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For The San Gabriel Writers’ League www.SGWL.net January 2012 Animated Film Production: From Conception to Hollywood Premier Cindy Weigand is the author of one book and several articles in local, state, and national publications. Cindy is also a representative of OntaireMedia, a company that finds funding for ani- mated feature films. In her talk, she will take attendees through the process of pro- ducing an animated movie. In 2004, her book, Texas Women in World War II, Republic of Texas Press, an im- print of Rowman & Littlefield Publishing Group, was a finalist in the Violet Crown Writ- ing Contest for Nonfiction sponsored by the Writers' League of Texas. Her article, "'Yankee Doodle Gals' of World War II" published in the June 2002 issue of Texas Co-op Power, received an Award of Merit, Writing-Personality/Profile Category in the 2003 Dalton Pen Writing Contest sponsored by Warwick Publishing. She continues to write on various projects including a biographical novel. Cindy represents OntaireMedia, www.ontaire.com, a company that assists individuals and groups find funding for animated films and television shows as well as live- action movies. In her presentation, Cindy will describe the steps to making an independent movie from pre- production to post-production. PUBLICATIONS AND AWARDS Weigand, Cindy, “‘Papa’ Piper and Lock Haven’s WW II Women Pilots.” Pennsylvania Magazine. March-April, 2000. Weigand, Cindy, “‘Yankee Doodle Gals’ of World War II,” Texas Co-op Power, June 2002. Dalton Pen Writing Contest Award of Merit, Writing-Personality/Profile Category, sponsored by Warwick Publishing, 2003. Weigand, Cindy, “WASP Memorabilia Finds Home in Texas,” Friends Journal, Pub- lished Quarterly by the Air Force Museum Foundation, Inc. Winter 2002-2003. Weigand, Cindy, and Julia Lauria-Blum, “Flights Commemorate Fallen Comrades,” Friends Journal, Published Quarterly by the Air Force Museum Foundation, Inc. Spring 2005. Weigand, Cindy, Texas Women in World War II, Republic of Texas Press, an Imprint of Rowman & Littlefield Publishing Group, November 2003. Finalist, Violet Crown Writing Contest, Nonfiction, sponsored by the Writers’ League of Texas, 2004, Texas Women in World War II. Weigand, Cindy, “Mad Scientist at Work,” Georgetown View Magazine, May 2010. Weigand, Cindy, “The Amazing Mrs. Z,” Georgetown View Magazine, June 2010. Weigand, Cindy, “Kimberly Griffin, Paideia Scholar,” Georgetown View Magazine, August 2010. Inside this Issue 2 Minutes Book signing pictures News 3 President’s Perspective Importance 4 Christmas Party pixs 5 Christmas Party pixs 6 Christmas Party pixs 7 Christmas Party pixs 8 My Mother’s Thimbles Book Discussion Who “said” 9 Dating After 50 Fall Tapestry Jo Cate Greetings 10 Ask the Book Doctor SIGs Who “said” answer 11 Board Members Member Websites Recycle Promote Your Book Books by Members Promote Yourself HCBS 12 Demystifying Writers’ Demons Meeting Information The members attending the Christmas Party contributed $101.00 to the Georgetown Public Library Bookmobile project.

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For The San Gabriel Writers’ League www.SGWL.net January 2012

Animated Film Production: From Conception to Hollywood Premier

Cindy Weigand is the author of one book and several articles in local, state, and

national publications.

Cindy is also a representative of OntaireMedia, a company that finds funding for ani-mated feature films. In her talk, she will take attendees through the process of pro-

ducing an animated movie.

In 2004, her book, Texas Women in World War II, Republic of Texas Press, an im-

print of Rowman & Littlefield Publishing Group, was a finalist in the Violet Crown Writ-ing Contest for Nonfiction sponsored by the Writers' League of Texas. Her article,

"'Yankee Doodle Gals' of World War II" published in the

June 2002 issue of Texas Co-op Power, received an Award of Merit, Writing-Personality/Profile Category in

the 2003 Dalton Pen Writing Contest sponsored by Warwick Publishing. She continues to write on various

projects including a biographical novel.

