P3- Magazine pages- Before and after feedback

Front Cover

Used the clipping mask tool to resolve this problem.

Feedback

Improvements

Made Smaller.

Main Image made brighter and bigger and teeth were whitened.

White strip made smaller.

Masthead changed.

Removed unnecessary cover lines.

Added main cover line/ name of band.

Double Page Spread

Feedback

Improvements Questions put in bold

Made bigger

More sweets in the background

Quotes fitted exactly inside the wrapper

Drop capital made a different colour