A2 Essay Framework – Human Coasts and China

Introduction

- Definition of term in the question- A quick sum up of the context of the question – 10% GDP growth in China and how this affects the

question- Exactly what the essay will discuss using the wording from the question

Main – 1 st Paragraph

- Rank/LBTQ/Point- Case study with figures and explanation together – ending with LBTQ. 2 parts of the explanation –

why? Knock on?- Criticism of the point with case study – should be made clear whether the criticism is more

important than the point or just influences it- Criticism of the locations – other locations that are similar or different with case studies- Mini Evaluation – judgement and explanation why you made that judgement. In the future..

2 nd Paragraph

- Rank/LBTQ/Point- Why it has been ranked 2nd – less impact? More short term? Easier to solve? Is a knock-on effect

of the 1st point? etc- Case study with figures and explanation together – ending with LBTQ. 2 parts of the explanation –

why? Knock on?- Criticism of the point with case study – should be made clear whether the criticism is more

important than the point or just influences it- Criticism of the locations – other locations that are similar or different with case studies- Mini Evaluation – judgement and explanation why you made that judgement. In the future..

3 rd Paragraph

- Rank/LBTQ/Point- Why it has been ranked 3rd – less impact? More short term? Easier to solve? Is a knock-on effect

of the 1st point? etc- Case study with figures and explanation together – ending with LBTQ. 2 parts of the explanation –

why? Knock on?- Criticism of the point with case study – should be made clear whether the criticism is more

important than the point or just influences it- Criticism of the locations – other locations that are similar or different with case studies- Mini Evaluation – judgement and explanation why you made that judgement. In the future..

Conclusion

- Make the judgement and explain why – Will this factor always be the most important?

- Sum up of the entire essay LBTQ- In the future- Can’t generalised points to all locations/situations with LBTQ