Cindy represents OntaireMedia, www.ontaire.com, a

company that assists individuals and groups find funding

for animated films and television shows as well as live-action movies. In her presentation, Cindy will describe the

steps to making an independent movie from pre-production to post-production.

PUBLICATIONS AND AWARDS Weigand, Cindy, “‘Papa’ Piper and Lock Haven’s WW II Women Pilots.” Pennsylvania

Magazine. March-April, 2000.

Weigand, Cindy, “‘Yankee Doodle Gals’ of World War II,” Texas Co-op Power, June

2002.

Dalton Pen Writing Contest Award of Merit, Writing-Personality/Profile Category, sponsored by Warwick Publishing, 2003.

Weigand, Cindy, “WASP Memorabilia Finds Home in Texas,” Friends Journal, Pub-

lished Quarterly by the Air Force Museum Foundation, Inc. Winter 2002-2003. Weigand, Cindy, and Julia Lauria-Blum, “Flights Commemorate Fallen Comrades,”

Friends Journal, Published Quarterly by the Air Force Museum Foundation, Inc. Spring 2005.

Weigand, Cindy, Texas Women in World War II, Republic of Texas Press, an Imprint

of Rowman & Littlefield Publishing Group, November 2003.

Finalist, Violet Crown Writing Contest, Nonfiction, sponsored by the Writers’ League of Texas, 2004, Texas Women in World War II. Weigand, Cindy, “Mad Scientist at Work,” Georgetown View Magazine, May 2010.

Weigand, Cindy, “The Amazing Mrs. Z,” Georgetown View Magazine, June 2010. Weigand, Cindy, “Kimberly Griffin, Paideia Scholar,” Georgetown View Magazine, August 2010.

Inside this Issue

2

Minutes Book signing pictures

News

3

President’s Perspective

Importance

4

Christmas Party pixs

5

Christmas Party pixs

6

Christmas Party pixs

7

Christmas Party pixs

8

My Mother’s Thimbles Book Discussion

Who “said”

9

Dating After 50 Fall Tapestry

Jo Cate

Greetings

10

Ask the Book Doctor SIGs

Who “said” answer

11

Board Members Member Websites

Recycle

Promote Your Book Books by Members

Promote Yourself HCBS

12 Demystifying

Writers’ Demons

Meeting Information

The members attending the Christmas Party contributed $101.00 to the Georgetown Public Library Bookmobile project.

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Sylvia Dickey Smith

Dave Ciambrone

Helen Nardecchia

Sidney Frost

No Minutes for December 2011 meeting/party

Pictures from the December 10 Book Signings @ HCBS Courtesy of Helen Nardecchia

New member:

S. Martin (Marty Shelton, Capt.USNR (ret.) Samuelson

119 Lantana Drive someone please help with

Georgetown Tx 78633 contact information !! ! !

512-864-7700

[email protected]

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The President’s Perspective by D.J.Heinrich

First of all, let me wish you and those dear to you a very

Happy and Prosperous New Year! May all your plans and

resolutions for 2012 and beyond be fulfilled! I know that I can speak for the entire Board in thanking each of you for

your many contributions this past year in ensuring the suc-

cess of the San Gabriel Writers’ League, stimulating com-munity interest in the written word, and furthering the

reading and writing skills of our youth.

Next, please join me in extending our heartfelt thanks to

our outgoing President Sam Holland and the Officers and Members who served so very effectively and faithfully this

past year!

I also hope you’ll join me in welcoming our new slate of very

capable and talented Officers. I have listed them here,

along with contact information, for your convenience:

MEMBERSHIP / NEWSLETTER: Carol Menchu, [email protected]

PRESIDENT: DJ Heinrich, [email protected]

PROGRAM COORDINATOR: Sylvia Dickey Smith, [email protected]

PUBLICITY / MEMBER at LARGE: Sam Holland, [email protected]

RESIDENT AGENT: Roger Busfield, Jr., [email protected]

SECRETARY/HISTORIAN: Janet Kilgore, janet-

[email protected]

TREASURER: Kayla Marnach, [email protected]

VICE PRESIDENT: David Ciambrone, [email protected]

WEBMISTRESS: Jaime Roton, [email protected]

WRITER'S LIAISON: Joan Upton Hall, [email protected]

