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Dear editor, I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results. 58% of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. They're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. 30% will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and

Dear editor, I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results. 58% of the students will

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Page 1: Dear editor, I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results. 58% of the students will

Dear editor, I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results. 58% of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. They're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. 30% will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and

Page 2: Dear editor, I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results. 58% of the students will

parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only 12% students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends. In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help. Yours Li Hua

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There/it is 58 percent of students choose/think… Xbe of the same age Xwhen they in trouble Xsb. Xcommon Xelders XTeachers or parents, they have… Xhave kind-heart Xbelieve in / trustchoose chose chosen choice

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Good expressions:Teachers and parents rank the second place. 王东They are loving and experienced. 张铭格I am one of the 30% students, because I think teachers and parents are the best listeners. 林朦朦Obviously, most of the students like seeking help from their teachers and parents. 林川长…which can help us become much more mature. 吴舒梦There can be more students in need of help. We should help them with patience. 林斌斌About 30% are for the idea that teachers and parents can help us. 陈彦廷Don’t be afraid of being turned down.We should communicate with …so that we can have a good knowledge of ourselves, and help others as well. 金密密

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Due to similar age, they usually share common ideas.The majority of them don’t like to…From the results listed above,… 庄小杰Statistics show that most students tend to ask … for help.About three tenths of them…Despite the reasons above,… 张聪I’ll choose the way of turning to friends for help. I have a lot of friends. If someday I get into trouble, at least, I have my friends around me. They’ll help me no matter what happened. If they are, I’ll help them too. 万旭It must be admitted that they have much experience and can be believed in. 张策林My parents will spare no effort to help me in order to do me good. 林和逍

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Friends can come up with god ideas to solve the problems. In terms of psychology, teenagers trust friends than parents. 李芊慧They can’t open their heart to some other people including their parents. 鲍如珍30 percent of the students will seek advice from their teachers or parents. 吴安琪Their love and experience are worth the trust of us.They cherish and enjoy our trust. 王钧12% students are unwilling to communicate with others. They refuse to adopt ideas from ohters.They may comfort me. 林苗苗…or else the situation will be worse. 胡程渝Anyway, different people have their own way to solve the problems. But we should choose a positive way and communicate more with others. 陈丹铌

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We believe the world is full of love. Let’s communicate with each other and help each other. 林汇铭God help the people who always help themselves. 张家豪If we often ask them for help. We’ll be more dependent on them. It’s not good for us in the growing process. 胡贝贝Judging from the figures, we can know that most teenagers like communicating with the similar age youth.They have abundant experience.They know how to help me, encourage me to insist on.My trouble is always beyond their thinking. 章叶思But to my surprise, there were 12%students saying… 杨楠However, there still exist 12% students who… 林雨荟

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 图表作文

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          模板 第一段 : 简述The… ( 某种图, bar chart, pie chart, curve graph) shows …( 如 “中国能源利用”,图下面或题干中 )

第二段 : 说明以时间为比较基础 : 抓住变化 ( 上升 / 下降 / 波动 )不以时间为比较基础 : 描述极点 ( 极大,极小 ) ,趋势,   特别点 ( 转折点,相同点等 )

第三段 : 总结 From the chart, we may have a basic understanding of the situation of..….分析原因或建议

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 开始描述   The survey/figures/statistics show(s) (that)...     According to…   As (is) shown in the…     As can be seen from the…   It can be seen from the…that…     We can see from the…   It is clear from the…  阐述原因: … reflects….  From the difference between... ,we can see the changes   in…  It appears that…directly affects …  Obviously, …contributes to the decrease of….

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图表作文的常用词上升 : increase, rise, go up, climb 下降 : decrease, fall, drop, reduce平稳 :similar to remain/maintain/keep/be the same as占 : occupy, take up, account for, 而 : while, however, whereas, on the other hand, 相比 : by contract, on the contrary, compared with 最高点 : the highest, the top, the most 最低点 : the bottom, less, least平均 : average 趋势 : tendency, trend 预见 : predict在……中占…… : gain the percentage of

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An example: A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% this year, while that of overweight students from 36% to 52.4%. Nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do. Besides, over 15% more students become mentally unhealthy.

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To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from getting nearsighted. Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.

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S1The statistics above are really shocking.We have to take actions in no time.Only if homework is reduced can sleeping hours be guaranteed.

S2Some students arrange their time in a non-scientific way. They study hard deep into night, worn out.To maintain a good state, students should make a proper timetable and try not to go against their biological clock.It contributes to easing the pressure to a certain extent.

S3The school should decrease the students’ work load and increase their leisure time.A good health is the basis of success.

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Unit121.Creatures2.Forehead3.Powerful4.Neighbors5.Succeed6.Looks7.Serious8.Secret9.Honest10.Habits11.Shouldered12.Whisper13.Treated14.Forehead

15.Exhibition16.Local17.Character18.Literature19.Power20.Trick21.Magic22.Series23.Scar24.Habit 25.Stupid26.Announcement27.Shoulder28.comedies

Unit131.Stomachs2.Energy3.Ripe4.Diet5.Sleepy6.Function7.Organic8.Soft9.Muscles10.Mineral11.Plenty12.Ingredient13.Spoonfuls14.Digests

15.Peel16.Mixture17.Recipe18.Tasty19.Balance20.Functioned21.Examined22.Based23.Chemicals24.Blanced25.Boiled26.Gaining27.fuels

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会考模拟作文

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As we all know, English is an international Language. A great number of people in the world use it to communicate with each other.With the 2008 Olympic Games to be held in Beijing, English is becoming very important in our daily life, so more and more Chinese begin to learn English. There are some reasons for me to learn it.First, I’m interested in English. I often read English books, listen to English songs and watch English films in my spare time.

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Besides, I like to make friends with foreigners. I have a pen pal in Canada and we often send e-mails to each other in English. Since I benefit a lot from learning English, I will continue to learn it.