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Recently, I’ve done a roughly 2,000 words research paper to fulfill my final exam on the subject Academic English. I picked a topic about the enforcement of smoking ban in Indonesia. The objective of this essay is not to ban smoking completely, but to ban the smoking practice in certain areas which are public places. Why I choose this topic? Because, I find it disturbing to inhale the tobacco smoke emitted by the smokers in a lot of public places. I can barely enjoy my food in a foodcourt, I have to hold by breath while walking in a certain area, etc. Smoking in Indonesia is a sort of trend. Since this practice is harmful to other people, I think government should make an act to ban smoking (this time, truly ban the smoking in public places!). The argument behind the smoking ban in public is because smoke has been proven to not only damage the active smokers, but also the passive smokers (public health). Tobacco smoke is also found to be disturbing to some people (public welfare), and is a major cause of fire (public safety). Smoking also impacts the environment in form of air and water polluting, and needs to be ban to suppress the spreading of the unhealthy habit through social interaction. Smoking ban is also needed to ensure the safety of our young generation. Most of them are not mature enough to think rationally yet, thus they have to be protected by the government until they are mature enough to decide to smoke or not. If you’re not a smoking ban supporter, also feel free to give comments why the smoking ban should not be implemented. Hope this essay will help any of you in many ways. Happy reading. :) http://fionaangelina.com/2010/02/08/the-enforcement-of-smoking-ban-in-indonesia/
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Argumentative Essay
The Enforcement of Smoking Ban
in Public Places
written by: Fiona Angelina Wijaya
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Tobacco smoking has become part of most Indonesian people’s lives. A lot of Indonesian people can be
seen smoking in various public places such as bars, restaurants, streets, parks, and bus stations.
Regardless of awareness that smoking damages their health, they could not easily give up on smoking
due to several reasons including physical and mental addiction, stress, and peer pressure. This practice
raises a concern for public health, safety, and welfare since scientific studies have proven that
nonsmokers who involuntarily exposed to tobacco smoke also experience the same health problems as
the active smokers (World Health Organization, 2005). Besides public health, safety, and welfare
concerns, smoking in public also impacts the environment as well as social life. Thus, the objection of
this essay is to argue that the government of Indonesia should impose stricter rules on smoking in
public. This essay is not arguing to ban smoking completely, but only to restrict the practice in public
places both indoor and outdoor.
The term smoking which is used in this essay refers to an act of burning tobacco using smoking devices
and inhaling the produced smoke. The smokeless tobacco is not included in the term. Smoking device is
a tool which is used to smoke tobacco. There are a lot of smoking devices, such as cigar, cigarette, pipe,
hookah, and bong; but the one that is taken into consideration is the cigarette since it is the most widely
used smoking device by Indonesian people in public places. There are two most common types of
cigarettes which are consumed, clove cigarettes (or simply kreteks) and white cigarettes. Kreteks use a
mixture of dried tobacco and cloves while white cigarettes do not include cloves in its mixture. The term
active smokers refers to people who inhale the tobacco smoke directly from the smoking device and
passive smokers refers to people who are being exposed to tobacco smoke indirectly because of the
emission of tobacco smoke to the air.
Based on World Health Organization (WHO) survey, Indonesia is included in top five countries
concerning cigarette consumption in the world along with China, USA, Japan, and Russia (McKay &
Eriksen, 2002, pp. 30-31). As of 2008, the prevalence of smoking in Indonesia reaches as high as 65.3%
and 4.2% among males and females respectively (World Health Organization, 2009). The continuous
growing number of smokers in Indonesia triggers some people who concern about the negative impact of
smoking to force the government to implement a law to ban smoking in public, but the law has never
been truly imposed because of many barriers. One of many barriers is the fact that tobacco industry
contributes 98% to the country’s excise revenue (Bisara & Wibisono, 2009). The inconsistency of
Indonesian government is shown in the implementation of smoking ban in Jakarta. The smoking ban
has been imposed since 4 February 2006, but has never been conducted properly until today (Yunita,
2005). People keep smoking wherever they like although few places have obeyed the rule by making a
separate enclosed smoking room.
The issue of smoking in public has to be taken seriously as it threatens the public health. In Indonesia
itself, ±200,000 people die by cause of smoking-related diseases every year. Smoking is responsible for a
quarter of deaths in 2005 and 80% of lung and respiratory cancer cases (NACS Online, 2009). It is not
unknown to public that smoking can cause various health problems, even resulting in premature death
or disability. Cardiovascular disease, cancer, and COPD (chronic obstructive pulmonary disease) are the
major diseases caused by smoking. Smoking also increases the risk of erectile dysfunction, infertility,
miscarriage, periodontal disease, macular degeneration, cataracts, and stroke. Passive smokers have the
same risk suffering these health problems as the active ones (Brandt, 2005).