As your newly elected leader, I humbly accept the chal-lenge and the confidence you have placed in me to move

our League forward in 2012. In this regard, I must ask for your assistance as well. Obviously, the San Gabriel Writers’

League can only be successful as a unit. Therefore, I am

requesting that each of you take an active part in: 1) at-tending as many meetings as possible; 2) assisting in re-

cruiting and welcoming new members and guests; 3) sub-mitting your suggestions and ideas; 4) serving as a partici-

pant in our activities and outreach programs; and 5) be-

coming a part of solutions, not just a herald of problems. If we are to be successful and grow our membership, we

must all step forward and contribute. Accordingly, we will be distributing a questionnaire so that you can easily offer

your ideas and solutions. In the meantime, please give your

thoughts to any board member or officer.

This year promises to be an excellent one. We have a

number of outstanding programs already in place, a list of exciting speakers identified for our meetings, plus an excep-

tional Workshop scheduled in September. I know each of you will help us make 2012 one of SGWL’s best ever!

The Importance of the Newsletter — especially to those of you just starting . . . .

The original and continued purpose of The Gabriel Writer was / is to ‘highlight’ members’ writ-

ings, giving them an opportunity to say that they have been

published while retaining all their ‘rights’ so everything can

be used again in a larger, hopefully, venue.

Yes, perhaps the audience seems narrow and, yes, it’s just

a “newsletter”, but keep in mind many of the members send their copy off for others to see, and guess what,?

They get to read your words!

Yes, sometimes I put in writing tips and articles from other

sources. This is, mainly, because I don’t have contributions from members. Plus, we all need a little education now and

then — we really don’t know it all.

As for you real / wannaBe poets out there, here’s a

chance to be published that may not arise for a long time.

So, people . . . When I Rant and Rave and stalk the center

isle cajoling — step up to the keyboard and pound out those

words !!!! Might be a good way to break your writer’s block or salve your frustration, or just get something funny out

for everyone to share.

Take advantage of a good thing — don’t put it off — don’t be

shy — don’t have false modesty — you’re a wanna be — a writer — a poet (closet or no . . .) so . . . .

SEND ME

YOUR WORDS !!!

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Pictures from the Christmas Party from Myrna Cardwell-Smith

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"New Year’s Day is every man’s birthday.”

My Mother’s Thimbles By Helen Nardecchia

The other day, I decided to mend a pair of blue jeans. They really are ready to trash, but they are favorites and

hard to part with. As I sorted through my sewing box, my eye caught sight of two objects tucked into the corner of the

top layer of the box.

“How can you sew without a thimble,” she said firmly.

The only answer I could think of, without sounding sarcastic,

was “I don’t know how you can sew with one.” Before answering her I toned it down with a smile, but I

said just that. I know she didn’t appreciate the answer, but said nothing. If she caught me mending, she’d frown and

walk away. In her eyes, it was too dreadful to watch.

The two objects tucked into the corner of my sewing

box were my mother’s thimbles. I never used them even

though I sewed constantly when my girls were in high school attending one dance after another. Funny, how I saw so

clearly this day, her fingers wearing one or the other. She’d sit quietly in her favorite rocker, and I’d watch her mend

everything from the boys’ pants and shirts to my dad’s

socks wearing her thimble. She even made sure she owned

two of them in case she misplaced one.

After announcing one day that she purchased a sew-

ing machine, I wondered if she’d continue to wear her thim-

bles. I wasn’t surprised at all when I saw she did. She’d put one on to sew a button, while her foot sat ready to thump

the machine if she needed it. Just like the blue jeans, these are memories so very hard to part with.

I’ll keep those two thimbles hugging together in my sew-ing box forever, and continue to wipe away a tear when they

catch my eye the next time.

Book Discussion Questions from Dave Ciambrone

Sometimes book clubs would like discussion ques-

tions for use when reading and discussing a book. It can

help and author to facilitate giving them a questionnaire for their use and to formulate questions for the author should

s/he be invited to address the group. Below is just such a

set of book discussion questions. It is a good place for a group to start.

They can modify it as needed for their applications. The source of this list is

unknown.

