Creative process - feature

First DraftI deconstructed this feature from NME magazine, and

created my own feature design based on this. I will then recreate this initial sketch using Photoshop.

Second Draft (with feedback)

• This page is quite bland as it has no colour, therefore I should add some

bright colours so that the feature fits into

the overall magazine more successfully.

• The quote was criticised for being too large – however I may keep it the same as I

have based the design on a similar feature

from a successful magazine, and I feel

that the quote helps to draw the reader in.

I asked my peers what I could do to improve my

feature pages, so that would be an overall more

successful product: