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The text is a little hard to read, might consider changing that.
I like the unconventional style, stuff is missing (slugs, pull quotes, ect..) but I don’t think it matters because it looks so freaking cool.
Pictures are awesome, again I really like these.
You could put page numbers and maybe a drop quote but I think it is beautiful without, completely up to you, you might want to put these features on just so it looks more conventional.
Might consider a different background for these pictures or some sort of caption just to make the page more interesting. Just an idea.