Book Discussion Questions

1. Overall—how did you experience

the book while reading it? Were you immediately drawn into the story — or

did it take a while? Did the book in-trigue, amuse, disturb, alienate, or

irritate, you?

2. Do you find the characters con-

vincing? Are they believable? Compelling? Are they fully

developed as complex, emotional human beings?

3. Which characters do you admire or dislike? What are their primary characteristics?

4. What motivates a given character’s actions? Do you think those actions are justified or ethical?

5. Do any characters grow or change during the course of the novel? If so, in what way?

6. Who in this book would you most like to meet? What would you ask—or say?

7. If you could insert yourself as character in the book, what role would you play?

8. Is the plot well developed? Is it believable? Do you feel

manipulated along the way, or do events unfold naturally?

9. Is the story plot or character driven? In other words, does the plot unfold quickly or focus more on characters' inner lives?

10. Consider the ending. Did you ex-pect it or were you surprised? Was it

forced? Was it neatly wrapped up—

too neatly? Or was it unresolved, end-ing on an ambiguous note?

11. If you could rewrite the ending, would you? In other words, was the

ending satisfying?

12. Can you pick out a passage that strikes you as particularly profound or

interesting—or perhaps something

that sums up the central dilemma of the book?

13. Does the book remind you of someone—a friend, family member, co-worker, boss—or something—an event, prob-

lem—in your own life?

14. If you were to talk to the author, what would you want

to know? (Many authors enjoy talking with book clubs. Con-tact the publisher to see if you can set up a phone chat or

have the author meet with your group.)

15. Have you read the author’s other books? Can you discern a similarity—in theme, writing style, and structure—between them? Or are they completely different?

16. Have you written in other genres or types of publica-tions?

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Dating After 50 by C. Wayne Dawson

Jo Cate by Pal Morse McNeely

My wife passed away after twenty years plus

Then life became a solitary haul When the grief lessened, I concluded I just

Had to find a new partner for the rest of the ball

So I listened to my sister, who found her man

By going online until the links led To a dating service called Match dot com

“It’s the place to hook up” she said

So many profiles had something for me

Women’s pictures sparkled like a jewel

Their write ups demanded complete honesty And said they saw the cup as half full

One by one the meetings took place Usually at a restaurant over a meal

Where finally reality had to be faced And the public façade began to peel

There ought to be a truth in advertising act Requiring pictures to be less than ten years old

And online information should contain a few facts

My, the fables those ladies had told!

Falling leaves

A crispness in the air

Signs that Fall is here

Are everywhere

But the surest sign

That Fall has begun

Is the spectacular setting

Of the Autumn Sun

Followed by the rising

Of the Harvest Moon

Enjoy the view

Winter will be here soon

The Autumn Sun

Descends in a fiery blaze

The golden Harvest Moon rises

Without a hint of haze

Both are a beautiful testimony

Of our Creator’s Majesty

The artist of this beautiful tapestry

Setting and rising in perfect harmony

Fall Tapestry by Samantha Z. Shields

I found a friend –

One with a smile as warm

As gentle

As a summer breeze

Whose eyes were mirrors of delight

And hospitality

Speaking their welcome –

“Come in –

Be at Home

With me.”

Her handclasp tied a ribbon

Of unspoken communication

Upon my heart –

Gave love –

Awoke love

In return.

I found her on the outer edge of summer

And was warmed

Thru a cold andhostile winter

By her embracing heart, led by her kindness

To the beauty of Spring

And now

On the rim of a new Summer

She is gone –

But her Kismet promise

Lingers . . . And gives me Hope.

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The Williamson County Coroners is a mystery/

suspense group and participants must have novels in progress. The meetings are held at the 10:30 a.m. at the Red Poppy Café

in the George-town Library. And there is room for one more !!

Last Writes Critique Group—Full Meets (usually) at 7 PM, 2nd & 4th Wed. each month, at Oaks at Wildwood Clubhouse. Novels in progress, varied genres. Mem-bership currently full. Contact: [email protected]

Novel Crafters is Full right now, welcomes a Waiting

List Meets every other Thursday on the second floor of the George-town Library in a private room. Contact is Mary Stafford at [email protected]

Quixotic Quills critique group represents varied interests.

