draft Descriptive Essay:Draft:Intended Audience: It is not only intended to those who suffers the same fate as I am but rather to everyone whose willing to be inspired by the story of my life.Purpose: This is to give hope to those who suffers tragic and traumatic experiences and to share the lessons of life

FAITH IS ALL THAT MATTERS

What's the sense of moving on when you keep on reminiscing those bad memories of the past?"Don't start your day with the broken pieces of yesterday", because today is new day, another life, another chance.I believe that everyone of us have their own life story whether happy or the other way. Today I will share my life story with you, the most remarkable experience in my life wherein I learned a lot from this experience and I hope that you will also learn from my story.

On this very day (March 26, 2012), a day to glorify and celebrate for an achievement of a fruit-bearing hardship and patience has come at last, the day of my graduation day. Everyone was filled with mixed emotions of overflowing gladness and sadness. Happy for we have surpassed the challenges ofhigh schoollife but sad because we will be leaving our dearest school and friends in order to face the new battles of life - in the field of education; a way to our dream of successful life. It was indeed a happy day for me, I thought that this was the greatest day of my life until a sudden unexpected incident happened.

It was the night of the celebration of my graduation day when everything seems to be perfect and happy. Me and my mother was asked to drove home my classmate so she would be back safely. We managed to drove her safely and now we are heading back to our house. On the way home my mother was the one who drive the car, it was around12:00in the evening and everybody whose in the car was so sleepy. I was observing them and a moment of silence lead me to feel the same way as they all feel and in just a blink of an eye the car speeds up and "BOOM!", we hit the Mango tree, planted near the wet and unharvested pile of rice, the car was hanged on the branches of the tree, it's totally wrecked and folded as if everybody whose inside the car was dead. I don't know what to do I was shocked, my feet are trembling, my mind seems to stop working I can't think of anything to do. Bloods, bruises and wounds is all that I could see, people are staring at us, murmuring and my Mom was calling for help. The police mobile arrived and even them, they can't do anything to get my Tita off the car, she was seated on the front seat, where I was supposed to sit, my Tita saved my life because she insists to sit there. She suffered the worst and I was the one to be blamed. I want to cry and to tell them that it wasn't my fault, it was nobody's fault, but I can't argue with them. I just accepted every blame that they could throw on me, and when I sleep I always cry, that's the only thing that I could do, and He was the only one whom I can talk with. I told Him everything that I feel, every anger, every heartaches and every pain that I felt. I told God everything because His the only one who could understand me, this is the time that I realized how He loved me because He filled my heart with love and patience, He let me feel that He was with me all the time, He never let me think of anything that could make the situation worst. He guided me all the way until I found myself again, I am now relieved, I can see things clearly now and I begun to change. I decided to change my life and my perspective to be a better person, to prove to them that I am not what they thought I am, that I am not the one to be blamed that I stand up even though they let me down, even though everybody blames me, even though they thought that I am a failure and even though they never trust me. I became stronger, I survived and I have my faith in God.

All the bad things that had happen to me are just ways of God in order for me to realize that He is always there. I learned this lesson and I want to share it to everyone who suffers hopelessness, misery, heartaches and depressions. Never lose your hope and faith in Him, He will never leave you and He will always be ready to guide and help you all through your life. I managed to fight the depressions and downfalls of my life. I took up my entrance examination carrying the fresh memories of the accident but I never let it be the reason to hinder me from achieving my goals and aim in life, instead I continued my fight in the battle of life and now here I am studying and taking up the course that might help me be the person that everyone of them would be proud of.


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Final Draft:FAITH IS ALL THAT MATTERS

What's the sense of moving on when you keep on reminiscing the bad memories of the past? When you were asked a question like this the first thing that will come in your mind is Love, but lets dig deeper into what I am trying to say. "Don't start your day with the broken pieces of yesterday", because today is new day, another life, another chance.This quote now will directly point out what do I want to share with you. I believe that every one of us has their own life story whether happy or the other way. Today I will share my life story with you, the most remarkable experience in my life wherein I learned a lot from this experience and I hope that you will also learn from my story.

