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The text is a little hard to read, might consider changing that. I like the unconventional style, stuff is missing (slugs, pull quotes, ect..) but I don’t think it matters because it looks so freaking cool. Pictures are awesome, again I really like these. You could put page numbers and maybe a drop quote but I think it is beautiful without, completely up to you, you might want to put these features on just so it looks more conventional. Might consider different backgroun for these pictures some sort caption j to make t page more interesti

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The text is a little hard to read, might consider changing that.

I like the unconventional style, stuff is missing (slugs, pull quotes, ect..) but I don’t think it matters because it looks so freaking cool.

Pictures are awesome, again I really like these.

You could put page numbers and maybe a drop quote but I think it is beautiful without, completely up to you, you might want to put these features on just so it looks more conventional.

Might consider a different background for these pictures or some sort of caption just to make the page more interesting. Just an idea.