What is a thesis?

A thesis...

...declares what you believe and what you intend to prove.

A thesis...

...should be contestable, proposing an arguable point with which people could reasonably disagree.

A clear thesis...

...is specific and focused. A strong thesis proves a point without discussing “everything about …”

A thesis...

...provides the reader with a map to guide him/her through your work.

A thesis...

...usually comes at the end of the introduction (opening paragraph).

It should...

...avoid vague language (like "it seems")

...avoid the first person ("I believe," "In my opinion")

It should...

...pass the So What? or Who Cares? Test

(Would your most honest friend ask why s/he should care or respond with "but everyone knows that"?)

For the Math-Minded...Simple equations for a thesis might look something like this:

Thesis = Specific topic + Attitude/Angle/Argument

Thesis = What you plan to argue + How you plan to argue it

Is this a thesis?

I would like to become a chef when I finish school.

Although both chefs and cooks can prepare fine meals, chefs differ from cooks in education, professional commitment, and artistry.

Is this a thesis?

I enjoy white water rafting.

A first water rafting experience can challenge the body and spirit and transform an adolescent into an adult.

Prompt: Early in life, people develop an admiration for heroes. In a well-developed essay, discuss a person you admire and why you chose this person.

Option A: One person worthy of admiration is Babe Ruth, who played baseball from 1914 until 1935.

Option B: One person worthy of admiration is Babe Ruth, the greatest baseball player of all time.

Discuss the social, political, and economic effects of World War II on the United States.

Option A: World War II was a costly war that had a major impact on the economy of the United States.

Option B: World War II not only affected the economy of the United States, but also altered the role of the American government and the American people forever.

Option C: World War II changed the political landscape, social structure, and economy of the United States.

Now you are ready!

In a well developed essay define freedom? Use examples from our "Search for Freedom" and Antz to support your definition.

Thesis Option: As seen in nature and the movie Antz, freedom is...