On this very day (March 26, 2012), a day to glorify and celebrate for an achievement of a fruit-bearing hardship and patience has come at last, the day of my graduation day. Everyone was filled with mixed emotions of overflowing gladness and sadness; happy for we have surpassed the challenges ofhigh schoollife but sad because we will be leaving our dearest school and friends in order to face the new battles of life - in the field of education; a way to our dream of successful life. It was indeed a happy day for me; I thought that this was the greatest day of my life until a sudden unexpected incident happened.

It was the night of the celebration of my graduation day when everything seems to be perfect and happy. I and my mother were asked to drive home my classmate so she would be back safely. We managed to drive her safely and now we are heading back to our house. On the way home my mother was the one who drive the car, it was around12:00in the evening and everybody whos in the car was so sleepy. I was observing them and a moment of silence lead me to feel the same way as they all feel and in just a blink of an eye the car speeds up and "BOOM!", we hit the Mango tree, planted near the wet and unharvested pile of rice, the car was hanged on the branches of the tree, it's totally wrecked and folded as if everybody whose inside the car was dead. I don't know what to do I was shocked, my feet are trembling, my mind seems to stop working I can't think of anything to do. Bloods, bruises and wounds is all that I could see, people are staring at us, murmuring and my Mom was calling for help. The police mobile arrived and even them, they can't do anything to get my Tita off the car, she was seated on the front seat, where I was supposed to sit, my Tita saved my life because she insists to sit there. She suffered the worst and I was the one to be blamed. I want to cry and to tell them that it wasn't my fault, it was nobody's fault, but I can't argue with them. I just accepted all blame that they could throw on me, and when I sleep I always cry, that's the only thing that I could do, and He was the only one whom I can talk with. I told Him everything that I feel, the anger, the heartaches and every pain that I felt. I told God everything because His the only one who could understand me, this is the time that I realized how He loved me because He filled my heart with love and patience, He let me feel that He was with me all the time, He never let me think of anything that could make the situation worst. He guided me all the way until I found myself again, I am now relieved, I can see things clearly now and I begun to change. I decided to change my life and my perspective to be a better person, to prove to them that I am not what they thought I am, that I am not the one to be blamed that I stand up even though they let me down, even though everybody blames me, even though they thought that I am a failure and even though they never trust me. I became stronger, I survived and I have my faith in God.

All the bad things that had happen to me are just ways of God in order for me to realize that He is always there. I learned this lesson and I want to share it to everyone who suffers hopelessness, misery, heartaches and depressions. Never lose your hope and faith in Him, He will never leave you and He will always be ready to guide and help you all through your life. I managed to fight the depressions and downfalls of my life. I took up my entrance examination carrying the fresh memories of the accident but I never let it be the reason to hinder me from achieving my goals and aim in life, instead I continued my fight in the battle of life and now here I am studying and taking up the course that might help me be the person that everyone of them would be proud of.


Compare and contrast 1st Draft:

Pre-writing:CareLoveFamilyCareerHappinessDifficultMoneyMemories

Outline:I. Introduction:A. Define family and careerB. QouteC. Ask questionII. Body:A. Present your 1st ArgumentB. 2nd ArgumentC. 3rd ArgumentD. Final AnswerIII. Conclusion:A. SummarizeB. MessageC. Question

Draft:

Will you choose your career/work over your family?Everybody has their own family and chosen career in life. Our families are the one's who are giving us such happiness in life and we are with them all the time. They are the one's whom we can rely on everytime that we need them. On the otherhand, our career is our chosen decision in life, it is where we can see how well did we perform in our life, this is the fruit of our success in the field of education. But when you were asked to choose whether your family or your career, what would you choose? Today I will tell you about what is my opinion about the matter of choosing between your family or your career.

First, in choosing between two things we must first see them in different perspectives. Ask yourself on two questions, what will I do with my family without my career? Or What will I do with my career without my family? See how these questions differ? We have our own opinions on different matters and with regard to our family we also have different opinions about this. Its really difficult to choose whether career or family. You will be very happy if you choose your family but on the other way around you would also be thinking on how will you raise your family without your career or job? And if we choose our career, there's a tendency that the family members would be affected since choosing your career over them would be a little bit upsetting because you will need to leave your family for your own choice that is why I pointed out on the first paragraph that career is our chosen decision in life.

