Draft 3 planning

Draft 3 planning

Pamela Younes Amy Cleary

Jodie Foster-PiliaMonae Minors Gibbs

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Fox searchlight pictures.

Establishing shot of Kensal Green.

Long shot of Jodie sitting at the station.

Mid shot of Jodie sitting on

the bench.

Side shot of Jodie sitting on the bench.

Close up of Jodie going into the flashback.

Close up of the screen.

25-28 28-29 29-31 31-33 33-36 36-38 38-40

Side shot of Jodie looking at the screen.

Over the shoulder shot of Jodie looking at the screen.

Close up of the words.

Side shot of Jodie shaking her head.

Close up of Jodie coming out of the flashback.

Long shot of Jodie on bench, her legs are shaking.

Mid shot of Jodie’s legs shaking.

Close up of Jodie’s legs shaking.

40-43 43-45 45-46 46-48 48-52 52-54 54-56 56-58 58-60

Close up shot of the timer.


Timeline

Close up of Jodie going into the flashback.

Long shot of Jodie putting on her beard.

Over the shoulder shot of Jodie looking at herself in the mirror.

Close up of Jodie’s reflection in the mirror.

Slow zoom of Jodie coming out of the flashback.

Mid shot of Jodie wiping her tears

1.00-1.02 1.02-1.04 1.04-1.06 1.06-1.09 1.09-1.11 1.11-1.12 1.12-1.14

Over head shot of Jodie.

Mid shot of Jodie

Close up shot going into the flashback .

Mid shot of Jodie dancing in the mirror.

Mid shot of Jodie’s mum.

Mid shot of Jodie

Close up of Monica’s hand on the door

Two shot of Jodie and Monica

Mid shot of Monica

Close up of Jodie Mid shot of

Monica

Long shot of Jodie sliding down the door.

Close up of Jodie shaking

her head.

Long shot of Jodie standing up.

1.14-1.15 1.15-1.17 1.17-1.19 1.19-1.20 1.20-1.26 1.26-1.27 1.27-1.28 1.28-1.29

1.29-1.31 1.31-1.33 1.33-1.35 1.35-1.40 1.40-1.47 1.47-1.49 1.49-1.51 1.51-1.53


Shot reverse shot of Jodie and mirror

Shot reverse shot of Jodie and mirror

Three way shot. Mid shot of Monae

Close up of ipad Mid shot of

AmyMid shot of Jodie

Close up of ipad

Over the shoulder shot

Mid shot of Amy and Monae

Close up of ipadMid shot of

Amy


Three way shot.

Long shot of Jodie

Close up of Jodie coming out of into flashback.


POV of

tracks and

train.

Close up of Jodie's feet

1.53-1.54 1.54-1.57 1.57-1.60 2.00-2.03 2.03-2.05 2.05-2.08 2.08-2.11 2.11-2.14

2.14-2.17 2.17-2.19 2.19-2.23 2.23-2.26 2.26-2.29 2.29-2.31 2.31-2.33 2.33-2.37

2.37-2.39 2.39-2.44 2.44-2.49

Close up of Jodie going into flashback.

POV of

tracks and

train.

Close up of Jodie

Close up of train

Close up of Jodie

Close up of train

2.49-2.52 2.52-2.54 2.54-3.00 3.00-3.04

Actors

Jodie

Before (normal)

After (in character)

Monae

Before (normal)

After (in character)

Actors

AmyBefore (normal)

After (in character

Music / sound

c

This would be our first option to use when Jodie would be on the train station

http://www.freeplaymusic.com/search/keyword_search.php



Music / sound

c

This would be our second option to use when Jodie would be on the train station

http://www.freeplaymusic.com/search/keyword_search.php?sindex=11&kw=sad



Music / Sound

c

This would be our third option to use when Jodie would be on the train station




Music / sound

c


This would be our fourth option to use when Jodie would be on the train station



Music / sound


c

This would be our first option to use when Jodie is near the train tracks, and the train is about to come



Music / sound

c


This would be our second option to use when Jodie is near the train tracks, and the train is about to come



Music / sound

c


This would be our third option to use when Jodie is near the train tracks, and the train is about to come



The script

The script

The script

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Shot list

Type of shot Description Prop/costumes

Establish To aware the audience that, that’s where everything will happen

N/A

Long shot To show how Jodie looks like and what she’s doing

c

Mid shot To show an even detailed character of Jodie and how she looks

Top, jeans, hat, earrings

Side long shot To show what Jodie would be doing from a different angle

Top, jeans, trainers, hat, earring

Close up To show that Jodie Is thinking and is about to have a flashback

Hat, earrings

Shot list


Over the head Showing an over head shot of Joie typing on the computer

N/A

Close up Showing what's on the computer screen in detail and what Jodie has typed on Google

