TED Talks Presentation

TED Talk Evaluation Presentation

By: Robert Carroll

Allan Savory: “How to green the desert and reverse climate change”

ThesisThis perfect storm we are facing is the result of our rising population, rising toward ten billion people, land that is turning to desert and of course climate change.

Opening StatementHis impact statement was meant to grab the attention of the audience. He said "The most massive tsunami, perfect storm is bearing down on us."

Speech DeliveryHe was very dramatic with his presentation. He opens your eyes to a rising global problem in a dramatic doomsday approach.

Ted CommandmentMr. Savory used the third commandment in his speech.

"Make the complex plain".

Ted CommandmentMr. Savory used the third commandment in his speech.

"Make the complex plain".

He would tell you what was wrong then break it down into more simple terms and then show you in a slide.

DynamismI would rate Mr. Savory's speech a 4.5

DynamismI would rate Mr. Savory's speech a 4.5

Mr. Savory's speech was a little dry but overall a well planned presentation.

DynamismI would rate Mr. Savory's speech a 4.5

Mr. Savory's speech was a little dry but overall a well planned presentation.

He could have more humor and audience interaction.

Comparisons Garr Reynolds and Nancy Duarte had recommended the use of story telling and imagery. Mr. Savory drawed upon this to enhance his presentation and purpose.

Comparisons Allan Savory was very serious and kept his speech to the point, which made it a little dry but it kept you hooked to the end.

ComparisonsKen Robinson was light hearted and much more humorous and used that to keep you listening.

Tips for my classmatesUse humor when you can.

Tips for my classmatesTell them a story and do it with passion.

CitationsAllan Savory

http://tinyurl.com/caj9n3rhttp://tinyurl.com/dxkfkv4

Sir Ken Robinsonhttp://tinyurl.com/blvhkfk

Allan Savory Speechhttp://tinyurl.com/cttagpe