Second, in choosing you may also want to ask yourself what is really important to you, or what really matters to you? Is it your career or your family? There are different cases in which we could base our answer to these questions, for example an OFW worker, these people are the one's who really is affected on this decision since they are choosing their work/career in order for them to earn money for their family, but on the other hand we can't really say that they are choosing their work over their family because they are just doing it for them. These OFW's are the one's who sacrifices a lot in order for their family to have a better life and a better future, but in turn these children who are left behind may have different understandings on why their parents (mother/father) leave them, some may understand, some may not. As a result this will lessen their bond and love for their parents which is not good because if these parents would return to them, these children would maybe hate or miss them that they would change the way they treat their parents when they get back from work/from abroad.

Third and last, in choosing we must consider this question, "Would you be happy if you choose your family? Or your career? This is a hard question, of course you are happy whenever you see your family but you are also happy when you know that you can provide them everything that they need. Does it matter when your happy but your stomach aches? No, your not. But would you be happy also if you can't stay beside the your family and you wont see them grow? It's a big NO, NO either. We just need to really follow what our heart desires, because our heart will lead us to the right path. And the wisest thing that you could ask for help is God's guidance.

I have presented my opinions on how I look at this family over career thing first is try to see things on different perspectives and ask yourself what are the things that each can contribute to you in order to come up with a wise decision, second, which is more important, weigh your answer base onyour hearts desire and lastly, consider on where would you be more happy, these are some things to bear in mind in order to create a wise decision.

Indeed, it is hard to choose on whether career or work but in the end you will end up choosing what's really in your heart. We cannot say or predict what is to happen but we can choose wisely in order to predict these bad happenings. Learn to love your family and at the same time learn to love your work as well because these things come in partner, without work you can't feed your family, without family, there's work doesn't matter at all because you don't have someone to offer your life for. So now you choose, Work/Career or Family? The answer lies in you.

2nd Draft: Will you choose your career/work over your family?Everybody has their own family and chosen career in life. Our families are the one's who are giving us such happiness in life and we are with them all the time. They are the one's whom we can rely on everytime that we need them. On the otherhand, our career is our chosen decision in life, it is where we can see how well did we perform in our life, this is the fruit of our success in the field of education. But when you were asked to choose whether your family or your career, what would you choose? Today I will tell you about what is my opinion about the matter of choosing between your family or your career.

First, in choosing between two things we must first see them in different perspectives. Ask yourself on two questions, what will I do with my family without my career? Or what will I do with my career without my family? See how these questions differ? We have our own opinions on different matters and with regard about family matters we also have different opinions about this. Its really difficult to choose whether career or family. You will be very happy if you choose your family but on the other way around you would also be thinking on how will you raise your family without your career or job. And if we choose our career, there's a tendency that the family members would be affected since choosing your career over them would be a little bit upsetting because you will need to leave your family for your own choice that is why I pointed out on the first paragraph that career is our chosen decision in life.

Second, in choosing you may also want to ask yourself what is really important to you, or what really matters to you? Is it your career or your family? There are different cases in which we could base our answer to these questions, for example an OFW worker, these people are the one's who really is affected on this decision since they are choosing their work/career in order for them to earn money for their family, but on the other hand we can't really say that they are choosing their work over their family because they are just doing it for them. These OFW's are the one's who sacrifices a lot in order for their family to have a better life and a better future, but in turn these children who are left behind may have different understandings on why their parents (mother/father) leave them, some may understand, some may not. As a result this will lessen their bond and love for their parents which is not good because if these parents would return to them, these children would maybe hate or miss them that they would change the way they treat their parents when they get back from work/from abroad.

Third and last, in choosing we must consider this question, "Would you be happy if you choose your family? Or your career? This is a hard question, of course you are happy whenever you see your family but you are also happy when you know that you can provide them everything that they need. Does it matter when your happy but your stomach aches? No, your not. But would you be happy also if you can't stay beside the your family and you wont see them grow? It's a big NO, NO either. We just need to really follow what our heart desires, because our heart will lead us to the right path. And the wisest thing that you could ask for help is God's guidance.


