Business Proposal of John Macathen 1844 by Friso Kolff 6H

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    Role:My role is to tell a story of the history of

    Happy Valley Racecourse and moreabout that time in 1844.I used the

    perspective of a military officer fromBritain called John Macathen.To showthis i will write a buisness proposal fromJohn Macathen to the government,alsoshowing negative and positive feelings

    of him.

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    Happy Valley Racecourse Date: 1844

    December

    Dear Government

    I, John Macathen a British military officer of the army

    propose to build a beautiful racecourse for racing and

    training with horses.It is a spectacular round of 1400

    meters long. It will be a round of grass with seats for

    people to watch.It will be located on a marshland which

    is ideal for horse riding in the center of the city in Hong

    Kong,because people can get there easy and there isenough space.

    Why do we think a racecourse will be interesting:Britain

    owns Hong Kong since 1842. In Britain horse racing is

    very popular. As there are living lots of Britishin Hong

    Kong it is important to provide horse racing facilities.

    Because the people relax and enjoy this in their free

    time.

    For who will the racing be interesting:The racecourse

    will be built for the naval and military officers,the rich,

    the famous people and businessmen, but as time will

    pass, we expect that ordinary Hong Kong citizens willwatch this spectacular as well.

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    Here is further information about the

    racecourse such as the size, time we expect

    to build it, etc

    Size:

    The whole round of the racecourse will be

    1400 meters long not counting the seats next

    to it.

    Expected time to build:Me and the other dozens of military officers

    will start building in 1845 and by the end of

    February 1846 it will be finished, so it will

    take approximately one year.

    Things to build the racecourse:It will not be complicated, we need wood for

    the sides and grass for the ground, also we

    have to put some extra sand on the ground

    so it will be less humid; for the spectators we

    will construct marshed stands.

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    where / location

    We think the best place will be, just behind the

    coastal line of Causeway Bay, as this land is

    wet and therefore very good for horse races.

    Also the ground is not constructed yet, it is only

    in use by farmers. So it will be good for Hong

    Kong to have the racecourse here as we get

    lost of the diseases Malaria here, we will call it

    Happy Valley

    Unfortunately we are aware of some problems

    that will need to be solved. Here are our

    problems and our concerns for the racecourse.

    Firstly we will have to find a place for the

    farmers to move to. Secondly one of myconcerns is that we will have to drain the

    terrain although by this we can get lost of the

    disease malaria.

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    We are suitable for this job because in thepast we have been highly traind in developing

    and building camps,tanks,etc. This is not only

    me but all theother dozens of military officers.We are also suitable for this job because we

    have benn building different things and people

    say we are quick workers and we are highly

    trained.

    Finally when we have built this hugeracecourse we will be happy to pronounce that

    all the money of the bets and all of that will go

    to your government and we will also give

    money to charity which we are proud of.My

    opinion of the racecourse when it is finished is

    hopefully that it is superb and

    glorious.I think that this racecourse will befamous for a long amount of time in the

    future. I and the other military officers hope to

    be able to build this racecourse,and iuf we get

    the chance i would be proud to get a part in

    this.

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    Additional source (museum)Hong Kong Racing Museum

    Address:Happy Valley, Won Nai Chung Road N.2Owners:HK football clubDate Visited:19/10/12Hong Kong Museum Of HistoryAddress:Kowloon, Kathan Road South N.100Date visited:23/10/12Owners:Hong Kong Museum Of Art