1ST DRAFT OF PROJECT

Examples of my production !

Promotional

Poster

• I tried to use a neutral colour

pallet to reflect my Degree show

!!

• Lines are the most repeated

shape used in my project , the

reinforcement of this should

drum in my theme for the

audience.

Teacher Feedback !!

Andrew said “ I think your design is too washed

out, you need to change or add something to

make it stand out and more bold”

After thinking about his feedback and not wanting

to comprise my colour scheme I decided with

(Andrew‟s help) that adding black strokes around

many aspects of my work will make it POP more .

– Improvements were made to make sure my project was

better and less likely fade into the background ……

AFTER

I think that the bold strokes really did help make my project

stand out and less „washed out‟ like before. I think if my project

was advertised in the street before hand people would have

just walked passed it. Now I feel like it stands a chance in being

noticed :)