A cigarette is not only made of dried tobacco leaves, but also other additional substances to enhance the
flavor. Most of all these additional substances are unsafe to be consumed after being combusted.
According to WHO, tobacco smoke contains over 4,000 chemicals and 60 of them are known or
suspected carcinogenic substances (McKay & Eriksen, 2002, pp. 32-33). Some of carcinogens that can be
found in tobacco smoke are formaldehyde, benzene, vinyl chloride, arsenic, ammonia, and hydrogen
cyanide (Surgeon General, 2007). Exposure to these carcinogens by any means increases the likelihood
of getting cancer. In the smokers’ body, the respiratory system has the highest probability of suffering
cancer compare to other systems. This is due to the fact that when smokers inhale the tobacco smoke, it
travels through the smokers’ respiratory system; thus exposing all respiratory organs to carcinogens.
The presence of nicotine in cigarette causes physical addiction on smokers. Consequently, most people
find difficulties to quit smoking completely. Symptoms such as headache, dizziness, mood swings,
cough, dry throat, and weight gain are common on early weeks of nicotine withdrawal. Nicotine leads to
chain smoking, causing repetitive exposure to hazardous content of cigarette. Nicotine acts as both
stimulant and relaxant to human body depend on its dosages (American Society of Health-System
Pharmacists, Inc., 2009). In low doses, nicotine increases blood pressure and heart rate giving alertness
to the body, meanwhile, in higher doses, nicotine depresses the nervous system resulting in calm and
relaxing feelings.
The burning of tobacco emits a gas called carbon monoxide. Carbon monoxide is a poisonous, tasteless,
odorless, and colorless gas which is produced from incomplete combustion. After being inhaled, carbon
monoxide is absorbed into the bloodstream. It then bonds with hemoglobin in red blood cells forming a
stable complex called carboxyhemoglobin. This bond is preferred to oxyhemoglobin which is the bond
between oxygen and hemoglobin (Canadian Centre for Occupational Health & Safety, 2000).
Hemoglobin’s actual role in human circulatory system is to transport oxygen throughout bodily tissues.
The oxygen provides the necessary energy for human body to survive. The presence of
carboxyhemoglobin obstructs hemoglobin’s function to bind oxygen. Hence, high consumption of carbon
monoxide leads to oxygen deprivation and death eventually. This condition is commonly known as
carbon monoxide poisoning.
Tobacco smoke is an air pollutant and contains various dangerous chemical substances which intoxicate
surrounding air of smokers. Inhaling the smoke increases the risk of suffering various diseases that are
not only suffered by the active smokers, but also the passive smokers. Exposure of tobacco smoke to
pregnant woman impacts both mother and the unborn child, which subsequently lead to higher
incidence of miscarriage, sudden infant death, low birth weight, and a reduction in head circumference
at birth. People with certain health condition such as asthma are susceptible to tobacco smoke. Tobacco
smoke can trigger asthma attacks and worsen the condition. By the enforcement of smoking ban, it is
hoped that the air quality in public places will improve and therefore reduce the negative effect of
tobacco smoking to passive smokers especially those with certain health condition.
The role of cigarette butts as pollutants to environment is often underestimated. Many smokers discard
cigarette butts in inappropriate places. Most of them do not care about the latter’s impact on cigarette
butt littering as a result of misleading information that cigarette butts are made of easily biodegradable
materials. The truth is cigarette butts are not made of easily biodegradable materials. They are made of
cellulose acetate which takes 18 months up to 10 years to fully degrade in the environment (Cigarette
Litter --Biodegradable?). Cigarette butts are able to intoxicate the soil where they are discarded due to
their hazardous content. They are highly poisonous because of their function as filters. Furthermore,
cigarette butts are also known as water pollution. During wet season, litters including cigarette butts are
washed by rain and most of them end up in the water body. The water poisoning could bring death to
creatures living in it. According to San Diego State University researchers, cigarettes are proven to be
deadly for fish (San Diego News Network, 2009).
Smoldering cigarette was responsible for up to 761 fire cases in Jakarta during 2004-2009 (Saputra,
2009). Many smokers forget to make sure their cigarettes have stopped burning before discarding or
abandoning them. The careless behavior can lead to fire if the smoldering cigarette light nearby
flammable materials. The smoking ban is expected to reduce the incidence of fire ignited by smoldering
cigarettes.
Humans are born to be social creatures and consequently have to interact with each other to satisfy their
needs. During the interaction process, the involved parties give reciprocal influences including lifestyle.
