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Agenda 9/12/12. Update Table of Contents Exercise: Emotions and Reactions Notes: Inner Thoughts Work on Rough Draft. Announcements. Last day to serve detentions before they turn into 30 mins (lunch, after school) Vignette due next Tues. Table of Contents. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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Agenda 9/12/12Update Table of ContentsExercise: Emotions and ReactionsNotes: Inner ThoughtsWork on Rough DraftAnnouncementsLast day to serve detentions before they turn into 30 mins (lunch, after school)Vignette due next TuesTable of ContentsTitleDatePage (s)PointsDialogue Exercise 9/101210Note: Outlines9/1013Vignette: Outline9/11/121410Vignette: Rough DraftDue Friday 9/14/129/12/121510Exercise: Emotions & Reactions9/12/121610Notes: Inner Thoughts9/12/1217Exercise: Emotions and Sensory DetailsChoose 3 of the 5 words listed below. Write down the words, then write down things that happen to you physically when you experience this emotion. AngryHungryNervousFearfulImpatientBored**Example: Excited: heart races, sweat, headaches, knee taps, hard to be quiet

Notes: Inner Thoughts9/12/12Inner thoughts are NOT:DialogueNo quotation marks usedNot lines that people said

SummaryEvents that occurred

What do they add my vignette?Lets reader inside your headCreates a fuller picture of experience you hadHelps you practice and understand sensory details

How do I do that?Sensory DetailsImageryFigurative Language: Similes, MetaphorsReflect on whats happening and how you are processing the moment inside your headExamples: Sensory Details + Figurative LanguageInstead of: I was mad because she said that.My blood began to boil, and I could feel my heart pounding with rage.

Instead of: I was hungry.My stomachs began to rumble like a volcano; I could already feel the acids eating away at my stomach lining.

Instead of: It made me happy to hear someone say that.I blushed and felt the warmth of the redness displayed on my face.Examples: ReflectingI couldnt believe he left me. Did that mean he never cared? Did it mean he cared too much? At this point, I had to do everything I could to focus on driving.The first punch stunned me. I couldnt believe some one elses fist was making contact with my delicate eye. Immediately, I was blinded with pain, but had no time to think about stopping.To do list: VignettesPrewriteOutlineDraft 1: Dialogue + Inner ThoughtsIf you have gmail, start typing in Google DocsPeer Edit