Indeed, it is hard to choose on whether career or work but in the end you will end up choosing what's really in your heart. We cannot say or predict what is to happen but we can choose wisely in order to predict these bad happenings. Learn to love your family and at the same time learn to love your work as well because these things come in partner, without work you can't feed your family, without family, there's work doesn't matter at all because you don't have someone to offer your life for. So now the answer lies in you.

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Final Draft:Will you choose your career/work over your family?Everybody has their own family and chosen career in life. Our families are the ones who are giving us such happiness in life and we are with them all the time. They are the one's whom we can rely on every time that we need them. On the other hand, our career is our chosen decision in life, it is where we can see how well did we perform in our life; this is the fruit of our success in the field of education. But when you were asked to choose whether your family or your career, what would you choose? Today I will tell you about what is my opinion about the matter of choosing between your family and your career.

First, in choosing between two things we must first see them in different perspectives. Ask yourself these two questions, What will I do with my family without my career? Or What will I do with my career without my family? See how these questions differ? We have our own opinions on different matters and with regard on family matters we also have different opinions about this. Its really difficult to choose whether career or family. You will be very happy if you choose your family but on the other way around you would also be thinking on how you will raise your family without your career or job. And if we choose our career, there's a tendency that family members would be affected since choosing your career over them would be a little bit upsetting because you will need to leave your family for your own choice that is why I pointed out on the first paragraph that career is our chosen decision in life.

Second, in choosing you may also want to ask yourself what is really important to you, or what really matters to you, is it your career or your family? There are different cases in which we could base our answer to these questions, for example an OFW worker, these people are the ones who really is affected on this decision since they are choosing their work/career in order for them to earn money for their family, but on the other hand we can't really say that they are choosing their work over their family because they are just doing it for them. These OFW's are the ones who sacrifices a lot in order for their family to have a better life and a better future, but in turn these children who are left behind may have different understandings on why their parents (mother/father) leave them, some may understand, some may not. As a result this will lessen their bond and love for their parents which is not good because if these parents would return to them, these children would maybe hate or miss them that they would change the way they treat their parents when they get back from work/from abroad.

Third and last, in choosing we must consider this question, "Would you be happy if you choose your family, or your career? This is a hard question, of course you are happy whenever you see your family but you are also happy when you know that you can provide them everything that they need. Does it matter when youre happy but your stomach aches? No, its not. But would you be happy also if you can't stay beside your family and you wont see them grow? It's a big NO, NO either. We just need to really follow what our heart desires, because our heart will lead us to the right path. And the wisest thing that you could ask for help is God's guidance.


Indeed, it is hard to choose on whether career or work but in the end you will end up choosing what's really in your heart. We cannot say or predict what is to happen but we can choose wisely in order to predict these bad happenings. Learn to love your family and at the same time learn to love your work as well because these things come in partner, without work you can't feed your family, without family, work doesn't matter at all because you don't have someone to offer your life to, so now the answer lies in you.

Cause and effect 1st Draft:Pre-Writing:FailureSadCryTake for grantedLooseScholarshipSchoolingGoalOutline:I. IntroductionA. Define gradesB. QouteC. Ask questionII. BodyA. State the cause and effect (1st)B. State the cause and effect(2nd)C. State the cause and effect(3rd)D. Generalize the effectIII. ConclusionA. SummarizeB. MessageC. Qoute

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All people have the desire to reach their goals in life and specially the goal to finish our studies. Thinking about our schooling what are the requirements needed to reach this goals? Well of course we need a passing grade to come up with a good result, but if you got a failing grade then you will not be able to reach success. So today, my essay will be about the cause and effect of having a failing remarks/ grade. "True learning takes energy, passion and burning desire". So how will you overcome this failure?

Student's lifeis not always good or happy sometimes there are ups and downs that you will encounter along the way. The journey to success is a rough and curve roads but to walk straightly forward is the challenge to every student. As a student we may encounter once in our life the feeling of being great and happy whenever you are with your peers or friends, you cannot take away the fact that when you stick with bad influenced persons then you will come up to being influenced as well and that is one reason why students got failing grades. Instead of going to school you are choosing the other way and that is to go with your peers and do whatever trips or things they would like to do, your mindset would be " as long as I am happy then I will continue doing this", and this will ruin/destroy your goal to succeed in life and you will end up choosing the wrong way.