N/A

Side long shot Showing the audience that Jodie Is searching on the computer and an see her facial expression

Grey cardigan, hat, jeans, trainers


Showing the audience what Jodie was searching on the computer

Top, earrings

Extreme close up Showing Jodie’s facial expression while she is researching on transgender

N/A

Shot listType of shot Description Prop/costumes

Extreme close up Showing what Jodie looking at/ focussed on

N/A

Close up Of Jodie's reaction when she saw what she had to do

Hat, earrings

Close up When Jodie comes back to realityand carries on thinking when she's on the train platform

Hat, earrings

Side long shot Showing her body reaction, to how she was feeling about her flashback

Top, jeans, trainers, hat, earring

Mid shot from her hips to her legs

Showing Jodie leg shaking, whichmakes It clear to the audience that she is frustrated and stressed

Jeans, trainers

Shot list


Close up A closer shot of Jodie's leg shaking Trainers, jeans

Mid shot Showing what Jodie is going to do Top, jeans, hat


Hat, earrings

Establish shot Showing that Jodie is in a new location in her flashback to show what she's doing from behind

Jacket, jeans, trainers, hat

Over the shoulder tilted

Showing what Jodie s doing, while showing half of her face and half of her back

Jacket, jeans, trainers, hat

Shot list


Over the shoulder

Showing the back of Jodie looking at the mirror and can see Jodie's reflection

Hat, earrings

Close up Can see the mirror with the reflection of Jodie's face

Hat, earrings

Extreme close up Of Jodie's fake facial hair on the desk and can see Jodie's face

Hat, earrings

Close up Of Jodie trimming her facial hair Hat, earrings

Extreme close up Of Jodie putting the scissors on the desk

N/A

Shot list


Extreme close up To show Jodie's expression fromthe flashback, When Jodie comes back to reality and carries on thinking when she's on the train platform

N/A

Close up Showing her facial expression Hat, earrings

mid shot Of Jodie crying because she's depressed

Hat, earrings, top

Close up The train timer, showing when the train was coming

N/A

Over the head shot

To have a variety of shot Hat, earrings, top, trousers, trainers

Shot list


Mid shot To see Jodie's body reaction Hat, earrings, trousers,trainers, top


Hat, earrings

Long shot Showing Jodie walking towards the stereo, for her to dance

Top, jeans, trainers, hat, earrings

Mid shot Jodie dancing looking at the mirror and can see her refection

Hat, earrings, top

Long shot Of Jodie’s mum Monika in the living room talking on the phone

Trousers, uggs, top

Shot list Type of shot Description Prop/costumes

Long shot from the back

A long shot from the back of Jodie's mum walking towards Jodie's room

Trousers, uggs, top

Long shot Long shot of Jodie dancing andyou can see her reflection on the mirror


Long shot Jodie walking towards Jodie's room

Trousers, uggs, top



Long shot A long shot from the back of Jodie's mum walking towards Jodie's room

Trousers, uggs, top




Close up Jodie's mum about to push the door of Jodie's room

N/A

Two shot Jodie behind the door trying to cover herself from her mum, while her mum is trying to come in

Jodie : Top, jeans, trainers, hat, earrings

Jodie's mum: Trousers, uggs, top

Mid shot Jodie's mum being shocked top

Mid shot of Jodie Showing her facial expression, by the way her mum is looking at her

Hat, earring, top

Shot list


Mid shot Of Jodie's mum talking to Jodieand what she feels about Jodie's action

Top

Long shot Of Jodie slides down the door, because she's upset when her mum leaves the room


Close up To show Jodie's expression fromthe flashback, When Jodie comes back to reality and carries on thinking when she's on the train platform

N/A

Side long shot Of Jodie in the train station, and can see her body reaction to the flashback she just remembered

Hat, earrings, top, trousers, trainers

Long shot Of Jodie getting up and getting towards the edge of the train tracks

Hat, earrings, top, trousers, trainers


Close up Of Jodie's feet walking towards the edge of the platform

Trousers, trainers

Establish shot A shot of the timer, to allow the audience and to build up tension to when the train will come

N/A

Mid shot A mid shot from the back , when Jodie is at the edge of the platform

Top, hat, earrings


Hat, earring

Establish shot A shot where Monae, Amy and Jodie is seen, to show the audience who is in this scene

