8/14/2019 Citizenship and Significance of History Exercise
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Exercise: Significance of history - citizenshipMATRICNO.
CREDITPOINTSEARNED
COMMENTS
0917956 5 Very good and relevant, especially the part about
heroes
of independence. The introductory paragraph is a littleconfusing
and redundant (MyKad etc.). Sr., please keepin mind the academic
saying use your sources, dont let
your sources use you. You expressed complex ideas inyour own
words, which is good.
0919110 5 points 10 if you are willingto present your
essay to theclass
Brilliant! You understand the link between history
andcitizenship very well, Sr. In addition, you combined yourown,
well-argued observations with learning contentfrom our class, to
very good effect. Well done.
0923881 Thank you for
yourparticipation;please try again
next time.
Thank you very much for your effort, Br. Perhaps I did
not explain the assignment well enough. I am confidentthat you
will do better on other, future assignments.
0914056 5 A good piece of writing, Sr. You used your own wordsto
express complex ideas well.Just one technical note: For a
middle-aged, near-sighted
person like me, reading your handwriting is quitepainful. Please
use block letters or larger-size writing ifpossible. Thank you.
0922327 5 Good. A bit descriptive, but overall a nice effort,
Br.0718632 5 A well-written piece. You understand and present
the
main logical points well, Sr. Perhaps a little too factualand
descriptive in places I would encourage you to putmore of your own
ideas and observations into the writingwherever possible.
0820189 5 Good job, Br. You talk sincerely about your
owncountry, in your own words, to good effect. Mabrouk!
0911254 5 Concise, well presented and well formatted. A
goodeffort, Sr.Perhaps some of the detail on the Malayan Union
isredundant (considering the overall length of thedocument). As
they say, use your sources [critically];
dont let your sources use you.0914314 5 A well-written,
structured and argued piece, applying
classroom learning to the history and values of your owncountry.
Well done, Sr.
0917168 5 A fairly good effort, Sr., although the scope is very
broad(from Srivijaya to Petronas Towers in one page).
0818878 5 A nice, sincere, and meticulously written paper
thatcaptures all the main aspects and contemporary trends inwhat it
means to be Malaysian. Obviously you put a lotof thought into this
assignment, Sr. Well done.
0919338 Very good. Relevant, well-researched, and linked to
current events. Syabas. Keep up the good work, Sr.0912855 5
points 10 if A very intelligent, sincere, well-argued, and
well-written
