Audience

feedbackConnor McCormack & Danny Laws

Messages

• We had sent the prototype of the video to a number of

people to see if there was any room for improvement in

our video, The overall comments where good although a

lot of people had an issue about the differences between

quality in the two performance scenes, mainly the

brightness between the two.

From the feedback here we can

see two people said the

lighting/brightness of Billy's

shots where not as good as those

compared to Jerome's, taking this

feedback into account we are

going to edit the footage we have

got to make the brightness and

lighting the same type as that

seen in Jerome's, as this fits in

with the rest of our footage.

Feedback from Mary also shows

us that we need to shorten some

of our longer clips to give it a

better music video look.

Video feedbackThe second type of feedback that we got was in the form of Video

feedback, in which we showed people our video and filmed there

response in person, we got a mix of people to do this to get the most

out of this type of feedback.

Out of this information most focused on the brightness of the video

again as a criticism, but a lot praised the narrative of our story as

being a strong point of our music video

The video can be viewed on the blog