Getting feedback from my treatment.

Person 1 aged -23Person 2 aged -19Person 3 aged -25Person 4 aged -15Person 5 aged -17

Do you think my treatment will work with the song?

Person 1- I do because you have got ideas in there that amplify the song lyrics.

Person 2- I do I think the changing of style is good to show different emotions.

Person 3- I really like the idea of the contemporary dance i hope you can get some one to do it would be amazing.

Person 4- there are some bits I think yes but some bits are like if you pull it off it will look good but if you don't then it could be trouble.

Person 5- yes and I like your idea of having some dance in there.

Is there anything in my treatment that you think may not work? (if yes

state why?)Person 1- I'm not to sure on the walking down the street

meeting people I think it should just be the artist on her own.

Person 2- no I think it will look good.Person 3- no I think that your ideas are good.Person 4- the bit I'm not sure on is the walking down the

street meeting people I think it would look better just concentrating on your artist.

Person 5- the dance if you pull it of it will be amazing but if not it could all go wrong.

What is your take of me using style as an amplification of the song meaning

of ‘Who you are’?Person 1- I think that using the style is good because it will

show different sides of people and ‘who you are’ ;).Person 2- I like the idea of using style to show ‘who you are’ as

we are not all the same people styles are different.Person 3- Its a good idea because your style is something that

shows who a person is. Person 4- It is a good way to put across the meaning because

your style can tell people a lot of things about you.Person 5- Its good because it shows who a person is.

Do you like the idea of the bit before the music starts or not?

Explain your answerPerson 1- yes and no, I like it because its being creative but are

you making more work for yourself.Person 2- yes because your being spontaneous, I like.Person 3 – No because I think you should concentrate on the

actual video to the song more.Person 4- yes I do because its different and its a good flow into

the song makes people wonder.Person 5- I think you should concentrate on making your video

to the actual music.

Is there anything you would add to make my treatment any

better?Person 1- No.Person 2- No I think your ideas are good.Person 3- I would maybe mention some camera angles and

transitions you would possibly use.Person 4- you mention styling it on Jessie J maybe mention

some of her style so we can picture it better and for people that don't know her.

Person 5- where would you have your contemporary dance take place?