The smoking lifestyle is happened to be distributed through these ways. Most teen smokers start
smoking for the sake of friendship. These teenagers hardly reject the smoking offer from their peers due
to the fear of isolation. After they reach adulthood and aware that smoking damages their health, they
find it hard to stop as a result of both physical and mental addiction. Smoking in public places also acts
as a bad example for children and adolescents. Children and adolescents are usually immature that they
have not been able to think rationally yet. Once they see an adult smoking, they perceive an image that
one has to smoke to be mature. It is government’s duty to protect these youngsters from negative things
such as smoking. Therefore, the smoking ban is compulsory in order to decrease the probability of
children and adolescents become smokers at such young age.
The enforcement of smoking ban in Indonesia is found to be difficult owing to the fact that tobacco
industries are major contributors to the country’s income. During 2005-2008, the tobacco industries
have grown significantly compare to previous years with growing rate of 17.53% (Wibowo, 2003). It can
be deduced that Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono’s government offers a conducive environment for tobacco
industries to grow, ensuring their sustainability. The smoking ban enforcement is feared to damage the
tobacco industries, resulting in the increasing number of unemployment and reducing the country’s
income.
The argument that the establishment of smoking ban will result in the increasing number of
unemployment is unfounded on the ground that the employment in tobacco industries is low compare to
other industries, contributing less than 1% of total employment (Barber, Adioetomo, Ahsan, &
Setyonaluri).
While the fact that tobacco industries increase Indonesia’s income cannot be denied, the large sum of
losses caused by smoking habit are being suffered as well. The losses can be both directly and indirectly.
The direct one is cost to facilitate health care for smoking-related diseases and the indirect ones are the
losses of productivity, losses of quality human resources, budget allocated for solving poverty issues such
as BLT (Bantuan Langsung Tunai), and other costs used to solve other smoking indirect impacts to the
society. Poverty issues can be considered as one of smoking indirect impacts. A research shows that
11.5% of smokers’ household expenses are used to buy cigarettes compared to 11.0% for foods, 3.2% for
education, and 2.5% for health (Barber, Adioetomo, Ahsan, & Setyonaluri). It can be concluded that
smoking is one of many causes that worsens the economic level of smokers especially those who come
from low income family, resulting in the increasing rate of poverty in Indonesia.
Those who against the smoking ban in Indonesia argue that smoking ban should not be imposed
regarding the fact that the country upholds human rights values including freedom to choose whether
one wants to smoke or not. The recognition of human rights values in Indonesia is reflected on the
Constitution of Indonesia (Indonesian language: Undang-Undang Dasar 1945 or UUD ’45). Laws
concerning human rights are comprised in chapter XA. Based on this ground, those who against the
smoking ban concluded that the government has no authority to interfere with ones’ freedom to smoke.
It is true that smoking is a matter of freedom, but other people who do not smoke also have an option to
live in a healthy environment. The freedom of smoking would never be a problem if it only affects the
smokers themselves. The practice of smoking harms both the active smokers and the passive ones,
raising an objection from the aggrieved side. Thus, a smoking ban is needed to ensure that there is no
clash between each party. The primary purpose of smoking ban in public is not to restrict the smokers’
right to smoke, but to protect the nonsmokers who negatively affected by the practice. The smokers may
smoke in their own houses and the nonsmokers would not need to worry about the involuntarily
exposure to smoke when going out of their houses.
Judging from the impacts of smoking to both the society and the environment, the government of
Indonesia should impose stricter rules concerning smoking in public places. The practice of smoking in
public threatens the public health, safety, and welfare. Scientific studies have proven explicitly that the
practice of smoking damages both the active smokers’ and passive smokers’ health by increasing the
risks of suffering cardiovascular diseases, cancer, and COPD. The smoke itself is found to be disturbing
to some people and endangers people with certain health condition such as asthma. Furthermore,
smoking also contributes to environmental pollution and is responsible for hundreds of fire cases in
Jakarta during 2004-2009.
The implementation of smoking ban in public places meets objections from both the tobacco industries
and the smokers. Tobacco industries argue that the implementation of smoking ban will result in their
downfall, increasing the unemployment numbers and reducing Indonesia’s income. The issue of
unemployment numbers seems to be unfounded since tobacco industries only contribute to less than 1%
of total employment. The losses caused by smoking are also greater compare to the income. The smokers
argue that every person has their own freedom of choice so government could not interfere with their
own choice to smoke. In the real world, a true freedom could never be gained. Every person has their
interests and often clashes one with another. Rules are needed to ensure that there is no conflict in the
society. So does smoking ban is needed to ensure that there will be no clash between smokers’ and
nonsmokers’ interests.
In conclusion, smoking ban in public places is needed to be implemented in Indonesia and has to be
imposed strictly to ensure the nonsmokers’ right to live healthy, and to protect the children and
adolescents from harmful practice such as smoking until they are mature enough to make a decision on
their own.
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