Audience FeedbackJames Evans

This member of my target audience has described my strengths of my planning tasks are that it is very appealing and conventional due to the use of great detail on shots, locations props and the other technical areas. This shows that I should continue with this level of detail in my planning tasks.

I could improve by using a wider use of composition in shots for various scenes and use a wider variety of camera shots in my trailer to make it more conventional for my horror film.

The strengths of my planning tasks are shown here to be that the trailer is well thought out and everything is listed and detailed which makes it conventional for the horror genre.

To improve, this member of my target audience also thinks that composition of shots should be increasingly used in my planning. I will take this into account by considering composition of shots in the creation of my trailer.

The strengths outlined by this audience member are that I clearly show the range of scenes and types of shots that I will use in my trailer to make it conventional. Another strength outlined is that my test footage and location scouting shows clear research and a strong understanding of the genre and horror conventions. This means that I will continue to use the level of detail that I have in my previous planning tasks for the upcoming ones.

To improve, this audience member believes that I could add more detail to the script and include further dialogue between the characters to build tension.