Second, students nowadays spend more time in social media sites rather than working on their projects or reviewing for their exams. You cannot take away this leisure to a student since social media networks have been part of their everyday life but what I am pointing out is that this social networks are not helping them anymore hence it is wasting their time in such things that are not really necessary. For example whenever a student open up google to search for their assignments you will be assured that beside the tab of google is Facebook, Twitter, Yahoo, etc and after that they will end up unfinished with their assignments/ projects and later on they will do cramming. See how these social networks affect students.

Third and last, is having the mindset of "bahala na si Batman", I can often hear this phrase whenever there are quiz, exams, or projects to be done. Having this mindset is not a good thing because you are relying only to your schema and you are confident that you still remember everything though you're not. So when the examination comes you will say " what is this again.. uRghh.. I can't remember it" and end up doing this " mini, mini mini mo". After the examination you will pass your paper and scan on your notes or ask you classmate what is the right answer and then you will say " OH my gosh, I'm wrong", and then it's like you want to retest but it's too late.

All of the three things that I mentioned ( being influenced by peers, being addicted to social medias, and having a "bahala na" mindset), would fall to the result of failing grades and failure of goals. It's very sad because you are wasting your chances to do better with your life. You are wasting the efforts and sacrifices of your parents. You are taking things for granted and you are ruining your life.

We, people have different characteristics and attitudes towards life but let us not forget to think for the better because only then we can change for the best. When you encounter temptations and bad influenced just let it passed you by so you will not end up being part of its bitter result (to fail). We only have one life to live so try living your life to the fullest and that is always do what is fair and just, always do good things and you will achieve the most beautiful reward that one can get, the 'SUCCESS'. Isn't it pleasing to the ear when you hear this word? So start changing for the better, and for you to do that start asking yourself, "Am I doing he right thing?", and always ask for His (God's) guidance, only then will you escape from the triumphs and temptations that would hinder you in achieving success. "The best thing to make your dreams come true is to wake up".

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Draft 2:

Why students get a failing grade?

All people have the desire to reach their goals in life and specially the goal to finish our studies. Thinking about our schooling what are the requirements needed to reach this goals? Well of course we need a passing grade to come up with a good result, but if you got a failing grade then you will not be able to reach success.So today, my essay will be about the cause and effect of having a failing remarks/grade."True learning takes energy, passion and burning desire". So how will you overcome this failure?The highlighted statement is the intent of you essay. But you should state you stand or claim about the topic. Student's lifeis not always good or happy, sometimes there are ups and downs that you will encounter along the way. The journey to success is a rough and curve roads but to walk straightly forward is the challenge to every student. As a student we may encounter once in our life the feeling of being great and happy whenever you are with your peers or friends, you cannot take away the fact that when you stick with bad influenced persons then you will come up to being influenced as well and that is one reason why students got failing grades. Instead of going to school you are choosing the other way and that is to go with your peers and do whatever trips or things they would like to do, your mindset would be " as long as I am happy then I will continue doing this", and this will ruin/destroy your goal to succeed in life and you will end up choosing the wrong way. Second, students nowadays spend more time in social media sites rather than working on their projects or reviewing for their exams. You cannot take away this leisure to a student since social media networks have been part of their everyday life but what I am pointing out is that this social networks are not helping them anymore hence it is wasting their time in such things that are not really necessary. For example whenever a student open up google to search for their assignments you will be assured that beside the tab of google is Facebook, Twitter, Yahoo, etc and after that they will end up unfinished with their assignments/ projects and later on they will do cramming. See how these social networks affect students?

Third and last, is having the mindset of "bahala na si Batman", I can often hear this phrase whenever there are quiz, exams, or projects to be done. Having this mindset is not a good thing because you are relying only to your schema and you are confident that you still remember everything though you're not. So when the examination comes you will say " what is this again.. uRghh.. I can't remember it" and end up doing this " mini, mini mini mo". After the examination you will pass your paper and scan on your notes or ask you classmate what is the right answer and then you will say " OH my gosh, I'm wrong", and then it's like you want to retest but it's too late. All of the three things that I mentioned ( being influenced by peers, being addicted to social medias, and having a "bahala na" mindset), would fall to the result of failing grades and failure of goals. It's very sad because you are wasting your chances to do better with your life. You are wasting the efforts and sacrifices of your parents. You are taking things for granted and you are ruining your life.