Our group writes historical novels, short stories and memoirs. Meetings are usually on the second and fourth Thursday of each month unless we reschedule because of holidays. We meet at 7:00 p.m. at the Monument Café. Contact is Sharon Lyle, 512-

639-1162, [email protected]. Currently, we are closed to new members.

Bard Masters Critique Group The focus of the cri-

tique group is historical fiction and fantasy. Meeting Tues-

days, 6:00 PM at the Georgetown Library. Currently open to a new member with a serious work in progress. Con-

tact: Ross Carnes [email protected]

Tale Spinners, return with us to the days of yesteryear

where we put some novel twists on old stories. Historical fiction’s the name, publication’s the fame. Join us now with

your work in progress. We have an opening for one new

member. We meet on alternate Mondays at 2:30 in the Georgetown Library. Contact Randall Best at

[email protected]

If you are interested in joining a critique group, contact Joan Upton Hall ([email protected])

or Sylvia Dickey Smith ([email protected])

Special Interest Groups

The article that keeps on going

Dear Doc,

What are your thoughts on reselling arti-

cles? Could I resell an article published in The Sun to, perhaps, a regional publication

like Austin Family, or to other community

newspapers? Could it be resold without changing a word, or would I need to totally

rewrite the piece?

Energizer-Writer Keeps Going—and Going

Dear Energizer,

Most newspapers purchase one time rights (inquire to be sure), which means you are at liberty to sell reprints. It's up

to the next publication whether or not they take reprints. If

they do, you can use it verbatim, saying "first published in ____." More often than not, they seem to feel this lends

weight to your article since more than one publisher liked it. I've done this several times.

For example, a book I have coming up uses an article from a magazine that did require me to get their permission to

reprint. They specified that I state, "This article was first

published in (name of magazine & date of publication), and is reprinted with the publisher’s permission."

However, chances are you'll need to change the title and alter the slant to be

just right for a different publication. If it's

very different, you don't need to get per-mission, though it’s a good idea to inform

both publishers. This makes both of them happy and lends credibility to you as a pro-

fessional. Articles that are spin-offs from a

book you wrote are great promo for the book. Even a big magazine like Texas Highways was happy

to cite my book, Grand Old Texas Theaters... and its pub-lisher, which resulted in more book sales.

Best of luck—second-sale pieces can be the sweetest kind! ---------

Have a question to share in this column? Email me at: jmu-

[email protected] with “Ask the Book Doctor” as your subject line. If you want to remain anonymous, I’ll address you by

whatever pseudonym you sign.

Joan Hall thanks GW readers for their interest in “Ask the

Book Doctor.” She says, “Because some of you have asked where you can look up previous issues, I have posted a few

of them at “books, etc.” on website:

www.JoanUptonHall.com. Scroll past the book covers and click “Ask Doc” Q&A’s .

Ask the Book Doctor: by Joan Upton Hall

Who “said” Answer … Charles Lamb

Charles Lamb (London, 10 February 1775 – Edmonton, 27 December 1834) was an English essayist, best known

for his Essays of Elia and for the children's book Tales from Shakespeare, which he produced with his sister, Mary

Lamb (1764–1847). Lamb has been referred to by E.V.

Lucas, his principal biographer, as the most lovable figure in English literature.

Lamb was honoured by The Latymer School, a grammar school in Edmonton, a suburb of London where he lived for

a time; it has six houses, one of which, "Lamb", is named after Charles.

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Bring your used printer inkjet or laser cartridges to the meeting for recycling.

SGWL Board President Durwood Heinrich

512-966-9954 [email protected]

Vice President Dave Ciambrone 512-864-9373

[email protected]

Corresponding Secretary and Historian Janet Kilgore, 512-3317204 [email protected]

Treasurer Kayla Marnach 512-608-2289 kjwmtellsw@austin rr.com

Program Coordinator Sylvia Dickey Smith 512-240-5505 [email protected]

Membership dues $25.00 Carol Menchu

181 Young Ranch Rd Georgetown TX 78628

Writers’ Liaison Joan Hall 512-869-1833 [email protected]

Member at Large Dave Ciambrone 512-864-9373

Resident Agent Roger Busfield, Jr 512-930-1396 [email protected]

Newsletter Carol Menchu, editor 181 Young Ranch Rd Georgetown TX 78628 254-493-6224 [email protected]

Publicity / Member @ Large Sam Holland 512-868-5322 [email protected]

Preston Stone, Owner of

Hill Country Bookstore, is giving

all members of the San Gabriel Writers’

League a 10% discount on all purchases!

