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User name Val Swisher

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To install the LANShield Switch in a rack, follow thes steps:

managment 1 managementConnect the Ethernet managment port using Category 5 or better cable with RJ-45connectors to connect the RJ-45 port (see Figure 11).

ConSentry 1 CoventryIf after reviewing the software documentation your trouble is not resolved, consult theConSentry Networks Technical Assistance Center.

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The LANShield Switch is designed to fit into a industry-standard, 19-inch equipment rack.

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Place the switch on a the tab le or shelf close to an ACpower source.

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For instructions on connecting the power cords, seeConnecting AC Power to the LANShield Switch on page9.

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The rack should meet the requirements listed in Table 3.

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Locate the feet position markers on the bottom of theswitch, and attach the 4 rubber feet from the mountingkit.

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This section describes how to connect power to the AC power input connection on the rear panel of the LANShield Switchusing the provided AC power cord.

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Please note that the LANShield switch does not have on/off switches for power.

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To ensure reliab le communication over fiber-optic cables, make sure that the wavelength of each port on the LANShieldSwitch matches the wavelength specifications on the other end of the cable that you wish to connect.

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Fiber SFP modules inserted into the upper port should be oriented so that the send (Tx) and receive (Rx) marks are facingup, and modules inserted into the lower port should be oriented so that the Tx and Rx marks are facing down.

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Align the module with the SFP module slot, and push itfirmly into place until it clicks into place and iscompletely seated (see Figure 9).

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Check that the SFP module is completely seated by gently pulling on it to see if it comes out of the slot.

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The default settings may be changed either in the boot monitor or during system operation.

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Table 4 provides suggestions for troub leshooting basic hardware issues that might arise when you install the LANShieldSwitch.

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AdministrationGuide

To assign IP addresses and perform other initial configuration tasks, refer to the LANShield OSAdministration Guide.

bare metalsurface

Put on the ESD-preventive wrist strap, and attach the leash to a grounded bare metal surface on theswitch or equipment rack.

boot monitor The default settings may be changed either in the boot monitor or during system operation.

cable connector For optical ports, clean the cable connectors, and reconnect the cable.

configurationtask

To assign IP addresses and perform other initial configuration tasks, refer to the LANShield OSAdministration Guide.

connectivity The switch does not have connectivity when the copper cable is connected.

connector Connect the serial console port using an RS-232 cable with a DB-9 connector, as shown in Figure 13.

connectorpinout

If the cable type is correct, check the connector pinouts to verify that the cable is wired correctly.

connector

To avoid damaging the cables, connectors, and optical interfaces, always disconnect cables from SFPmodules before inserting or removing the modules.Category 5 or better copper cable with RJ-45 connectors for ports 1 through 24 (Figure 10)For Gigabit Ethernet connections, Category 5e copper cable is recommended with RJ-45 connectorsSingle-mode or multi-mode fiber cable with LC connectors for fiber SFPs in ports 23 or 24 Connect the Ethernet managment port using Category 5 or better cable with RJ-45 connectors toconnect the RJ-45 port (see Figure 11).Clean the connectors, and reconnect the cable.

copper cableCategory 5 or better copper cable with RJ-45 connectors for ports 1 through 24 (Figure 10)For Gigabit Ethernet connections, Category 5e copper cable is recommended with RJ-45 connectorsThe switch does not have connectivity when the copper cable is connected.

crossover Make sure that you are using the correct choice of crossover or straight-through cable.

enclosure The LANShield Switch enclosure is grounded through the AC plug or rack-mount brackets.

equipment rack

The LANShield Switch is designed to fit into a industry-standard, 19-inch equipment rack.Using screws appropriate to the equipment rack, attach the brackets to the rack, as shown in Figure 7.Put on the ESD-preventive wrist strap, and attach the leash to a grounded bare metal surface on theswitch or equipment rack.

ESD-preventivewrist strap

Put on the ESD-preventive wrist strap, and attach the leash to a grounded bare metal surface on theswitch or equipment rack.

Ethernetconnection

For Gigabit Ethernet connections, Category 5e copper cable is recommended with RJ-45 connectors

EthernetManagementPort

Connecting the RJ-45 Ethernet Management Port

Ethernetmanagmentport

Connect the Ethernet managment port using Category 5 or better cable with RJ-45 connectors toconnect the RJ-45 port (see Figure 11).

fiber-optic cableTo ensure reliable communication over fiber-optic cables, make sure that the wavelength of each porton the LANShield Switch matches the wavelength specifications on the other end of the cable that youwish to connect.

flow controlNo parity or flow control (9600 8-N-1 none).No parity or flow control (9600 8-N-1 none).

