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Recording Oral Feedback for Writing Assignments

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This is a presentation I gave at both the TESL Canada 2014 Conference in Regina, SK and also at the BC TEAL 2014 Conference in Richmond, BC.

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You will find the presentation slides here. Feel free to follow along

bit.ly/bcteal2014

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Using online tools to provide oral feedback on writing assignments

Nathan HallDouglas College

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Overview

● Theory

● Practice

● Problems

● Questions

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Study #1: ESOL students in NZ● 53 post-intermediate ESOL students● Mostly Chinese, but also from 11 other countries● Age range: 20s-50s with majority late 20s-early 30s● 16 weeks focusing on 4 macro skills● 3 treatment groups: written and oral, written only, and

limited feedback (quality / organization)● 4 written tasks each

Bitchener, Young, and Cameron (2005)

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Best practice“Not only did the study find that direct oral feedback in combination with direct written feedback had a greater effect than direct written feedback alone on improved accuracy over time, but it also found that the combined feedback option facilitated improvement in the more ‘‘treatable’’, rule-governed features (the past simple tense and the definite article) than in the less ‘‘treatable’’ feature (prepositions).”

Bitchener, Young, and Cameron (2005)

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Study #2: Distance learning MA● 14 MA distance learning students from Sheffield Harram

University● 1500 words essays - 18 essays total● 2 groups - switched after each essay● Questionnaire● Formative● Screencasting versus written feedback● 5 minute screencast / 35 minute writing

Edwards, Dujardin, and Williams (2012)

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The goal

“Methods which help to save time and meet the diverse needs of students, while still providing quality feedback to students could have value for professional practice.”

Edwards, Dujardin, and Williams (2012)

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Study #3 - Norwegian University● Used screencasting for feedback on writing, giving

instructions and messages.● 6 Subject areas: education, engineering, German

language, Gender studies, IT, Nursing● 111 individuals and 11 groups

Bitchener, Young, and Cameron (2005)

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Study #3 - Norwegian University● Provides clarity● Allowed for repetition● Groups could discuss● Saves time● Challenges teacher to be clearer● Long-term projects had biggest gain● Proximity to teacher / students

Bitchener, Young, and Cameron (2005)

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Reality unable to meet expectations

“Teachers wishing to offer precise and systematic feedback on their students’ written assignments face a challenging process due to the fact that both time and resources for giving feedback are limited, while students’ need for and expectations of feedback and assessment are usually high.”

Mathisen (2012)

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Inspiration and motivation

“(S)tudents signal the following quite clearly: video comments are regarded as being more precise and nuanced than written feedback, and as such give students a greater amount of inspiration and motivation when completing future academic work.”

Mathisen (2012)

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Making connections

“(L)earning dividends increase as do opportunities for processing feedback and achieving a closer relationship with the course teacher.”

Mathisen (2012)

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The solution

“Teachers point out the same experiences, emphasizing that this working form simplifies and increases the efficiency of working with feedback while at the same time allowing the opportunity to achieve increased levels of precision and quality.”

Mathisen (2012)

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Practice - Crocodoc Personal

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Practice - Screencast-O-Matic

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Problems - Ads

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Problems - Compatibility

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Problems - Accessibility

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Problems - Time

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Problems - Learning curve

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Q & A

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ReferencesBitchener, J., Young, S., and Cameron, D. (2005). The effect of different types of corrective feedback on ESL student writing. Journal of Second Language Writing, 14. 191-205. Retrieved from http://peoplelearn.homestead.com/MEdHOME/SPECIALISATIONS/Writing.feedback_on.writing.pdf

Edwards, K., Dujardin, A., and Williams, N. (2012). Screencast feedback for essays on a distance learning MA in Professional Communication: An action research project. Journal of Academic Writing, 2(1). 95-126. Retrieved from http://e-learning.coventry.ac.uk/ojs/index.php/joaw/article/view/62

Mathisen, P. (2012). Video feedback in higher education - A contribution to improving the quality of written feedback. Nordic Journal of Digital Literacy, 7(2). 97-116. Retrieved from http://petter.pmathisen.no/4file/filer/artikler/videofeedback%20in%20higher%20education%20petter%20mathisen%202012.pdf