To get your discount, take your merchan-

dise to the register and tell them you’re a member of the SGWL. That’s it! Go to the

Hill Country Bookstore today and flex your discount!

Member websites

Anna M. Bell Website: http://

www.annamaebell.com

Author Blog: http://annbell.wordpress.com/

Educational Technology Blog: http://annamaebell.wordpress.com/

Ross Carnes

http://webstarts.com/

RHCarnesStoryTeller

David Ciambrone

www.davidciambrone.com

Mary Fenoglio www.eggsinmypocket.com

Sidney W. Frost http://sidneywfrost.com/ http://

christianbookmobile.blogspot.com/

Joan Hall:

www.JoanUptonHall.com

Durwood J (DJ) Heinrich: www.RedBaronConcepts.com

Sam Holland:

www.samholland.com

D Alan Johnson www.dalanjohnson.com

Melissa Leedom: www.forgive490.com

Linda Lipscomb: www.lblipscomb.com

Jason Minor: www.jason-minor.com

Helen Nardecchia www.helennardecchia.com

Joy Nord: www.joynord.com

Jamie Roton aka Lillian Grey blog http://lilliangrey.wordpress.com/

Sylvia Dickey Smith: www.sylviadickeysmith.com

SGWL website: www.sgwl.net

Books by Members

If you have a published book not on our website, remember

one of your member benefits is to have it promoted there. Take a look at: www.sgwl.net and go to Books by Members

for examples. If you want to list your book, send the follow-

ing information to [email protected]

Here's what we need:

• Photo image of your cover, preferably jpg, but if you don't have that, we'll try to help you.

• Title of your book, copyright, date, publisher

• ISBN #:

Retail price

Genre

• Where can people buy it? Your website if you have one?

• Any awards this book has won?

• (up to 100 words) Description or synopsis OR blurbs

from other writers, publishers, reviewers, etc., and remem-

ber to credit these quotes.

Promote your book

with an AD in The Gabriel Writer $5.00 for 1 issue, $10.00 for 2 issues payable to SGWL.

Promote yourself

with an ARTICLE/STORY/POEM in The Gabriel Writer

IMPORTANT: to figure out how your submission will fit use Eurostile font—size 10 for body of article

Columns are 3 and 1/4 inches wide.

If you have illustration, send it and I will try to use it

Send to SGWL Submission

181 Young Ranch Rd Georgetown Tx 78633

Or [email protected]

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Demystifying Writers’ Demons©

USAGE - A lot/ allot

• a lot – informal for “a large amount” or “a great deal,” ―either of which would be better word choices for more formal usage) as in:

“Thanks a lot for all your help.” “I like peach cobbler a lot.”

“A lot of people were at the concert.”

• allot – to distribute or set aside for a share, as in: “Mrs. Pendergast allots a certain portion of each paycheck to charity.”

“The lieutenant’s wife receives an allotment check as a dependent.”

“Most of us allot equal portions of our estates to each of our offspring. A king, on the other hand, could not allot equal acreage to all his children without weakening the kingdom. Therefore the first born was allotted the

whole thing.”

Memory Tip: It’s either one word with two “l’s” – or two words with one “l.”

Demystifying Writers’ Demons One at a Time by Joan Upton Hall

Do demons bedevil your writing? Similar, confusing words? Grammar, punctuation, or capitalization rules? "The

Demystifier" will clear up the mystery (primary reference unless otherwise noted: Garner, Bryan A. Dictionary of Modern American Usage. N.Y.: Oxford University Press). Address questions and comments to freelance editor,

Joan Upton Hall, PO Box 179, Hutto, TX 78634, or email: [email protected]. More problems like the one above

are demystified in the booklet, 50 Writers’ Tips. Find a few of them at "books, etc." on website:

www.JoanUptonHall.com.

181 Young Ranch Road Georgetown TX 78628