Form-FactorPluggable

Installing Small Form-Factor Pluggable (SFP) Modules

front-panel port Connect devices to the front-panel ports using cables appropriate for the ports:

installed switch 1 RU—1.7 inches (4.4 cm) for each installed switch

leashPut on the ESD-preventive wrist strap, and attach the leash to a grounded bare metal surface on theswitch or equipment rack.

level work Lift the switch carefully from the packing material, and set it on a level work surface.


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managementconsole

The switch management console displays unreadable characters.

Memory Stick Connecting a USB Memory Stick

module slotAlign the module with the SFP module slot, and push it firmly into place until it clicks into place and iscompletely seated (see Figure 9).

mountingaccessory kit

Using the screws from the mounting accessory kit, attach the rack-mounting brackets, as shown inFigure 6.

mounting hole Slide the switch into the rack, and align the mounting holes.

mounting kitLocate the feet position markers on the bottom of the switch, and attach the 4 rubber feet from themounting kit.

multi-mode fibercable

Single-mode or multi-mode fiber cable with LC connectors for fiber SFPs in ports 23 or 24

optical cable No link exists when the optical cable is connected.

optical interfaceTo avoid damaging the cables, connectors, and optical interfaces, always disconnect cables from SFPmodules before inserting or removing the modules.

optical port For optical ports, clean the cable connectors, and reconnect the cable.

parityNo parity or flow control (9600 8-N-1 none).No parity or flow control (9600 8-N-1 none).

plug The LANShield Switch enclosure is grounded through the AC plug or rack-mount brackets.

position markerLocate the feet position markers on the bottom of the switch, and attach the 4 rubber feet from themounting kit.

powerconnector

Connect the AC power cord to the AC power connector on the switch rear panel, as shown in Figure 8.

Power Cord Connecting the AC Power Cord to the Switch

power cord

This section describes how to connect power to the AC power input connection on the rear panel of theLANShield Switch using the provided AC power cord.As soon as you connect a power cord, the system will power on.Connect the AC power cord to the AC power connector on the switch rear panel, as shown in Figure 8.

power sourcePlace the switch on a the table or shelf close to an AC power source.To connect the LANShield Switch to an AC power source, follow these steps:

rack

The rack should meet the requirements listed in Table 3.To install the LANShield Switch in a rack, follow thes steps:Slide the switch into the rack, and align the mounting holes.Using screws appropriate to the equipment rack, attach the brackets to the rack, as shown in Figure 7.

RackRequirement

Rack Requirements Rack Requirements

rack space Vertical rack space needed

Rack-MountingBracket

Attaching the Rack-Mounting Brackets at the Front

rack-mountingbracket

Using the screws from the mounting accessory kit, attach the rack-mounting brackets, as shown inFigure 6.

rear panelThis section describes how to connect power to the AC power input connection on the rear panel of theLANShield Switch using the provided AC power cord.

secured rack Bolted to the floor, ceiling, wall or other secured racks

Serial ConsolePort

Connecting the Serial Console Port

serial consoleport

Connect the serial console port using an RS-232 cable with a DB-9 connector, as shown in Figure 13.

single-mode Single-mode or multi-mode fiber cable with LC connectors for fiber SFPs in ports 23 or 24

slot Check that the SFP module is completely seated by gently pulling on it to see if it comes out of the slot.

softwaredocumentation

The software documentation provides detailed troubleshooting instructions for operating andconfiguration issues.If after reviewing the software documentation your trouble is not resolved, consult the ConSentryNetworks Technical Assistance Center.


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storage device Use the USB port to connect a USB storage device for collecting log data (see Figure 12) straight-throughcable

Make sure that you are using the correct choice of crossover or straight-through cable.

switch rearpanel

Connect the AC power cord to the AC power connector on the switch rear panel, as shown in Figure 8.

systemoperation

The default settings may be changed either in the boot monitor or during system operation.

TechnicalAssistanceCenter

If after reviewing the software documentation your trouble is not resolved, consult the ConSentryNetworks Technical Assistance Center.

terminalemulationsoftware

Check for an incorrect baud rate and make sure that the baud rate for the terminal emulation software isset to 9600.

TroubleshootingTroubleshooting Troubleshooting Basic Hardware issues

troubleshootingTable 4 provides suggestions for troubleshooting basic hardware issues that might arise when youinstall the LANShield Switch.

troubleshootinginstruction

The software documentation provides detailed troubleshooting instructions for operating andconfiguration issues.

unreadablecharacter

The switch management console displays unreadable characters.

wavelengthTo ensure reliable communication over fiber-optic cables, make sure that the wavelength of each port onthe LANShield Switch matches the wavelength specifications on the other end of the cable that you wishto connect.

wavelengthspecification

To ensure reliable communication over fiber-optic cables, make sure that the wavelength of each port onthe LANShield Switch matches the wavelength specifications on the other end of the cable that you wishto connect.


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