Describing feelings 2011

Gloria’s mouth dropped open. Her eyes were as big as apples. Her eyebrows raised up like an elevator. She gasped and her body got as stiff as a rock. by Carly

Jack’s face was as red as a tomato. He looked like he was about to explode. His face was wrinkled up and he was making a growling sound.

by Braedon

Tasha had sweat trickling down her neck. She felt like she was in the sizzling desert. Her face and body turned completely the color of flame. She was numb everywhere and could barely move.

By Hanna

Max clutched his arms around his body. He shook like a furless cat frozen in a box of ice. His teeth chattered. He twitched and bit his lip, grasping his flimsy sweater.

by Taylor

Sammy had tears coming down his face. His glasses were fogged up and he was rubbing his eyes. His smile was turned upside down and he was sobbing. His shoulders were slumped over.

by Joseph

Lisa jumped up in the air. She clapped her hands and whooped. Her smile was never-ending. She twirled in circles and waved her hands about.

By Maura

I was drooped down with my head sagging toward the ground. I began chugging water. My face was beet red with sweat dripping down my face.

by Bryan

Mr. Salsich’s eyes drooped and his head dropped like a dead fly. It looked like he fainted. He moaned, yawned, and then he began snoring!

by Brian

I was stomping my feet. I felt like my head was on fire. My hands were clenched and a low growl came from my mouth.

by Chase

I was panting like crazy and trying to catch my breath. My face was as red as a ripe strawberry. Sweat trickled down my neck.

by Chris

I was clenching my hand so hard that my hand almost exploded. I stomped my feet so rapidly that I almost fell through the floor. My face was as red as the inside of a watermelon.

by Creighton

George shivered and his teeth chattered. His face felt like it was freezing into ice. His lips turned blue. All I could hear was the chattering of his teeth.

by Dylan

My eyes got watery and then my nose started sniffling. My mouth began to quiver and then tears began to roll down my cheeks. I ran up to my room.

By Jackie

I was sweating and breathing heavily. I felt like I was going to collapse. My hair was sticking to my face. My back was bent over. I felt like I was in an oven!

by Jennifer

I was bursting out with laughter and my smile went from ear to ear! My rosy red cheeks were glowing and my face lit up like the sun. My eyes were as big as marbles. My face was like all different colored fireworks.

by Sophia

Frank’s hands were trembling uncontrollably. His eyes were as wide as saucers. He cowered backward.

by Joey

My face got as red as a tomato. My hands were in fists. Smoke came out of my ears and my hair stood straight up.by Nate

Mr. Salsich fell onto his desk with bags under his eyes. Suddenly there was a loud yawn coming from his desk. Everyone turned around to see Mr. Salsich snoring at his desk! “Honk… Shoo. Honk… Shoo.”

by Kayla

Greg’s tongue was hanging right out of his mouth. His skin was sizzling. Drips of water were rolling down his neck. He could barely walk and he panted, “Huff, huff, huff!”

by Anthony

My hands were squeezed close together. Then my face turned red and my eyebrows scrunched up. I stomped my feet and ran around like crazy. It felt like steam was coming out of my ears.

By Shea

Mr. Salsich came into class late, and his eyes slowly closed. And then, “Crash!” he fell right on the floor – zonked out! by Luke