So I have just shared to you the cause and effects of having a failing grade. First cause is the peer pressures and influences, second is the influence of social medias, and third is having the mindset of "bahala na". These are just few of the causes why we, students fail to get a high grade.We, people have different characteristics and attitudes towards life but let us not forget to think for the better because only then we can change for the best. When you encounter temptations and bad influenced just let it passed you by so you will not end up being part of its bitter result (to fail). We only have one life to live so try living your life to the fullest and that is always do what is fair and just, always do good things and you will achieve the most beautiful reward that one can get, the 'SUCCESS'. Isn't it pleasing to the ear when you hear this word? So start changing for the better, and for you to do that start asking yourself, "Am I doing he right thing?", and always ask for His (God's) guidance, only then will you escape from the triumphs and temptations that would hinder you in achieving success. "The best thing to make your dreams come true is to wake up".

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Final Draft:Why students get a failing grade?

All people have the desire to reach their goals in life and specially the goal to finish our studies. Thinking about our schooling what are the requirements needed to reach this goals? Well of course we need a passing grade to come up with a good result, but if you got a failing grade then you will not be able to reach success. So today, my essay will be about the cause and effect of having a failing remarks/grade and I will also share with you my opinion about this, at the end I will give you some advices. "True learning takes energy, passion and burning desire". So how will you overcome this failure?

Student's lifeis not always good or happy; sometimes there are ups and downs that you will encounter along the way. The journey to success is a rough and curve roads but to walk straightly forward is the challenge to every student. As a student we may encounter once in our life the feeling of being great and happy whenever you are with your peers or friends, you cannot take away the fact that when you stick with bad influenced persons then you will come up to being influenced as well and that is one reason why students got failing grades. Instead of going to school you are choosing the other way and that is to go with your peers and do whatever trips or things they would like to do, your mindset would be " as long as I am happy then I will continue doing this", and this will ruin/destroy your goal to succeed in life and you will end up choosing the wrong way. Second, students nowadays spend more time in social media sites rather than working on their projects or reviewing for their exams. You cannot take away this leisure to a student since social media networks have been part of their everyday life but what I am pointing out is that this social networks are not helping them anymore hence it is wasting their time in such things that are not really necessary. For example whenever a student open up Google to search for their assignments you will be assured that beside the tab of Google is Facebook, Twitter, Yahoo, etc and after that they will end up unfinished with their assignments/ projects and later on they will do cramming. See how these social networks affect students?

Third and last, is having the mindset of "Bahala na si Batman", I can often hear this phrase whenever there are quiz, exams, or projects to be done. Having this mindset is not a good thing because you are relying only to your schema and you are confident that you still remember everything though you're not. So when the examination comes you will say what is this again.. uRghh.. I can't remember it" and ends up doing this " mini, mini mini mo". After the examination you will pass your paper and scan on your notes or ask you classmate what is the right answer and then you will say " OH my gosh, I'm wrong", and then it's like you want to retest but it's too late. All of the three things that I mentioned (being influenced by peers, being addicted to social medias, and having a "bahala na" mindset), would fall to the result of failing grades and failure of goals. It's very sad because you are wasting your chances to do better with your life. You are wasting the efforts and sacrifices of your parents. You are taking things for granted and you are ruining your life.

So I have just shared to you the cause and effects of having a failing grade. First cause is the peer pressures and influences, second is the influence of social medias, and third is having the mindset of "bahala na". These are just few of the causes why we, students fail to get a high grade.We, people have different characteristics and attitudes towards life but let us not forget to think for the better because only then we can change for the best. When you encounter temptations and bad influenced just let it passed you by so you will not end up being part of its bitter result (to fail). We only have one life to live so try living your life to the fullest and always do what is fair and just, always do good things and you will achieve the most beautiful reward that one can get, the 'SUCCESS'. Isn't it pleasing to the ear when you hear this word? So start changing for the better, and for you to do that start asking yourself, "Am I doing the right thing?", and always ask for His (God's) guidance, only then will you escape from the triumphs and temptations that would hinder you in achieving success. "The best thing to make your dreams come true is to wake up".

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