Jodie: hoodie, trousers, trainers, ipad

Amy: top, trousers, converses, ipad

Monae, skirt, blazer, top, converses, ipad

Shot list


Two shot Amy and Monae having a conversation

Amy: top, ipad Monae : top, blazer, ipad

Mid shot Of Amy talking to monae Top, ipad

Close up A shot of Amy's ipad, showing what she wants to wear to prom

N/A

Mid shot Of monae replying back to Amy Top, blazer

Close up A shot of Moane’s ipad, showing what she wants to wear to prom

N/A

Shot list


Long shot Of Jodie sitting down and looking at her ipad

Hoodie, trousers, trainers, hat, earrings, ipad

Over head Showing what Jodie is looking at,which is suits on her iPad

Hat, trousers, hoodie, trainers, earrings, iPad

Over shoulder Moane and Amy talking to Jodie Amy: top, trousers, converses, ipad


Jodie; hat, earrings, hoodie

Mid shot Of Amy about to snatch Jodie's ipad from her hands so she is able to see what she is looking at

Top, ipad

Close up of Amy taking Jodie's ipad N/A

Shot listType of shot Description Prop/costumes

Two shot Amy’s and Monae’s facial reaction when finding out she wants to wear a suit to prom



Close up Of Jodie's reaction, to her friends response

Hat, earrings

Two shot Of Amy and Monae talking to Jodie about wearing a suit to prom



Over shoulder To see Jodie's reaction to what her friends are saying to her (opinion)

Amy: topMonae: top, blazerJodie: hoodie, hat, earrings

Establish shot Of Jodie getting up and leaving the room

Hoodie, trousers, trainers, hat, earrings


Long shot Jodie leaving g the room Hoodie, trousers, trainers,hat, earrings

Close up To show Jodie's expression from the flashback, When Jodie comes back to reality and carries on thinking when she's on the train platform

Hat, earrings

Mid shot A shot behind Jodie looking at the platform

Top, hat, earrings

POV Shot of the tracks N/A

Close up To show her facial expression to how she is feeling about suicide (confusion)

Hat, earrings

Shot list


POV Shot of the train tracks N/A

Establish shot Shot of the train approaching N/A

Close up To show how she is feeling before she commits suicide

Hat, earrings

Establish shot Of the tracks N/A

Establish shot A shot of the train beside Jodie Top, hat, earrings

Date Time Peopleattended

Agenda (points to discuss)

Targets Due date/deadline

Notes

21/2/13 2pm-8pm Whole group Discuss the preliminary

Did the storyboard, script, short list

25/2/13

25/2/13 3.20pm Whole group Discussed ideas for our opening sequence

Had to put together a strong idea

1/3/13

26/3/13 11am Monae, Jodie and Pam

Discussed more ideas and putting it together

Had a clearer idea.

1/3/13 Monae and Amy further discussed.

1/3/13 3.20-4.30pm Monae and Ms Connell

Discussed everyone’s ideas.

Change of idea.Change of storyline.

Discussed with everyone in group

Group meeting record

Date Time Peopleattended

Agenda Targets Due date/deadline

Notes

4/3/13 10.40am The group Cleared upthe idea of the opening sequence

Had the fullidea of the opening sequence

5/3/13 9.50am The group Discussedthe timeline (planning)

Inputs onthe timeline and backup plan

8/3/13

6/3/13 3.30pm Monae,Jodie, Amy

Discussed the storyboard,script

Finished storyboard and script

8/3/13 Went through this with Pam

Group meeting record continued

Long term Planning

Long term Planning

Long term Planning

Short Term planning

Day & time Filming what scene? Travel How will you get there?

Equipment/costume/propschecklist (what do you need to bring with you)

Sat Mar 9 - Filming all the train station scene

On bus Camera, tripod, ipad, costumes

Sun Mar 10 - Filming at Jodie's house On bus Camera, tripod, ipad, long mirror (in bedroom), computer, costumes, paper and pencil

Saturday 23 march

- Filming at Jodie’s house Bus Camera, tripod, iPad, costumes

Sunday 24 march

- Filming at the train station

Bus Camera, tripod, iPad, long mirror (in bedroom), computer, costumes, paper and pencil

Short Term planning

Day & time Filming what scene?

Travel How will you get there?

Equipment/costume/props checklist (what do you need to bring with you)

Sunday 7th April -Filming the train station scene in the morning-The computer scene-The friends scene as well

- On the bus to kg station then the train to Paddington then another train to Langley

Camera, tripod, iPads, computer, costumes

Thursday 11th April - Filming the dancing scene and beard scene

- On the 18 Camera, tripod, iPads, long mirror (in bedroom), computer, costumes

Entertainment & Humor

Draft 3 planning