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Contreras 1 Abraham Contreras Professor Sara Doan Engl 250 February 5, 2015 Home At Last by Dinaw Mengestu Dinaw Mengestu’s “Home At Last” is an essay about his personal identity as an immigrant from Ethiopia. After immigrating to the United States at two years old, Mengestu’s his family never quite settled down in one location. Due to his several transitions from city to city, Mengestu he begins to disassociate with any particular location (75). . In his essay, Mengestu uses personal experiences, first-person narrative, and imagery to connect to readers and project his message. Mengestu writes about his own personal experiences to be able to provide the reader with intimate knowledge about himself. What other way to connect with readers than to write about your personal life. Making the reader connect to the context then allows for the author to appeal to their emotions. He begins appealing to emotions of sympathy and compassion by describing his childhood living with his parents. Mengestu describes how his

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Contreras 1

Abraham Contreras

Professor Sara Doan

Engl 250

February 5, 2015

Home At Last by Dinaw Mengestu

Dinaw Mengestu’s “Home At Last” is an essay about his personal identity as an

immigrant from Ethiopia. After immigrating to the United States at two years old, Mengestu’shis

family never quite settled down in one location. Due to his several transitions from city to city,

Mengestuhe begins to disassociate with any particular location (75).. In his essay, Mengestu uses

personal experiences, first-person narrative, and imagery to connect to readers and project his

message.

Mengestu writes about his own personal experiences to be able to provide the reader with

intimate knowledge about himself. What other way to connect with readers than to write about

your personal life. Making the reader connect to the context then allows for the author to appeal

to their emotions. He begins appealing to emotions of sympathy and compassion by describing

his childhood living with his parents. Mengestu describes how his parents are “tied and lost to

their jobs,” (76) and how he learns “what it meant to lose and be alone,” (76). Towards the

second half of the essay the mood changes and Mengestu describes his transition to Brooklyn.

The tone changes into a more intimate, and optimistic tone from which he describes his

adaptations into a new community. It is these kind of personal experiences that make his writing

very intimate. The reader either relates to his life, or sympathizes with it.writes about his

experiences, which gives him enough ethos to make his point valid or realistic, and it also helps

Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Keep using Mengestu’s last name
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
How so?
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
How so? Give me some reasons why before you move on.
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Better!
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appealing to other people’s emotions and helps connect the reader to his writing in a more

personal and emotional way using imagery.

Writing in first-person is a technique that Mengestu uses to share his story. He creates the

sense that he is speaking to the reader directly, although he never uses the term “you.” He

accomplishes this by using a first-person narrative as if sharing his story. Giving the sense that

he is sharing his story, implies that he is sharing it with someone other than himself, perhaps the

reader. , Towards the end he shares some of the things he admires about Kensington saying,

“What I admired and about Kensington, was the assertion that we can rebuild and remake

ourselves and our communities over and over again,” (79). In this sentence, Mengestu is clearly

sharing his thoughts either with himself or with someone else. When Mengestu talks about

rebuilding and remaking, he seems to address the people living in Kensington, and anyone else

that might have gone through similar experiences. The first-person narrative gives him the ability

to share his thoughts so personally and me think makes he it seem as if he was sharing them with

the is targeting reader.

While describing his personal experiences, Mengestu uses imagery to illustrate his

newfound neighborhood. He places the images of “a Latin American restaurant and grocery

store, a Chinese fish market, a Halal butcher shop, followed by a series of Pakistani and

Bangladeshi takeout restaurants” (77), in our heads, giving the reader the illusion of actually

making their way to the F train. He uses reoccurring images of immigrants, who have recreated

their lives in Kensington, and his interaction with them as a way to illustrate the new community,

which he has now become a part of. Immigrants such as his landlord’s father, “and old gray-

haired Chinese immigrant who spoke no English” (77) or “the men behind the counters of the

Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
How could adding a transition here strengthen your writing?
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
No “me.” YOU aren’t part of this analysis.
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Lots of ideas in this sentence. Tighten it up or divide it. I didn’t realize this was your thesis until the end of the sentence.
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Bangladeshi takeout places that knew him by sight” (77). The vivifying illustrations of the

community elucidate the fact that he has found a home at last.

Mengestu’s point of view, emotional appeal, and use of imagery are the basis for his

claim, that no matter where you come from, anyone can find a home somewhere, even if it just is

a corner on Brooklyn. If it were not have been told in first person and if it were not based on his

own life, Mengestu’s claim would have made less of an impact on the reader. His vivid imagery

helps appeal to the emotions of the reader and shows the transition from getting to know

Kensington to becoming a part a community.

Work Cited

Mengestu, Dinaw. "Home At Last." Identity: A Reader for Writers. Ed. John Scenters-Zapico.

N.p.: Oxford UP, 2013. 74-80. Print.

Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Abraham, Your second and third paragraphs and your conclusion were very nice. Keep working to focus and organize your writing—really watch that you’re only including one main idea per paragraph and that you’re transitioning between ideas. Keep working!Ms. DoanContext: FairSubstance: GoodOrganization: FairStyle: GoodDelivery: Good B-
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Oxford is the publisher, so you should list that instead of “N.p.:”
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Keep using Mengestu’s last name.
Sara Doan, 03/02/15,
Good!